[Fan Fiction]  BEYBLADE BURST: FLARE!!!

Ein 1 and Ein 2: Slapping each other
Aphmau: Slaps them
Hikaru and Hyuga: Playing rock paper scissors
Aphmau:: Slaps them
Ryuza: slaps Aphmau
Aphmau: We'll be right back
its aphmau guys...
its ok! just know that its hard to spell
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:42 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: Ein 1 and Ein 2: Slapping each other
Aphmau: Slaps them
Hikaru and Hyuga: Playing rock paper scissors
Aphmau:: Slaps them
Ryuza: slaps Aphamus
Aphmau: We'll be right back

Its Ryuzi. No not again why would Aphmau beat up Ryuzi again. He has feelings for her lol
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:50 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: I spelled it right

ok good!
wAiT wHatT

Doesnt Aphmau have a boyfriend-
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:52 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: wAiT  wHatT

Doesnt Aphmau have a boyfriend-

dude.... did you read the message on the end of the chapter aphmau was introduced
Ryuzi: Im sorry Aphmau for slapping you.
Aphmau: slaps Ryuzi back
Ryuzi: Ow! I said Im sorry..... does puppy eyes.
Aphamu: Promise me you won´t be mean anymore!
Ryuzi: Ok I promise.
End of story there lol
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ryuzi: Im sorry Aphmau for slapping you.
Aphmau: slaps Ryuzi back
Ryuzi: Ow! I said Im sorry..... does puppy eyes.
Aphamu: Promise me you won´t be mean anymore!
Ryuzi: Ok I promise.
End of story there lol

lol
Yes I was teasing you

(Oct. 30, 2020  6:57 PM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:52 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: wAiT  wHatT

Doesnt Aphmau have a boyfriend-

dude.... did you read the message on the end of the chapter aphmau was introduced

I know I was teasing you

(Oct. 30, 2020  6:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ryuzi: Im sorry Aphmau for slapping you.
Aphmau: slaps Ryuzi back
Ryuzi: Ow! I said Im sorry..... does puppy eyes.
Aphamu: Promise me you won´t be mean anymore!
Ryuzi: Ok I promise.
End of story there lol

lol
(Oct. 30, 2020  6:59 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: Yes I was teasing you

(Oct. 30, 2020  6:57 PM)LEOBBG Wrote: dude.... did you read the message on the end of the chapter aphmau was introduced

I know I was teasing you

(Oct. 30, 2020  6:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ryuzi: Im sorry Aphmau for slapping you.
Aphmau: slaps Ryuzi back
Ryuzi: Ow! I said Im sorry..... does puppy eyes.
Aphamu: Promise me you won´t be mean anymore!
Ryuzi: Ok I promise.
End of story there lol

lol
oh ok. ya got me lol
Could I help you with the next chapter?

Like give you some ideas?
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:01 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: Could I help you with the next chapter?

Like give you some ideas?

sure!
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: The Next Day: Harry is bullying Lean

lol
Imagine Ein 1 and Ein 2 do a catfight in front of everyone and they become the laughing stock of the year.
It would be a world record.
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Imagine Ein 1 and Ein 2 do a catfight in front of everyone and they become the laughing stock of the year.
It would be a world record.

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok so

1. I think you should Give the battles more.. detail.. so say Prime lance vs. Final blow

you could go: "PRIME LANCE!" shouted Ryuza "Not this time... FINAL BLOW!" shouted Ein 1 the moves met in the middle and clashed; sending out blue and red (or whatever the avatar's color is) sparks
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:12 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: who would be the more annoying ein

idk... you tell me?
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:12 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: who would be the more annoying ein

2 definitly 2
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:13 PM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2020  7:12 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: who would be the more annoying ein

idk... you tell me?

EIn 2