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Jul. 31, 2021  4:02 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings

On here? Definitely Beyblade Burst Densetsu. The worldbuilding, character work and battles are pretty dang cool.
Jul. 31, 2021  4:13 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings

My fav is Lane's sister Athena (Sparking OC)

The battles are cool and story is unique too.
Jul. 31, 2021  4:28 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  4:02 PM)PinkRose Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2021  11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings

On here? Definitely Beyblade Burst Densetsu. The worldbuilding, character work and battles are pretty dang cool.
I just checked it out. But... Im not really fan of writing style he used. But I'll add it to my reading list as you said it's good.
Jul. 31, 2021  4:42 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings

Hmm Infinty Warroirs
Jul. 31, 2021  5:01 PM
 
my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial
Jul. 31, 2021  5:01 PM
 
None taken.
Jul. 31, 2021  5:02 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial

(Some Taken) Unhappy Jk I'm cool with it, I just want people to read what I write lol.
Jul. 31, 2021  5:22 PM
 
I personally dont have a favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing
Jul. 31, 2021  5:26 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:22 PM)BurningSands Wrote: I personally don't have favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing

That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly
Jul. 31, 2021  5:26 PM
 
I wonder if I should necropost the story I kinda stopped writing here a while ago and continue with it or create a new one that revolves around MHA but Beyblade. What would you guys suggest?
Jul. 31, 2021  5:27 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial

Oh really... Thanks, I appreciate that!
Jul. 31, 2021  5:52 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:26 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: I wonder if I should necropost the story I kinda stopped writing here a while ago and continue with it or create a new one that revolves around MHA but Beyblade. What would you guys suggest?

I suggest you go with what your heart desires. I know, that sounds really basic — but theres no right way to write stories and theres infinite paths. Its only a fanfic and not an actual paid story, so it doesnt hurt to go for what you like best

Treading carefully here, as I dont know whats the rule regarding self-necroposting your own thread: If you feel ready to start on the story again, you may do that. I necroposted my own art thread and it wasnt a problem. But the MHA crossover sounds interesting, too 

Overall, both plans are good. I suggest going with one that you like more and is sure youll stick through
Jul. 31, 2021  6:01 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:22 PM)BurningSands Wrote: I personally don't have favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing

That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly

I do agree with you, but idc as much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase") 

Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.
Jul. 31, 2021  6:05 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2021  5:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly

I do agree with you, but idc really much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase") 

Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.

You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!
Jul. 31, 2021  6:11 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:05 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I do agree with you, but idc really much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase") 

Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.

You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!

It's garanteed that I'll do, but Idk when (you don't mind if I pm you right?)
Jul. 31, 2021  6:13 PM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:11 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:05 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!

It's garanteed that I'll do, but Idk when (you don't mind if I pm you right?)

Yeah, you can PM Me just give me 5 mins to turn it on
Jul. 31, 2021  6:45 PM
 
I see lots of stories that also only dedicate 1 or 2 chapters to a single Beyblade. What do you guys think are the pros and cons compared to the traditional anime style of 3-4 episodes (chapters in this case) for one bey. This also begs the question of quantity. Lots of character seem to come and go, like they're just there to show of a bey and then leave the story essentially. This would be a pretty big problem for the 1 chapter 1 bey format. Also, lots of chapters means lots of beys and bladers, meaning there will inevitably be at least a few underused characters and Beyblades, another problem.
Aug. 01, 2021  12:16 AM
 
(Jul. 31, 2021  6:45 PM)Instarez Wrote: I see lots of stories that also only dedicate 1 or 2 chapters to a single Beyblade. What do you guys think are the pros and cons compared to the  traditional anime style of 3-4 episodes (chapters in this case) for one bey. This also begs the question of quantity. Lots of character seem to come and go, like they're just there to show of a bey and then leave the story essentially. This would be a pretty big problem for the 1 chapter 1 bey format. Also, lots of chapters means lots of beys and bladers, meaning there will inevitably be at least a few underused characters and Beyblades, another problem.

Here's my simple take on that.

Pros: Having more Beys in the season/story means more Blader and characters, and that increases diversity in the cast, playstyles, gimmicks and battles.
Cons: Like you said, some characters and their Beys would get really underused if the cast is too big and there are too many Beys introduced in a short time frame, and that is an issue a lot of stories suffer.
Aug. 01, 2021  8:23 PM
 
How do you guys like this system?
Gear Core: A Circle emblem with an icon that represents the bey.
Gear Layer: What the Core locks into. Thing with blades that outlines the general shape of the Bey.
Gear Switch: A Bulky Chassis like piece that goes under the Layer. It has Metal, Rubber, and Layer Gimmicks.
Gear Drive Ring: Optional piece that attaches to the Drive. You can ad Rubber so if the Bey tilts, it could speed up.
Gear Drive: A Bulky Half Sphere like piece. Has various things that help the Bey regarding weight, and sometimes speed (Motors).
Gear Tip: The tip that goes onto the Drive. Determines Stability.

Example:
Magnum Vulcan Hyper-Drive Mass Re:Crash G
Gear Core Vulcan: The Emblem of the Bey.
Gear Layer Magnum: A round but jagged 8 bladed Layer.
Gear Switch Hyper-Drive: Connected directly to the Drive. When the Drive activates, Blade rapidly and continuously shift and spin.
Gear Drive Ring Mass: A Metal Ring that equally distributes weight
Gear Drive Re:Crash: When the bey significantly angles itself, a Lever within will activate, causing the Tip to retract which speeds up the bey.
Gear Tip G: A Gear shape tip with a point at the bottom. The Gears around the base can stabilize the bey if it goes off balance.

Mainly inspired by the Generation 1 Beyblade Systems. I think it's interesting and diverse, but it also might have to much things going on, so I wanted to get opinions in that area.
Aug. 01, 2021  8:29 PM
 
(Aug. 01, 2021  8:23 PM)Instarez Wrote: How do you guys like this system?
Gear Core: A Circle emblem with an icon that represents the bey.
Gear Layer: What the Core locks into. Thing with blades that outlines the general shape of the Bey.
Gear Switch: A Bulky Chassis like piece that goes under the Layer. It has Metal, Rubber, and Layer Gimmicks.
Gear Drive Ring: Optional piece that attaches to the Drive. You can ad Rubber so if the Bey tilts, it could speed up.
Gear Drive: A Bulky Half Sphere like piece. Has various things that help the Bey regarding weight, and sometimes speed (Motors).
Gear Tip: The tip that goes onto the Drive. Determines Stability.

Example:
Magnum Vulcan Hyper-Drive Mass Re:Crash G
Gear Core Vulcan: The Emblem of the Bey.
Gear Layer Magnum: A round but jagged 8 bladed Layer.
Gear Switch Hyper-Drive: Connected directly to the Drive. When the Drive activates, Blade rapidly and continuously shift and spin.
Gear Drive Ring Mass: A Metal Ring that equally distributes weight
Gear Drive Re:Crash: When the bey significantly angles itself, a Lever within will activate, causing the Tip to retract which speeds up the bey.
Gear Tip G: A Gear shape tip with a point at the bottom. The Gears around the base can stabilize the bey if it goes off balance.

Mainly inspired by the Generation 1 Beyblade Systems. I think it's interesting and diverse, but it also might have to much things going on, so I wanted to get opinions in that area.

It's a little complicated but I like it
Aug. 01, 2021  8:35 PM
 
Ranking so Far! My opinion

(1) Beyblade Burst: Infinity Warriors (By DeltaZakuro)

(2) Beyblade Burst Dynachi (By UnseenBurst)

(3) Beyblade Burst Matrix (By BladeKingX)

(4) Beyblade Burst VS! (By Kiryu Kazuma)

(5) Beyblade Burst BeyJitzu (By UnseenBurst)

(6) Beyblade Burst Sonic Clash (By LuchaBurst

(7) Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! (By LegendJustice)
Aug. 01, 2021  8:58 PM
 
A bit bored right now, so just reply here if you want me to review your fanfic.

Preferable if chapters were all in one post.
Aug. 01, 2021  9:11 PM
 
Here is Prologue through Chapter Nine of Beyblade Burst Demonic (Just ignore chapter 3, also my writing style improved so it changes little by little)

Spoiler (Click to View)
Aug. 01, 2021  9:12 PM
 
@"LJ-Blader try spacing it! and I saw some grammar problems tho...
Aug. 01, 2021  10:51 PM
 
I changed my writing style… the later episodes are spaced.
And I try to do grammar checks, but I am not perfect. Wink
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