[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade: Angels {~A Dark Beyblade Story~}

Name: Tabito Saduko

Gender: Male

Age: 13

Height: 5’ 9”

Hair Color: White with black tips

Eye Color: Red (Right) Silver (Left)

Beyblade Name: Chromatic Tarragon Nexus+ Xtend X -Star

Chromatic Tarragon: Six wings that surround a dragon head in the middle

Nexus+: Nexus with less gap between the disk and layer

Xtend X: Xtend+ with a metal cap and 6 modes (Attack, Defense, Stamina, Off-Balanced Attack, Ball defense, and Free spin stamina)

-Star: A six pointed metal ring

Beyblade Type: Balance

Appearance: Tall for his age with a red T shirt that has a dragon skeleton on it he wears khaki cargo shorts

Personality: Thinks most everything is boring and doesn’t think anyone should battle him. When he hits a challenge he gets mad, but if you beat him you gain his undying respect

Special Moves: Chromatic Wing! Chromatic Arc! Rainbow Shoot! Tarragon Torture! Chromatic Sword! X Blade! X Lance Breaker!
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Parts: (if new parts, please describe them)

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Count this one in then the other one

Name: Galaxy Nebula

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Height: 5’6

Hair Color: Blue

Eye Color: Yellow

Layer: Valiant

Beyblade Name: Valiant Storm

Metal Ring: Tornado

Disc: Annihialtion

Driver: Break

Beyblade Type: Balance

Appearance: A shadow of darkness rising, with phantom claws, and haunts the other beyblade

Personality: Since he was a child he was trying to become the Shadow King to master Shadow-Turbo

Special Moves: Valiant Tornado, Valiant Cosmic, Valiant Typhoon, Valiant Thunder, Shadow Awakening, Valient Gravity, Armor Diving Crush, Storm Shoot, and Ultimate Diving Superior Armor Slashing Crush


Bey Description: Valient Storm is a dual spinning balance type that has a armor which is the metal ring it has two modes tornado mode and stablize mode. If the owner uses Valient Cosmic the armor will come off and start hitting between the opponents bey and the bey that the armor comes from. After that the opponents bey will hit the wall and the armor follows the bey and hits it. 1. Causing it to have a over finish. 2. Bursting it. 3. Before bursting the bey breaks. The disc Annihilation adds weight to the bey and making it stable in stabilize mode. The driver Break is like the Venture driver but the rubber is shorter and the driver has 3 modes, Diving Crush Mode, Tornado Mode, and Gravity Mode.

(Apr. 21, 2021  7:42 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Rampage Longinus Drake Jolt'. -Devastate
Phantom Fafnir Ratchet Absorb -Drain
Havoc Satan Hurricane Roller -Hell
Soul Deathscyther 0Vortex Jaggy' -Scythe

This is my version: 

Valient Storm Annihilation Break  -Tornado

Phantom Lucifer Darkness Venture  - Power

Magnet Spriggan Rising Zeta’  - Magnum

Inferno Hyperion Fire Xc’  - Lava

Blaze Helios Extreme Zone’  - Infernal

Tornado Ragnaruk Wheel Never  - Typhoon

Armor Xcalibur 0Wall Sword  - Blade

King Valkyrie Dagger Power  - Steel

Devil Satan Hell Loop’  - Abyss

Chaos Diabolos 4Lift Bullet  - Demon

Terrify Diabolos Scare Bullet  - Misery
(Apr. 29, 2021  12:37 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Parts: (if new parts, please describe them)

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Count this one in then the other one

Name: Galaxy Nebula

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Height: 5’6

Hair Color: Blue

Eye Color: Yellow

Layer: Valiant

Beyblade Name: Valiant Storm

Metal Ring: Tornado

Disc: Annihialtion

Driver: Break

Beyblade Type: Balance

Appearance: A shadow of darkness rising, with phantom claws, and haunts the other beyblade

Personality: Since he was a child he was trying to become the Shadow King to master Shadow-Turbo and then felt power to break every bey ever made

Special Moves: Valiant Tornado, Valiant Cosmic, Valiant Typhoon, Valiant Thunder, Shadow Awakening, Valient Gravity, Armor Diving Crush, Storm Shoot, and Ultimate Diving Superior Armor Slashing Crush


Bey Description: Valient Storm is a dual spinning balance type that has a armor which is the metal ring it has two modes tornado mode and stablize mode. If the owner uses Valient Cosmic the armor will come off and start hitting between the opponents bey and the bey that the armor comes from. After that the opponents bey will hit the wall and the armor follows the bey and hits it. 1. Causing it to have a over finish. 2. Bursting it. 3. Before bursting the bey breaks. The disc Annihilation adds weight to the bey and making it stable in stabilize mode. The driver Break is like the Venture driver but the rubber is shorter and the driver has 3 modes, Diving Crush Mode, Tornado Mode, and Gravity Mode.


1. If you have already entered a character then you are not allowed to enter any more.
2. While this story will lean towards the Supernatural, The character and its whole dark shadow thing is just way too unrealistic for the stories own good.
3. If this is supposed to be a villain, bear in mind I already have a Main Villain planned and the Main Character has villainous motifs so 2 is enough.
I said to count the one that i just posted and take out the other one and my chracter is a secret chracter and the 3rd thing I’ll edit the thing to say since he was a child he wanted to become the shadow king for shadow-turbo
I'm excited to see who wins best of luck to all!
Nice ZionandBirddo
Everyones entry has been added to the opening post
I want to join lmao.
My character is shun/Emilia Kurenai
Just read my fanfic(not the rewrite the old one for her description and abilities)
DeltaZakuro look
Akira Uzamara (our main villain)

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Eye Color: Red

Hair Color: Orange

Appearance: Akira is a tall and very buff blader with a red shirt, Black cape with a skull imprinted on the back, black pants and red boots. He also has a scar going his left eye.

Personality: Akira has no regard for anyone or anything. He is said to be the strongest and darkest blader to ever walk the planet. His extreme bond with his bey Abaddon makes him a fearsome and ruthless blader.

Bey: Fallen Abaddon 0Dagger αlter' -Armor

Special Moves: Fallen Slash, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno
(Apr. 29, 2021  2:58 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Akira Uzamara (our main villain)

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Eye Color: Red

Hair Color: Orange

Appearance: Akira is a tall and very buff blader with a red shirt, Black cape with a skull imprinted on the back, black pants and red boots. He also has a scar going his left eye.

Personality: Akira has no regard for anyone or anything. He is said to be the strongest and darkest blader to ever walk the planet. His extreme bond with his bey Abaddon makes him a fearsome and ruthless blader.

Bey: Fallen Abaddon 0Dagger αlter' -Armor

Special Moves: Fallen Slash, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno
For anyone who doesn’t know, Abbaddon is the king of an army of locusts and his name means Destruction and The Destroyer in Greek.
(Apr. 29, 2021  1:28 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: I said to count the one that i just posted and take out the other one and my chracter is a secret chracter and the 3rd thing I’ll edit the thing to say since he was a child he wanted to become the shadow king for shadow-turbo

Read this DeltaZakuro
Name: Nate Harris
Gender: Male
Age: 16 years old
Height: 5'7ft.
Hair Color: Reddish brown
Eye Color: Brown
Nationality: British
Beyblade: Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1 (GBw.Ss.MX-8)

Appearance:
Nate appears as a teenage boy of average height with reddish-brown hair, red eyes, and a pale skin complexion. He usually wears a white baseball cap, an orange shirt that's somewhat baggy, black wristbands, black jeans, and white sneakers.

Personality:
Nate is a somewhat smug person who can be quite self-centered and sarcastic sometimes but would still have the initiative to help someone and would even go so far as to cover up the fact he tried to help in order for people to think he is bad. He is also very intelligent and cunning, being able to trick his opponents with ease and also has an immense amount of focus which is seemingly unbreakable.

Beyblade Name:
Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1
Spin Direction:
Counter-Clockwise/Left-Spin
Beyblade Type:
Attack-type
Parts:
Dynamite Core - Beowulf
Beowulf is a left-spinning Dynamite Core that features a double-edged sword at the center which is being grasped by two monstrous hands resembling those of a wolf's claws. The sword is made from metal in order to increase the Core's weight for more attack power and to be slightly more stable due to it being at the center.
Armor - 1
1 is a circular armor with 3 sword tip-like protrusions on each side similar to that seen on the Kou Forge Disc. The protrusions stick out more, resulting in increased OWD for increased attack power.
Blade - Gallant
Gallant is a 4-winged ring, with blades going counter-clockwise which are aggressive and are sloped downwards. The wings are spring-loaded, resulting in a Bound Attack type of gimmick which increases its power while taking less damage. To add to that, it also has hard rubber to increase strength.
(Dynamite) Forge Disc - Slipstream
Slipstream is a circular and smooth Forge Disc with a shape similar to 0 in order to increase LAD and reduce the risk of scraping the floor in High Mode. In Low Mode, Slipstream reveals vents that lead to the other side in order to decrease air resistance and spin better.
Performance Tip - Metal Xtreme
Xtreme is an Attack-type tip akin to the Rubber Flat tip from the Metal Fight series. Unlike its other counterparts, it features a golden spring and a metal spring-pad in order to increase Burst Resistance.
(Apr. 29, 2021  2:48 PM)Longinox Wrote: Name: Nate Harris
Gender: Male
Age: 16 years old
Height: 5'7ft.
Hair Color: Reddish brown
Eye Color: Brown
Nationality: British
Beyblade: Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1 (GBw.Ss.MX-8)

Appearance:
Nate appears as a teenage boy of average height with reddish-brown hair, red eyes, and a pale skin complexion. He usually wears a white baseball cap, an orange shirt that's somewhat baggy, black wristbands, black jeans, and white sneakers.

Personality:
Nate is a somewhat smug person who can be quite self-centered and sarcastic sometimes but would still have the initiative to help someone and would even go so far as to cover up the fact he tried to help in order for people to think he is bad. He is also very intelligent and cunning, being able to trick his opponents with ease and also has an immense amount of focus which is seemingly unbreakable.

Beyblade Name:
Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1
Spin Direction:
Counter-Clockwise/Left-Spin
Beyblade Type:
Attack-type
Parts:
Dynamite Core - Beowulf
Beowulf is a left-spinning Dynamite Core that features a double-edged sword at the center which is being grasped by two monstrous hands resembling those of a wolf's claws. The sword is made from metal in order to increase the Core's weight for more attack power and to be slightly more stable due to it being at the center.
Armor - 1
1 is a circular armor with 3 sword tip-like protrusions on each side similar to that seen on the Kou Forge Disc. The protrusions stick out more, resulting in increased OWD for increased attack power.
Blade - Gallant
Gallant is a 4-winged ring, with blades going counter-clockwise which are aggressive and are sloped downwards. The wings are spring-loaded, resulting in a Bound Attack type of gimmick which increases its power while taking less damage. To add to that, it also has hard rubber to increase strength.
(Dynamite) Forge Disc - Slipstream
Slipstream is a circular and smooth Forge Disc with a shape similar to 0 in order to increase LAD and reduce the risk of scraping the floor in High Mode. In Low Mode, Slipstream reveals vents that lead to the other side in order to decrease air resistance and spin better.
Performance Tip - Metal Xtreme
Xtreme is an Attack-type tip akin to the Rubber Flat tip from the Metal Fight series. Unlike its other counterparts, it features a golden spring and a metal spring-pad in order to increase Burst Resistance.

Uh, in case you haven't noticed, this fic isn't using the Dynamite Layer System. DeltaZakuro came up with a custom one called the Angel Layer System, where the Layer is just Energy Layer + Metal Ring. I think he posted the submission form and examples of some Beys in the last couple pages, so you can check that out.
(Apr. 29, 2021  3:04 PM)PinkRose Wrote:
(Apr. 29, 2021  2:48 PM)Longinox Wrote: Name: Nate Harris
Gender: Male
Age: 16 years old
Height: 5'7ft.
Hair Color: Reddish brown
Eye Color: Brown
Nationality: British
Beyblade: Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1 (GBw.Ss.MX-8)

Appearance:
Nate appears as a teenage boy of average height with reddish-brown hair, red eyes, and a pale skin complexion. He usually wears a white baseball cap, an orange shirt that's somewhat baggy, black wristbands, black jeans, and white sneakers.

Personality:
Nate is a somewhat smug person who can be quite self-centered and sarcastic sometimes but would still have the initiative to help someone and would even go so far as to cover up the fact he tried to help in order for people to think he is bad. He is also very intelligent and cunning, being able to trick his opponents with ease and also has an immense amount of focus which is seemingly unbreakable.

Beyblade Name:
Gallant Beowulf Slipstream Metal Xtreme-1
Spin Direction:
Counter-Clockwise/Left-Spin
Beyblade Type:
Attack-type
Parts:
Dynamite Core - Beowulf
Beowulf is a left-spinning Dynamite Core that features a double-edged sword at the center which is being grasped by two monstrous hands resembling those of a wolf's claws. The sword is made from metal in order to increase the Core's weight for more attack power and to be slightly more stable due to it being at the center.
Armor - 1
1 is a circular armor with 3 sword tip-like protrusions on each side similar to that seen on the Kou Forge Disc. The protrusions stick out more, resulting in increased OWD for increased attack power.
Blade - Gallant
Gallant is a 4-winged ring, with blades going counter-clockwise which are aggressive and are sloped downwards. The wings are spring-loaded, resulting in a Bound Attack type of gimmick which increases its power while taking less damage. To add to that, it also has hard rubber to increase strength.
(Dynamite) Forge Disc - Slipstream
Slipstream is a circular and smooth Forge Disc with a shape similar to 0 in order to increase LAD and reduce the risk of scraping the floor in High Mode. In Low Mode, Slipstream reveals vents that lead to the other side in order to decrease air resistance and spin better.
Performance Tip - Metal Xtreme
Xtreme is an Attack-type tip akin to the Rubber Flat tip from the Metal Fight series. Unlike its other counterparts, it features a golden spring and a metal spring-pad in order to increase Burst Resistance.

Uh, in case you haven't noticed, this fic isn't using the Dynamite Layer System. DeltaZakuro came up with a custom one called the Angel Layer System, where the Layer is just Energy Layer + Metal Ring. I think he posted the submission form and examples of some Beys in the last couple pages, so you can check that out.

Ah bugger, I'm an idiot.
Selena Kurenai

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Vibrant Red

Appearance: Selena is a skinny and teenage girl with a medium sized chest and relatively thin legs. she wears a white shirt with a red stripe going horizontally down the middle and she wears a black jacket with a letter S on the right side and she wears blue jeans with small frays in them and red and white shoes.

Personality: Selena is often a calm and collected person and often is a very strategic blader and comes up with plans to take down her opponents, she enjoys trying to make friends as she is close friends with Vala and tries to be Alenas friend when she notices her trashing everyones beys.

Bey: King Spriggan.7Wall.Meteorite-Axe

Special Moves: King Slash, King Shoot, King Upper, Counter Break



ALSO

Fallen Abaddon.0D.αl' -Armor

Metal Ring: -Armor: a metal ring with 8 spikes that are filled with metal, increasing weight greatly

Fallen Abaddon Layer (FA): a layer that looks like the Sol metal wheel. the face is kinda like Lucifer1.

0Dagger Disk

αlter' Driver (αl'): a driver with a wide base like Octa and Charge but has a Fusion tip

User: Akira Uzamara

Special Moves: Fallen Momentum, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno
quote="DeltaZakuro" pid='1760571' dateline='1619746324']
Selena Kurenai

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Vibrant Red

Appearance: Selena is a skinny and teenage girl with a medium sized chest and relatively thin legs. she wears a white shirt with a red stripe going horizontally down the middle and she wears a black jacket with a letter S on the right side and she wears blue jeans with small frays in them and red and white shoes.

Personality: Selena is often a calm and collected person and often is a very strategic blader and comes up with plans to take down her opponents, she enjoys trying to make friends as she is close friends with Vala and tries to be Alenas friend when she notices her trashing everyones beys.

Bey: King Spriggan.7Wall.Meteorite-Axe

Special Moves: King Slash, King Shoot, King Upper, Counter Break



ALSO

Fallen Abaddon.0D.αl' -Armor

Metal Ring: -Armor: a metal ring with 8 spikes that are filled with metal, increasing weight greatly

Fallen Abaddon Layer (FA): a layer that looks like Venom but more jagged and rough. the face is kinda like Lucifer1.

0Dagger Disk

αlter' Driver (αl'): a driver with a wide base like Octa and Charge but has a Fusion tip

User: AKira Uzamara

Special Moves: Fallen Slash, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno
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(Apr. 30, 2021  2:37 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: quote="DeltaZakuro" pid='1760571' dateline='1619746324']
Selena Kurenai

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Vibrant Red

Appearance: Selena is a skinny and teenage girl with a medium sized chest and relatively thin legs. she wears a white shirt with a red stripe going horizontally down the middle and she wears a black jacket with a letter S on the right side and she wears blue jeans with small frays in them and red and white shoes.

Personality: Selena is often a calm and collected person and often is a very strategic blader and comes up with plans to take down her opponents, she enjoys trying to make friends as she is close friends with Vala and tries to be Alenas friend when she notices her trashing everyones beys.

Bey: King Spriggan.7Wall.Meteorite-Axe

Special Moves: King Slash, King Shoot, King Upper, Counter Break



ALSO

Fallen Abaddon.0D.αl' -Armor

Metal Ring: -Armor: a metal ring with 8 spikes that are filled with metal, increasing weight greatly

Fallen Abaddon Layer (FA): a layer that looks like Venom but more jagged and rough. the face is kinda like Lucifer1.

0Dagger Disk

αlter' Driver (αl'): a driver with a wide base like Octa and Charge but has a Fusion tip

User: AKira Uzamara

Special Moves: Fallen Slash, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno


Nice this has potental come check out my fan fic Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
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Uuuuh you are fully aware that advertising in someone's fanfic thread is annoying and innapropriate right? you should've done this in the "Beyblade Fanfics Club/Random Thoughts/Suggestion" thread ;-;
(Apr. 30, 2021  4:47 AM)tenma Wrote:
(Apr. 30, 2021  2:37 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: quote="DeltaZakuro" pid='1760571' dateline='1619746324']
Selena Kurenai

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Vibrant Red

Appearance: Selena is a skinny and teenage girl with a medium sized chest and relatively thin legs. she wears a white shirt with a red stripe going horizontally down the middle and she wears a black jacket with a letter S on the right side and she wears blue jeans with small frays in them and red and white shoes.

Personality: Selena is often a calm and collected person and often is a very strategic blader and comes up with plans to take down her opponents, she enjoys trying to make friends as she is close friends with Vala and tries to be Alenas friend when she notices her trashing everyones beys.

Bey: King Spriggan.7Wall.Meteorite-Axe

Special Moves: King Slash, King Shoot, King Upper, Counter Break



ALSO

Fallen Abaddon.0D.αl' -Armor

Metal Ring: -Armor: a metal ring with 8 spikes that are filled with metal, increasing weight greatly

Fallen Abaddon Layer (FA): a layer that looks like Venom but more jagged and rough. the face is kinda like Lucifer1.

0Dagger Disk

αlter' Driver (αl'): a driver with a wide base like Octa and Charge but has a Fusion tip

User: AKira Uzamara

Special Moves: Fallen Slash, Fallen Guard, Fallen Press, Fallen Inferno


Nice this has potental come check out my fan fic Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle


Uuuuh you are fully aware that advertising in someone's fanfic thread is annoying and innapropriate right? you should've done this in the "Beyblade Fanfics Club/Random Thoughts/Suggestion" thread ;-;

Didn't even quote me right either lmao
I don't know why but I thought Necro Gargoyle was too good an idea to pass up so I drew it, hope it'll help you visualize my bey, and I even drew Gaito in the corner, enjoy! https://i.imgur.com/3O9kgxn.jpg
(Apr. 30, 2021  12:36 AM)Longinox Wrote:
(Apr. 29, 2021  3:04 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Uh, in case you haven't noticed, this fic isn't using the Dynamite Layer System. DeltaZakuro came up with a custom one called the Angel Layer System, where the Layer is just Energy Layer + Metal Ring. I think he posted the submission form and examples of some Beys in the last couple pages, so you can check that out.

Ah bugger, I'm an idiot.

Fixed version of Nate's Beyblade:

Galant Notus Sting' Metal Rush -Slipstream (Attack-type/Right-spin)

Energy Layer:
Galant Notus - Galant Notus is a right-spinning Energy Layer of the Angel System which features two large wings that slope downwards akin to the Master Base in right-spin but even more aggressive and also sticks out more than usual. The wings are covered in rubber (the edge to be precise) which act as hooks to latch onto the opposing Bey and inflict more damage to them. Galant Notus features 3 strong teeth and one weak tooth.
Metal Ring:
Slipstream - Slipstream is a smooth and circular Ring that features slopes on them which improve aerodynamics in general and act like spoilers (from cars) in order to make the Beyblade faster. It is a very heavy ring and is one of the heaviest Rings amongst them.
Forge Disc:
Sting' - Sting' or Sting Dash is a direct upgrade to Sting which features a semi-circular perimeter covered by plastic and is separated into three layers (metal, upper spring level, lower spring level). Unlike its predecessor, there are two spring-loaded layers, with the horizontal layer acting like the original Sting Disc which creates a Bound Attack gimmick, and the vertical layer creating a Bound Defense similar to Deep Chaos.
Performance Tip - Metal Rush:
Metal Rush is an Attack-type Driver which takes the form of a rubber flat tip with six spikes that face counter-clockwise similar to R2F from the Metal Saga. It also features a golden spring lock and a metal spring pad to increase Burst Resistance.
Episode 2: Wipe Out! Anahels Carnage! Summary

Alena has a wild encounter with a rogue bey gang, The leader uses an Angel Bey like hers which gets Alena interested and rather fired up.
(May. 02, 2021  1:16 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 2: Wipe Out! Anahels Carnage! Summary

Alena has a wild encounter with a rogue bey gang, The leader uses an Angel Bey like hers which gets Alena interested and rather fired up.

Here's a bit of reference for how Nate acts:
A drawing of Hiroki I made! I hope no one minds if I post it here ;w; (since its a character for this contest 'w')

When will winners be announced?
(May. 03, 2021  2:55 AM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: When will winners be announced?

Contest ends May 14th and I'm gonna need at least a week or 2 afterwards to decide the winners.