Chapter 1 of Flame NOW OUT (READ IT NOW)

Blurb:

Flame tells the story of a boy who one day receives some sort of power, which let him produce and inhale fire. The boy nicknames himself ''Flame''.
Flame meets a lot of people on his journey to find out more about his power.



I am the writer, Lorenzo is the artist!

CLICK HERE TO READ CHAPTER ONE!!
good start, it is me, thecastleoblivion from youtube. i like where you are going with this, however, need to work on your names a bit. So, if you need any manga advice, contact me here or on youtube, also willing to help. Happy drawing!
Huge Update!

-We have done 10 pages out of 40!
-Volume 2- In the works
-Awesome website now made! Click here to go on it


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i think you rush the mom say the day has come you should have made a dramatic silents but thats just me but it was good
(May. 24, 2010  2:09 AM)vza004 Wrote: Awesome. The manga quality is awesome!

Hahaha thanks Grin Once we get more experinced we hope to draw it on software. But for now it stays like that Tongue_out
Nice! The quality is awesome!
(May. 28, 2010  10:34 PM)Medz Wrote: Wow I like it. Nice.

Thanks dude!!
(May. 29, 2010  2:09 AM)Suke Wrote: Nice! The quality is awesome!
Thanks dude for the comment!
Well guys, I wanted to show you page 6, the reason because its not black is because, black represents flashbacks and stuff, but i'm sure most of you people already knew that Wink

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UPDATE #2 :-)

-Chapter 1 completely finished
-Chapter 2- Lorenzo has started on it. 4 pages done of it!
- Volume 2- I have got some solid ideas. Its really hard to write this volume lol
-Chapter 1- To be released soon (Once we get everything edited )

Yeah hopefully an update next week!
Well done on the effort lol make sure you finish Wink
(Jun. 03, 2010  12:27 PM)~Galaxxy~ Wrote: Well done on the effort lol make sure you finish Wink

Hahaha We will Grin Thanks for the comment btw :3
Flame Update!
Chapter 1- NOW FINISHED!! OUT NOW

Click here to view it!!
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I would totally trust an organization called "Despair"...

At least, they're honest about themselves...
Dude,
lol I know but its a charity which helps people with sadness and stuff..etc
it is a great manga your drawings are awesome
(Jun. 28, 2010  3:32 PM)pegasis105rf Wrote: it is a great manga your drawings are awesome
Hey, thanks dude!
(Jul. 03, 2010  2:59 AM)Counter Leone Wrote: Nice job this is really good

Thanks dude, i'll tell this to my friend lorenzo.
If you ever need story or character help pm me. I can really hook you up.
FLAME is back! We're off our pretty long hiatus.Soon we will resume working on Chapter 2.
As for Volume 2, I've edited and it's really good. I mean I think Volume 2 will be better than FLAME Volume 1.
The website is now back! Check out the site here: http://goo.gl/IzB0J
As for when Volume 1 comes out we're hoping by the end of this year, or early next year.