Quote:The Fortress Base is one of the best BB for Defense type customizations. It has a round metal tip which makes it an excellent Beyblade for defense since it has a tendency to remain in the central area of the stadium in order to avoid attacks. The metal tip causes less friction between itself and the Beystadium which normally allows it to get knocked around in terms of defense, but its ability to hold up to 2 sets of metal balls prevents this because of the increase in weight.
This BB is awesome.It can hold up the Bearing SG (Wolborg 2) and the Full Auto Clutch. When it hold up only 1 set of metal balls,during his spinning the metal balls are on the external part of the two pockets,when his spinning is going to finish,the metal balls are in the internal part of the two pockets.
This provide to give you two effect,one give you endurance,and the other one defense!
First paragraph is full of run on sentences
"This beyblade is awesome" isnt a phrase that someone should have on a wiki.
In a new paragraph, it is better to resate the name of the subject or person, or in this case, the name of the object."It" doesnt belong there, however any other mentions of the name later on in the paragraph can be replaced with something general, like "it"
The last section of bolding....that whole thing is carrpy. a BB is not gender specific, so you cannot use "his" and also, the whole thing is full of grammer and syntax errrors
as for that last line, it is just not a good line at all
edit: you also might want to add info on the number of metal balls included, how much metal balls the bb can hold, and how the WBO and WBBA legal limit of metal balls is 5
