I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"
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can I post my episode link here?
ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing
if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing
if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.
(Oct. 14, 2020 6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing
if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.
Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Length: 5/5 good length
Plot: NC
Characters: NC
12/15
(Oct. 14, 2020 7:17 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:(Oct. 14, 2020 6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ij...sp=sharing
if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.
Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Length: 5/5 good length
Plot: NC
Characters: NC
12/15
Thanks for the feedback
Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1b: Unrivaled, Warrior Ares! is coming later today and its almost done.
hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic
(Oct. 15, 2020 4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic
grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25
(Oct. 15, 2020 4:30 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:(Oct. 15, 2020 4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fic...-13-Fanfic
grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25
okay, thanks. I'll try to work on it!
Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?
rating time
Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.
Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho(Oct. 15, 2020 6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?
rating time
Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.
Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote:(Oct. 15, 2020 6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: rating timeAye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho
Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.
Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.
Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks(Oct. 15, 2020 6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote: Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho
Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:28 PM)kai edits Wrote:ok that's better(Oct. 15, 2020 6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks
Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 15, 2020 6:51 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: ??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?
yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.
(Oct. 15, 2020 7:01 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:That is true. Shouldnt lie on a rating(Oct. 15, 2020 6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?
yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.