[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hint To My Next Fanfic After Beyjitzu
Spoiler (Click to View)
Dark Vs Light Relatives?

hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM

hold on will there be dual protagonists?

if so then please don't pull a hyuga

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hint To My Next Fanfic After Beyjitzu
Spoiler (Click to View)
Dark Vs Light Relatives?

hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?

Phi and Hyde will not be in this season, it'll be the most unique season I've ever made!

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?

Phi and Hyde will not be in this season, it'll be the most unique season I've ever made!

bruh i dont wanna wait anymore i want it to be here right now lol

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 5:04 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: hold on will there be dual protagonists?

if so then please don't pull a hyuga

Yes, that's all the information I'm giving you (I'm a Hiakru fan so, I'll try my best)

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 5:04 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?

Phi and Hyde will not be in this season, it'll be the most unique season I've ever made!

so is a new bladed comes into place to stop all darkness and does not want to make friends on the way but ends up doing so this is the ????

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 5:05 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:03 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Phi and Hyde will not be in this season, it'll be the most unique season I've ever made!

bruh i dont wanna wait anymore i want it to be here right now lol

Beyjitzu has to finish first, I can't handle 3 fanfics lol

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 5:05 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: hold on will there be dual protagonists?

if so then please don't pull a hyuga

Yes, that's all the information I'm giving you (I'm a Hiakru fan so, I'll try my best)

good to know good to know

i'll give you a tip: make their power levels very, very similar if not then make them the same. it will start feeling a bit like sparking if you don't

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 30, 2021 5:11 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hint To My Next Fanfic After Beyjitzu
Spoiler (Click to View)
Dark Vs Light Relatives?

hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?

*Coff coff* Artemis and Apollo are light and darkness, probably isn't the right answer but that's my guess *coff coff*

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 5:15 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:11 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: hmm Hydee has a good brother? Or phi has a good brother?
*Coff coff* Artemis and Apollo are light and darkness, probably isn't the right answer but that's my guess *coff coff*

Dang I keep forgetting about Greek mythology

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:11 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: *Coff coff* Artemis and Apollo are light and darkness, probably isn't the right answer but that's my guess *coff coff*

Dang I keep forgetting about Greek mythology

Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 5:20 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Dang I keep forgetting about Greek mythology
Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

Well atleast I found the perfect beybade name for a future fan fic

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 5:26 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Dang I keep forgetting about Greek mythology
Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

same, everytime i need a character i look on greek mythology then norse and then roman

but anyway i cant wait for Long Live The King!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 5:27 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:26 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

same, everytime i need a character i look on greek mythology then norse and then roman

but anyway i cant wait for Long Live The King!

Wait that chapter already came out....

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 30, 2021 6:32 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Dang I keep forgetting about Greek mythology
Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

Then how about a team called “Bladers of Olympus”.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 6:34 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 6:32 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Greek mythology is the only one that sticks into my head. Plus we already had Artemis and Apollo on beyblade

Then how about a team called “Bladers of Olympus”.

hmmmm that would be splendid yes

we can all make oc's of ourselves with greek mythology beys yes

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 6:40 PM

Deleated Post

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 6:44 PM

yo UnseenBurst do you think next chapter will be today, tomorrow, or even longer than that? not trying to rush

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 6:46 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 6:44 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo UnseenBurst do you think next chapter will be today, tomorrow, or even longer than that? not trying to rush

Later today, I'm working on it right now so it should be finished in about an hour but I can guarantee unless something comes up it'll be here by 3:00 PM EST

Chapter 35 is out. @"Hollowmind8" @"BladeKingX" LegendJustice you might wanna read this.

Spoiler (Click to View)

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 30, 2021 9:44 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 6:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 6:44 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo UnseenBurst do you think next chapter will be today, tomorrow, or even longer than that? not trying to rush

Later today, I'm working on it right now so it should be finished in about an hour but I can guarantee unless something comes up it'll be here by 3:00 PM EST

Chapter 35 is out. "Hollowmind8" "BladeKingX" "LegendJustice" you might wanna read this.

Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 35
The Hydro Nova!

~That Morning~

(I wake up)

Me: Well, time to start the day!

(five Crew Member’s run-up to me)

1# Crew Member: Need any help brushing?

5# Crew Member: Maybe he needs breakfast made!

Me: Seriously, I’m eleven, I can handle this stuff, don’t baby me!

#4 Crew Member: Yes, Master World Champion!

Me: Just call me Percy.

#3 Crew Member: Of course Master Percy!

(I run off)

All Crew Members: Master Percy, wait!

~In The Cafetera~

Hiacan: Wonder what’s taking Percy so long?

Raina: You think he got into trouble?

Pam: World Champion or not, he’s still Percy!

(I burst through the door)

All: *Gasps*

Me: Leave me alone!

All Crew Members: Let us comb your hair!

Me: Don’t touch my hair!!

Wakiya: Everyone please! Look, I don’t think he needs or wants your help, go help the captain out in the control room!

All Crew Members: Yes sir!

(The Crew Members runoff)

Aiden: So how was your morning World Champ!

Me: It was fine, other than those guys asking me if they can be my butler.

Valt: Just wait till we get back on the ground, You’ll get completely mobbed!

Me: I can’t wait.

Raina: So, who do you wanna battle?!

Me: The toughest bladers out there! To prove I’m worthy of being World Champion!!

Aiden: You’ve already proven yourself against Valt, do you really need to do it again?

Me: Yeah, I’ve gotta keep my world dominance!

Valt: *Laughs*

Raina: Overconfident much?

Me: It’s called having skills!

Wakiya: Percy, your first challenger is ready for you!

Me: Who is it?

Wakiya: Baabar Blakenstone!

Aiden: Looks like you're up against him!

Me: Don’t worry Aiden, I’ll get revenge for you!

Raina: You better get him for me too!

Me: I’ll defeat him fair and square with pie at two!

Hiacan: I’m not even gonna ask.

Pam: It’s better not to know.

Me: Who wants to practice!

Aiden: It’s time I finally beat you!

~At The Front Of The Airship~

Raina: First battle!

Aiden: I’ll finally beat you!

Me: Kid, you're messing with the World Champion!

Raina: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Aiden: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Aiden pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Aiden: Take the center!

Me: Go Poseidon!!

(Ashindra takes the center while Poseidon speeds around the stadium)

Me: Hydro Strike!

Aiden: Block it, Noble Guard!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra, Ashindra blocks the attack)

Me: How about I hit you harder? Ultra Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon speeds up and slams into Ashindra, Ashindra gets shot up in the air)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Me: Speed up more!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and goes high in the air)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra in mid-air, Ashindra bursts)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Raina: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Percy!

Me: I told you I’d win!

Aiden: You got lucky!

Me: Wanna go again?

Aiden: Sure--

Wakiya: No time! Your match with Baabar is coming up soon!!

(Wakiya shoos everyone away, Baabar walks up to the stadium)

Wakiya: Hello everyone! Today, we’ll be hosting our new World Champion’s first title match! It’s Baabar Blakenstone Vs Perseus Nakano!

Crew Member: First battle!

Baabar: You're nothing, I’ll crush you on live TV in front of everyone!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

Wakiya: Baabar mocks our Champion but will he be mocking him after this match? Let’s watch and find out!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Balkesh take the center and don’t let anyone through!

Me: Show ‘em your speed, Poseidon!

(Balkesh takes the center, Poseidon hits it with a powerful flurry of strikes)

Wakiya: Our Champion shows off Poseidon’s attack power!

Baabar: Now, Balkesh!

(Six blue small tabs pop out of Balkesh, Balkesh become rounder)

Me: Hit it!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh gets sent up the stadium slope)

Baabar: Time to counter!

Me; I won’t let you!

(Poseidon speeds up on the motorized rim, Poseidon speeds off the rim)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Baabar: Corrupt Counter!!

(Poseidon and Balkesh slam into each other, Poseidon and Balkesh get sent flying out of the stadium)

Me/Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Wicked Balkesh with a ring-out finish! Baabar claims 1 point!

Wakiya: Incredible! Our World Champion has lost a point against the mysterious Baabar!

Baabar: I told you that you were weak!

Me: This is just the first battle, I’ll be taking you down right here and now!

Crew Member: Second battle!

Baabar (Thoughts): I’ve gotta launch harder to up my defense! I’ll destroy this so-called World Champion!!

Me (Thoughts): If I pull off a powerful enough launch, I should be able to burst Balkesh, he’s going down hard!

Crew Member; Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh takes the center but starts wobbling)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Me: Go!

(Poseidon glows brightly and turns into a raging fireball)

Me: Ultra Hydro Launch!!

(Poseidon hits Balkesh with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Baabar: Where did all this power come from?!

Wakiya: Poseidon puts the pedal to the metal and hits Balkesh with a powerful barrage of attacks!

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Not anymore! Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon leans on its driver and picks up speed, Poseidon slams into Balkesh and sends it flying out of the stadium)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!

Me: Yes!

Wakiya: Our World Champion has claimed a point from Baabar!

(My Resonance Aura turns into a blazing holocaust)

Baabar: You won once! That’s it, I’m so taking you down!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

(I smile as my Resonance Aura gets even wilder)

Wakiya: What are we waiting for? Let’s start the next battle!

Crew Member: Third battle!

(I attach Poseidon on my launcher, Poseidon turns into a raging blue fire)

Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, let’s take him down hard!

Baabar: You're a sorry excuse for a World Champion!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Take the center!

(My Resonance Aura blazes up into a raging Holocaust)

Me: Take ‘em down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball, Poseidon rapidly slams into Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes)

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Keep it up!

Wakiya: Poseidon continually hits Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes!

(Six small blue tabs pop out of Balkesh)

Baabar: Try getting through our defense now!

Me: With pleasure!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh with full force, Balkesh gets shot up in the air and bursts)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Perseus Nakano!

Me: I’m still the Champ!

Wakiya: Percy successfully defends his title and just won his first title match!

(Baabar walks up to me)

Baabar: Getting lucky won’t make you a good champion.

Me: good thing it wasn’t luck.

(Baabar walks away)

Raina: Nice win!

Aiden: I’m totally jealous!

Me (Thoughts): Looks like Aiger was right, having good friends will make you stronger.

Wakiya: Now it’s Oribe’s turn to battle Percy!

(Oribe walks up to me and gives me a note, Oribe walks away)

Me (Thoughts): “Meet me right here at exactly midnight”

~At Midnight~

Oribe: You're here.

Me: Tell me, why didn’t you just battle me then and there!

Oribe: Do you know how embarrassing it would be for Poseidon to break in front of everyone?

Me: *Gasp*

Oribe: You’ve unlocked something called The Hydro Blaze, it’s a special essence that comes out of a bey when you unlock true resonance! I need your Hydro Blaze, so I’ll break it out of you!

Me: There’s no way you're breaking Poseidon!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

(Oribe sets up a camera)

Me: What’s that for?

Oribe: When I destroy Poseidon, it’ll be sent to the WBBA making me the World Champion!

Me: I’ll never let someone like you become World Champion!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

Me: First battle! Ready? Set!

Me/Oribe: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!

(Me and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: I’m taking you down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball)

Oribe: I want that Hydro Blaze!

(Poseidon hits Overlord with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Me: Knock them down!

(Poseidon starts glowing brightly, Poseidon slams into Overlord)

Oribe: It’s time for my counterattack!

(Overlord speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: Keep going!

(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and speeds up)

Oribe: This is my chance!

(Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall, Poseidon cracks)

Me: Leave my friend alone!

(Poseidon speeds up and dodges Overlord)

Oribe: Vile Blaze!!

(Overlord slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: It’s time to end this!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds off)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Oribe: Vile Pulse!!

(Overlord blocks the move, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: No way! Hydro Geyser failed?!

Oribe: End this!

(Overlord glows brightly and turns into a purple raging fireball, Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall)

Me: No!

(Overlord starts sucking up Poseidon’s blaze, Poseidon starts cracking then bursts into fragments)

Me: *Gasps*

Oribe: Yes.

(I pass out)

Aiden (Muffled): What happened to him?

Raina (Muffled): Is he still alive?

(I get up)

Pam: Thank god.

Valt: Are you ok?

Me: Where is it?!

Hiacan: Where is what?

(I get up and start looking around frantically)

Me: Poseidon!

(Everyone goes quiet)

Me: Where is Poseidon!!

(I look down at the stadium and find Poseidon’s fragments)

Raina: It broke.

Pam: In a title match.

Me: You saw it?

Hiacan: Yeah, it’s all over the beynews, Oribe’s is the new World Champion.

(I pick up Poseidon’s fragments)

Me: No, no, no!!

(I burst into tears)

Me: Poseidon talk to me!

Poseidon (Corrupted Voice): It is over.

(I hold onto Poseidon tightly and start crying hard)

Me: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Don't worry Percy, there's 2 people who has experience with creating and upgrading things, you should be fine. (why am I talking to a fictional character? maybe I'm insane)

Anyways, nice chapter! (Depressed Percy arc begins)
Edit: sorry for mentioning you guys again

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 9:45 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 9:44 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 6:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Later today, I'm working on it right now so it should be finished in about an hour but I can guarantee unless something comes up it'll be here by 3:00 PM EST

Chapter 35 is out. @"Hollowmind8" @"BladeKingX" LegendJustice you might wanna read this.

Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 35
The Hydro Nova!

~That Morning~

(I wake up)

Me: Well, time to start the day!

(five Crew Member’s run-up to me)

1# Crew Member: Need any help brushing?

5# Crew Member: Maybe he needs breakfast made!

Me: Seriously, I’m eleven, I can handle this stuff, don’t baby me!

#4 Crew Member: Yes, Master World Champion!

Me: Just call me Percy.

#3 Crew Member: Of course Master Percy!

(I run off)

All Crew Members: Master Percy, wait!

~In The Cafetera~

Hiacan: Wonder what’s taking Percy so long?

Raina: You think he got into trouble?

Pam: World Champion or not, he’s still Percy!

(I burst through the door)

All: *Gasps*

Me: Leave me alone!

All Crew Members: Let us comb your hair!

Me: Don’t touch my hair!!

Wakiya: Everyone please! Look, I don’t think he needs or wants your help, go help the captain out in the control room!

All Crew Members: Yes sir!

(The Crew Members runoff)

Aiden: So how was your morning World Champ!

Me: It was fine, other than those guys asking me if they can be my butler.

Valt: Just wait till we get back on the ground, You’ll get completely mobbed!

Me: I can’t wait.

Raina: So, who do you wanna battle?!

Me: The toughest bladers out there! To prove I’m worthy of being World Champion!!

Aiden: You’ve already proven yourself against Valt, do you really need to do it again?

Me: Yeah, I’ve gotta keep my world dominance!

Valt: *Laughs*

Raina: Overconfident much?

Me: It’s called having skills!

Wakiya: Percy, your first challenger is ready for you!

Me: Who is it?

Wakiya: Baabar Blakenstone!

Aiden: Looks like you're up against him!

Me: Don’t worry Aiden, I’ll get revenge for you!

Raina: You better get him for me too!

Me: I’ll defeat him fair and square with pie at two!

Hiacan: I’m not even gonna ask.

Pam: It’s better not to know.

Me: Who wants to practice!

Aiden: It’s time I finally beat you!

~At The Front Of The Airship~

Raina: First battle!

Aiden: I’ll finally beat you!

Me: Kid, you're messing with the World Champion!

Raina: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Aiden: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Aiden pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Aiden: Take the center!

Me: Go Poseidon!!

(Ashindra takes the center while Poseidon speeds around the stadium)

Me: Hydro Strike!

Aiden: Block it, Noble Guard!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra, Ashindra blocks the attack)

Me: How about I hit you harder? Ultra Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon speeds up and slams into Ashindra, Ashindra gets shot up in the air)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Me: Speed up more!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and goes high in the air)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra in mid-air, Ashindra bursts)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Raina: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Percy!

Me: I told you I’d win!

Aiden: You got lucky!

Me: Wanna go again?

Aiden: Sure--

Wakiya: No time! Your match with Baabar is coming up soon!!

(Wakiya shoos everyone away, Baabar walks up to the stadium)

Wakiya: Hello everyone! Today, we’ll be hosting our new World Champion’s first title match! It’s Baabar Blakenstone Vs Perseus Nakano!

Crew Member: First battle!

Baabar: You're nothing, I’ll crush you on live TV in front of everyone!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

Wakiya: Baabar mocks our Champion but will he be mocking him after this match? Let’s watch and find out!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Balkesh take the center and don’t let anyone through!

Me: Show ‘em your speed, Poseidon!

(Balkesh takes the center, Poseidon hits it with a powerful flurry of strikes)

Wakiya: Our Champion shows off Poseidon’s attack power!

Baabar: Now, Balkesh!

(Six blue small tabs pop out of Balkesh, Balkesh become rounder)

Me: Hit it!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh gets sent up the stadium slope)

Baabar: Time to counter!

Me; I won’t let you!

(Poseidon speeds up on the motorized rim, Poseidon speeds off the rim)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Baabar: Corrupt Counter!!

(Poseidon and Balkesh slam into each other, Poseidon and Balkesh get sent flying out of the stadium)

Me/Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Wicked Balkesh with a ring-out finish! Baabar claims 1 point!

Wakiya: Incredible! Our World Champion has lost a point against the mysterious Baabar!

Baabar: I told you that you were weak!

Me: This is just the first battle, I’ll be taking you down right here and now!

Crew Member: Second battle!

Baabar (Thoughts): I’ve gotta launch harder to up my defense! I’ll destroy this so-called World Champion!!

Me (Thoughts): If I pull off a powerful enough launch, I should be able to burst Balkesh, he’s going down hard!

Crew Member; Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh takes the center but starts wobbling)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Me: Go!

(Poseidon glows brightly and turns into a raging fireball)

Me: Ultra Hydro Launch!!

(Poseidon hits Balkesh with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Baabar: Where did all this power come from?!

Wakiya: Poseidon puts the pedal to the metal and hits Balkesh with a powerful barrage of attacks!

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Not anymore! Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon leans on its driver and picks up speed, Poseidon slams into Balkesh and sends it flying out of the stadium)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!

Me: Yes!

Wakiya: Our World Champion has claimed a point from Baabar!

(My Resonance Aura turns into a blazing holocaust)

Baabar: You won once! That’s it, I’m so taking you down!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

(I smile as my Resonance Aura gets even wilder)

Wakiya: What are we waiting for? Let’s start the next battle!

Crew Member: Third battle!

(I attach Poseidon on my launcher, Poseidon turns into a raging blue fire)

Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, let’s take him down hard!

Baabar: You're a sorry excuse for a World Champion!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Take the center!

(My Resonance Aura blazes up into a raging Holocaust)

Me: Take ‘em down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball, Poseidon rapidly slams into Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes)

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Keep it up!

Wakiya: Poseidon continually hits Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes!

(Six small blue tabs pop out of Balkesh)

Baabar: Try getting through our defense now!

Me: With pleasure!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh with full force, Balkesh gets shot up in the air and bursts)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Perseus Nakano!

Me: I’m still the Champ!

Wakiya: Percy successfully defends his title and just won his first title match!

(Baabar walks up to me)

Baabar: Getting lucky won’t make you a good champion.

Me: good thing it wasn’t luck.

(Baabar walks away)

Raina: Nice win!

Aiden: I’m totally jealous!

Me (Thoughts): Looks like Aiger was right, having good friends will make you stronger.

Wakiya: Now it’s Oribe’s turn to battle Percy!

(Oribe walks up to me and gives me a note, Oribe walks away)

Me (Thoughts): “Meet me right here at exactly midnight”

~At Midnight~

Oribe: You're here.

Me: Tell me, why didn’t you just battle me then and there!

Oribe: Do you know how embarrassing it would be for Poseidon to break in front of everyone?

Me: *Gasp*

Oribe: You’ve unlocked something called The Hydro Blaze, it’s a special essence that comes out of a bey when you unlock true resonance! I need your Hydro Blaze, so I’ll break it out of you!

Me: There’s no way you're breaking Poseidon!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

(Oribe sets up a camera)

Me: What’s that for?

Oribe: When I destroy Poseidon, it’ll be sent to the WBBA making me the World Champion!

Me: I’ll never let someone like you become World Champion!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

Me: First battle! Ready? Set!

Me/Oribe: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!

(Me and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: I’m taking you down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball)

Oribe: I want that Hydro Blaze!

(Poseidon hits Overlord with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Me: Knock them down!

(Poseidon starts glowing brightly, Poseidon slams into Overlord)

Oribe: It’s time for my counterattack!

(Overlord speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: Keep going!

(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and speeds up)

Oribe: This is my chance!

(Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall, Poseidon cracks)

Me: Leave my friend alone!

(Poseidon speeds up and dodges Overlord)

Oribe: Vile Blaze!!

(Overlord slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: It’s time to end this!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds off)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Oribe: Vile Pulse!!

(Overlord blocks the move, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: No way! Hydro Geyser failed?!

Oribe: End this!

(Overlord glows brightly and turns into a purple raging fireball, Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall)

Me: No!

(Overlord starts sucking up Poseidon’s blaze, Poseidon starts cracking then bursts into fragments)

Me: *Gasps*

Oribe: Yes.

(I pass out)

Aiden (Muffled): What happened to him?

Raina (Muffled): Is he still alive?

(I get up)

Pam: Thank god.

Valt: Are you ok?

Me: Where is it?!

Hiacan: Where is what?

(I get up and start looking around frantically)

Me: Poseidon!

(Everyone goes quiet)

Me: Where is Poseidon!!

(I look down at the stadium and find Poseidon’s fragments)

Raina: It broke.

Pam: In a title match.

Me: You saw it?

Hiacan: Yeah, it’s all over the beynews, Oribe’s is the new World Champion.

(I pick up Poseidon’s fragments)

Me: No, no, no!!

(I burst into tears)

Me: Poseidon talk to me!

Poseidon (Corrupted Voice): It is over.

(I hold onto Poseidon tightly and start crying hard)

Me: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Don't worry Percy, there's 2 people who has experience with creating and upgrading things, you should be fine. (why am I talking to a fictional character? maybe I'm insane)

Anyways, nice chapter! (Depressed Percy arc begins)

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 30, 2021 10:01 PM

(Jul. 30, 2021 6:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021 6:44 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo UnseenBurst do you think next chapter will be today, tomorrow, or even longer than that? not trying to rush

Later today, I'm working on it right now so it should be finished in about an hour but I can guarantee unless something comes up it'll be here by 3:00 PM EST

Chapter 35 is out. @"Hollowmind8" @"BladeKingX" LegendJustice you might wanna read this.

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Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 35
The Hydro Nova!

~That Morning~

(I wake up)

Me: Well, time to start the day!

(five Crew Member’s run-up to me)

1# Crew Member: Need any help brushing?

5# Crew Member: Maybe he needs breakfast made!

Me: Seriously, I’m eleven, I can handle this stuff, don’t baby me!

#4 Crew Member: Yes, Master World Champion!

Me: Just call me Percy.

#3 Crew Member: Of course Master Percy!

(I run off)

All Crew Members: Master Percy, wait!

~In The Cafetera~

Hiacan: Wonder what’s taking Percy so long?

Raina: You think he got into trouble?

Pam: World Champion or not, he’s still Percy!

(I burst through the door)

All: *Gasps*

Me: Leave me alone!

All Crew Members: Let us comb your hair!

Me: Don’t touch my hair!!

Wakiya: Everyone please! Look, I don’t think he needs or wants your help, go help the captain out in the control room!

All Crew Members: Yes sir!

(The Crew Members runoff)

Aiden: So how was your morning World Champ!

Me: It was fine, other than those guys asking me if they can be my butler.

Valt: Just wait till we get back on the ground, You’ll get completely mobbed!

Me: I can’t wait.

Raina: So, who do you wanna battle?!

Me: The toughest bladers out there! To prove I’m worthy of being World Champion!!

Aiden: You’ve already proven yourself against Valt, do you really need to do it again?

Me: Yeah, I’ve gotta keep my world dominance!

Valt: *Laughs*

Raina: Overconfident much?

Me: It’s called having skills!

Wakiya: Percy, your first challenger is ready for you!

Me: Who is it?

Wakiya: Baabar Blakenstone!

Aiden: Looks like you're up against him!

Me: Don’t worry Aiden, I’ll get revenge for you!

Raina: You better get him for me too!

Me: I’ll defeat him fair and square with pie at two!

Hiacan: I’m not even gonna ask.

Pam: It’s better not to know.

Me: Who wants to practice!

Aiden: It’s time I finally beat you!

~At The Front Of The Airship~

Raina: First battle!

Aiden: I’ll finally beat you!

Me: Kid, you're messing with the World Champion!

Raina: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Aiden: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Aiden pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Aiden: Take the center!

Me: Go Poseidon!!

(Ashindra takes the center while Poseidon speeds around the stadium)

Me: Hydro Strike!

Aiden: Block it, Noble Guard!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra, Ashindra blocks the attack)

Me: How about I hit you harder? Ultra Hydro Strike!!

(Poseidon speeds up and slams into Ashindra, Ashindra gets shot up in the air)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Me: Speed up more!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and goes high in the air)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Ashindra in mid-air, Ashindra bursts)

Aiden: *Gasps*

Raina: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Percy!

Me: I told you I’d win!

Aiden: You got lucky!

Me: Wanna go again?

Aiden: Sure--

Wakiya: No time! Your match with Baabar is coming up soon!!

(Wakiya shoos everyone away, Baabar walks up to the stadium)

Wakiya: Hello everyone! Today, we’ll be hosting our new World Champion’s first title match! It’s Baabar Blakenstone Vs Perseus Nakano!

Crew Member: First battle!

Baabar: You're nothing, I’ll crush you on live TV in front of everyone!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

Wakiya: Baabar mocks our Champion but will he be mocking him after this match? Let’s watch and find out!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Balkesh take the center and don’t let anyone through!

Me: Show ‘em your speed, Poseidon!

(Balkesh takes the center, Poseidon hits it with a powerful flurry of strikes)

Wakiya: Our Champion shows off Poseidon’s attack power!

Baabar: Now, Balkesh!

(Six blue small tabs pop out of Balkesh, Balkesh become rounder)

Me: Hit it!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh gets sent up the stadium slope)

Baabar: Time to counter!

Me; I won’t let you!

(Poseidon speeds up on the motorized rim, Poseidon speeds off the rim)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Baabar: Corrupt Counter!!

(Poseidon and Balkesh slam into each other, Poseidon and Balkesh get sent flying out of the stadium)

Me/Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Wicked Balkesh with a ring-out finish! Baabar claims 1 point!

Wakiya: Incredible! Our World Champion has lost a point against the mysterious Baabar!

Baabar: I told you that you were weak!

Me: This is just the first battle, I’ll be taking you down right here and now!

Crew Member: Second battle!

Baabar (Thoughts): I’ve gotta launch harder to up my defense! I’ll destroy this so-called World Champion!!

Me (Thoughts): If I pull off a powerful enough launch, I should be able to burst Balkesh, he’s going down hard!

Crew Member; Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: Go Poseidon!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh, Balkesh takes the center but starts wobbling)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Me: Go!

(Poseidon glows brightly and turns into a raging fireball)

Me: Ultra Hydro Launch!!

(Poseidon hits Balkesh with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Baabar: Where did all this power come from?!

Wakiya: Poseidon puts the pedal to the metal and hits Balkesh with a powerful barrage of attacks!

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Not anymore! Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon leans on its driver and picks up speed, Poseidon slams into Balkesh and sends it flying out of the stadium)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a ring-out finish! Perseus Nakano claims 1 point!

Me: Yes!

Wakiya: Our World Champion has claimed a point from Baabar!

(My Resonance Aura turns into a blazing holocaust)

Baabar: You won once! That’s it, I’m so taking you down!

Me: I’d like to see you try!

(I smile as my Resonance Aura gets even wilder)

Wakiya: What are we waiting for? Let’s start the next battle!

Crew Member: Third battle!

(I attach Poseidon on my launcher, Poseidon turns into a raging blue fire)

Me (Thoughts): Poseidon, let’s take him down hard!

Baabar: You're a sorry excuse for a World Champion!

Crew Member: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Baabar: Let it… rip!!

(Me and Baabar pull off mega-powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Baabar: Take the center!

(My Resonance Aura blazes up into a raging Holocaust)

Me: Take ‘em down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball, Poseidon rapidly slams into Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes)

Baabar: Hang in there!

Me: Keep it up!

Wakiya: Poseidon continually hits Balkesh with a barrage of powerful strikes!

(Six small blue tabs pop out of Balkesh)

Baabar: Try getting through our defense now!

Me: With pleasure!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds up)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

(Poseidon slams into Balkesh with full force, Balkesh gets shot up in the air and bursts)

Baabar: *Gasps*

Crew Member: It’s Hydro Poseidon with a burst finish! The winner is Perseus Nakano!

Me: I’m still the Champ!

Wakiya: Percy successfully defends his title and just won his first title match!

(Baabar walks up to me)

Baabar: Getting lucky won’t make you a good champion.

Me: good thing it wasn’t luck.

(Baabar walks away)

Raina: Nice win!

Aiden: I’m totally jealous!

Me (Thoughts): Looks like Aiger was right, having good friends will make you stronger.

Wakiya: Now it’s Oribe’s turn to battle Percy!

(Oribe walks up to me and gives me a note, Oribe walks away)

Me (Thoughts): “Meet me right here at exactly midnight”

~At Midnight~

Oribe: You're here.

Me: Tell me, why didn’t you just battle me then and there!

Oribe: Do you know how embarrassing it would be for Poseidon to break in front of everyone?

Me: *Gasp*

Oribe: You’ve unlocked something called The Hydro Blaze, it’s a special essence that comes out of a bey when you unlock true resonance! I need your Hydro Blaze, so I’ll break it out of you!

Me: There’s no way you're breaking Poseidon!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

(Oribe sets up a camera)

Me: What’s that for?

Oribe: When I destroy Poseidon, it’ll be sent to the WBBA making me the World Champion!

Me: I’ll never let someone like you become World Champion!

Oribe: We’ll see about that!

Me: First battle! Ready? Set!

Me/Oribe: 3! 2! 1! Let it… rip!!

(Me and Oribe pull off powerful Beyjitzu Launches)

Me: I’m taking you down!

(Poseidon turns into a raging blue fireball)

Oribe: I want that Hydro Blaze!

(Poseidon hits Overlord with a powerful flurry of attacks)

Me: Knock them down!

(Poseidon starts glowing brightly, Poseidon slams into Overlord)

Oribe: It’s time for my counterattack!

(Overlord speeds up and slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: Keep going!

(Poseidon catches onto the stadium rim and speeds up)

Oribe: This is my chance!

(Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall, Poseidon cracks)

Me: Leave my friend alone!

(Poseidon speeds up and dodges Overlord)

Oribe: Vile Blaze!!

(Overlord slams into Poseidon, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: It’s time to end this!

(Poseidon catches onto the motorized rim and speeds off)

Me: Ultra Hydro Geyser!!

Oribe: Vile Pulse!!

(Overlord blocks the move, Poseidon gets sent flying)

Me: No way! Hydro Geyser failed?!

Oribe: End this!

(Overlord glows brightly and turns into a purple raging fireball, Overlord starts crushing Poseidon into the wall)

Me: No!

(Overlord starts sucking up Poseidon’s blaze, Poseidon starts cracking then bursts into fragments)

Me: *Gasps*

Oribe: Yes.

(I pass out)

Aiden (Muffled): What happened to him?

Raina (Muffled): Is he still alive?

(I get up)

Pam: Thank god.

Valt: Are you ok?

Me: Where is it?!

Hiacan: Where is what?

(I get up and start looking around frantically)

Me: Poseidon!

(Everyone goes quiet)

Me: Where is Poseidon!!

(I look down at the stadium and find Poseidon’s fragments)

Raina: It broke.

Pam: In a title match.

Me: You saw it?

Hiacan: Yeah, it’s all over the beynews, Oribe’s is the new World Champion.

(I pick up Poseidon’s fragments)

Me: No, no, no!!

(I burst into tears)

Me: Poseidon talk to me!

Poseidon (Corrupted Voice): It is over.

(I hold onto Poseidon tightly and start crying hard)

Me: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!

lost to cranberries

press F to pay respects

Hydro Poseidon 2021 - 2021

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 30, 2021 10:21 PM

Let's all pay our respects to Posieden 2021 - 2021

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 30, 2021 10:22 PM

F's in the chat.

Tbf it was the first Beyjitzu bey and never got an evolution (afaik), only upgrades. So It's not just Oribe's plot armor.

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

UnseenBurst · Jul. 30, 2021 10:27 PM

We are gathered here today to celebrate the best bey that ever was created, Hydro Poseidon, he was a friend and companion, and dare I say, Family, he was slain at the hands of Vile Overlord crushing it against the wall and broke. Poseidon always gave guidance and was a good friend to us all, he taught us all the true meaning of Beyblade. *Cries*

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.