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Part 1: The Legendary Beast!

*Ichigo and Renji are having a rematch* Renji:You've finally got the gut's to stand up for yourself. *Zabimaru(Renji's sword), thrusted and cut Ichigo on the shoulder, then Ichigo shouted, aauuugh.* IchigoConfusedorry to disapoint you..... but this time I wont lose! Renji:Foolish child. Ichigo:I told you i'm not a kid! *Ichigo cuts Renji on his chest* *The two Soul Reapers clash and Ichigo dissapears and sees a hollow Renji* Ichigo:What Renji has an Inner Hollow! Inner Renji: Everyone has one, but now its time to get payback on you, you know who's hollow I was the last time. *He uses rezolve on Ichigo twice*. Inner Renji:How is everyones hero now soul Reaper, this time I wont lose. Ichigo:*Ichigo coughs* You dont get it do you, you got a lot of confidence and I admire that, but today isnt that day, can you back it up. Inner Renji: What how dare you! *Ichigo uses Getsuga Tenshou*. Ichigo: GETSUGA TENSHOU!!!

To be continued...
its good but doesnt that stuff happen on the show?
It's too short and not eloquent enough.

But, at least, you've done something interesting, by having Renji (And everyone) have a Inner Hollow. That opens up a lot of possibilities.

Just develop and make it longer.
ok, and i only know ichigo has an inner hollow