Part 1: The Legendary Beast!

*Ichigo and Renji are having a rematch* Renji:You've finally got the gut's to stand up for yourself. *Zabimaru(Renji's sword), thrusted and cut Ichigo on the shoulder, then Ichigo shouted, aauuugh.* Ichigoorry to disapoint you..... but this time I wont lose! Renji:Foolish child. Ichigo:I told you i'm not a kid! *Ichigo cuts Renji on his chest* *The two Soul Reapers clash and Ichigo dissapears and sees a hollow Renji* Ichigo:What Renji has an Inner Hollow! Inner Renji: Everyone has one, but now its time to get payback on you, you know who's hollow I was the last time. *He uses rezolve on Ichigo twice*. Inner Renji:How is everyones hero now soul Reaper, this time I wont lose. Ichigo:*Ichigo coughs* You dont get it do you, you got a lot of confidence and I admire that, but today isnt that day, can you back it up. Inner Renji: What how dare you! *Ichigo uses Getsuga Tenshou*. Ichigo: GETSUGA TENSHOU!!!

To be continued...

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its good but doesnt that stuff happen on the show?

It's too short and not eloquent enough.

But, at least, you've done something interesting, by having Renji (And everyone) have a Inner Hollow. That opens up a lot of possibilities.

Just develop and make it longer.

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ok, and i only know ichigo has an inner hollow

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