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Hey guys is Ace here I've final decide to create my story I will take character request if I need them but this story Is an HMS beyblade. Story I hope you like it.
Special Thanks For helping me with this story my Awesome. Friend Jacolal But its Now just me(12*2*13)
(New chapters every two days)
The Story is called............
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Chapter1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter4Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter7
Special Thanks For helping me with this story my Awesome. Friend Jacolal But its Now just me(12*2*13)
(New chapters every two days)
The Story is called............
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Chapter1
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It was a wonderful day, wind blowing through my hair, and the sun shining brightly as I give a tremendously long glare at it...
"Ace, is that you bro? I've been looking all over for you!" said Ace's brother Shiro.
"What's up Shiro?" said Ace ....
"Some kid took my beyblade; please come get it for me big bro," he replied, as tears dropped down his remarkably upset face... "He'll crush my bey!".
"Really?! Lets go show him no one messes with my brother... me.... OR my Soaring Phoenix MS!"
The two brothers walked down to the beach confidently. When they reached, Ace kindly asked for his brother's bey back. When the reply was no, he started to walk towards the beyblade dish.
"GET HIM KETOS! Attack now!" said this strong mysterious blader, with a deep and threatening voice.
"No!!" yelled a youngster.
Giga - wolf went flying to the youngster's knees. Ace noticed he had a terrible look of sadness, probably from defeat.
"Hand over your bey now or I'll just crush it till its dust!" threatened that really mysterious person.
"Hey! You can't do that! Challenge my Soaring Phoenix MS... unless you're afraid of losing all those bets you collected." said Ace, with a sly smile on his face.
"Eh? Shut up and put your bey where that cocky mouth of yours is! Me and my Crushing Ketos will destroy you." replied the hooded person.
"Hmm... Is that so? Well then, lets go! But there's one rule! The whole beach is our stadium!" said Ace, as he readied his launcher.
Then everyone started to say, "3....2....1 .......LET IT RIP........."
"Ace, is that you bro? I've been looking all over for you!" said Ace's brother Shiro.
"What's up Shiro?" said Ace ....
"Some kid took my beyblade; please come get it for me big bro," he replied, as tears dropped down his remarkably upset face... "He'll crush my bey!".
"Really?! Lets go show him no one messes with my brother... me.... OR my Soaring Phoenix MS!"
The two brothers walked down to the beach confidently. When they reached, Ace kindly asked for his brother's bey back. When the reply was no, he started to walk towards the beyblade dish.
"GET HIM KETOS! Attack now!" said this strong mysterious blader, with a deep and threatening voice.
"No!!" yelled a youngster.
Giga - wolf went flying to the youngster's knees. Ace noticed he had a terrible look of sadness, probably from defeat.
"Hand over your bey now or I'll just crush it till its dust!" threatened that really mysterious person.
"Hey! You can't do that! Challenge my Soaring Phoenix MS... unless you're afraid of losing all those bets you collected." said Ace, with a sly smile on his face.
"Eh? Shut up and put your bey where that cocky mouth of yours is! Me and my Crushing Ketos will destroy you." replied the hooded person.
"Hmm... Is that so? Well then, lets go! But there's one rule! The whole beach is our stadium!" said Ace, as he readied his launcher.
Then everyone started to say, "3....2....1 .......LET IT RIP........."
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Ace let go his beyblade with all of his might. The opponent did the same. Both beys clashed against each other hard, but Soaring Phoenix had a higher attack power. It smacked the opponent’s bey into the water. Ace sighed. A quick win was best when they were on sand, as the beys would slow down much quicker.
“Well then, it looks like you’re just all talk!†Ace said.
“Go Ketos! Aqua Horn Thrust!†yelled the opponent.
Ace looked behind him, as Ketos, the opponent’s bey, came out of the water, spinning it around everywhere. The water sprayed near Soaring Phoenix slowed it down even more, as the sand started to sink. Ace decided he had to call his trump card. He closed his eyes and started to collect all the power inside of him. Soaring Phoenix was being surrounded by fire…
“NOW! Inferno twister wings!†yelled Ace.
Ketos dived down, whilst Soaring Phoenix countered by going upwards. The beys clashed with equal power, and neither of them budged; it was a battle of two wills, good, and evil. It created a massive explosion; when it cleared, Soaring Phoenix stood at its weakest ever spin.
Ace was both surprised, and happy about the outcome. He walked up to the mysterious blader and took out his hand. The opponent took of her hood and shook the hand. Ace’s face turned a pale-ish colour.
“Yizui!? So you were the one who did this.†Ace said. “Well, I know you wouldn’t ever do anything bad, so I forgive you. Why don’t you come round my house for dinner tonight?â€
“Okay! And sorry for all this trouble, but I was testing out some combos, so whatever!†she replied.
Ace and Shiro walked home, satisfied with what happened. But something was still bothering Ace.
“How did you win? Strategically, you should’ve lost that match, because Ketos had increased power from going downwards.†He thought.
“Something wrong bro?†asked Shiro.
“Oh, no, nothing’s wrong.†Ace replied.
After around 2 hours, Yizui showed up at their house. They had been preparing stuff ever since they got home. Although, you could hardly call it a home, more like a futuristic tree house. Ace lowered the transport tire, and Yizui held it. He then pulled her up. They took her inside, and sat her in the dining room.
The timetable was dinner and a dance –
Dinner: Yizui Dance: All
They ate Shiro’s special recipe, ãƒãƒ§ã‚³ãƒ¬ãƒ¼ãƒˆã«ã‚ˆã£ã¦æ», but no one understood why it was called death by chocolate until they saw it. Both Yizui, and Ace were amazed by Shiro’s cooking. It was a chocolate cake, with a sword - made out of frosting – standing on the cake.
“Wow. The dinner was great. Sorry for taking you bey Shiro, but I just meant to test out a combo. Here you go†she said.
Shiro watched her dismantle her Ketos, and take out the RC and the weight disk. She then took out an attack ring, and gave the all the pieces back to Shiro.
“Thanks very much Yizui.†Shiro said, as he took his dear beyblade back.
They dropped her off to her house, and then left for their tree house.
“Well, I have to say Shiro, today, was a day well spent.†Ace stated.
“I agree big bro.†he replied. “Can I ask a question?â€
“Yeah…â€
“Where’s big sis?â€
Ace stopped dead in his tracks. The pale-ish look was back on his face.
“Acele! I was meant to meet her at the tree fort! Oh no!†Ace yelled, whilst running off into the distance..
“Well then, it looks like you’re just all talk!†Ace said.
“Go Ketos! Aqua Horn Thrust!†yelled the opponent.
Ace looked behind him, as Ketos, the opponent’s bey, came out of the water, spinning it around everywhere. The water sprayed near Soaring Phoenix slowed it down even more, as the sand started to sink. Ace decided he had to call his trump card. He closed his eyes and started to collect all the power inside of him. Soaring Phoenix was being surrounded by fire…
“NOW! Inferno twister wings!†yelled Ace.
Ketos dived down, whilst Soaring Phoenix countered by going upwards. The beys clashed with equal power, and neither of them budged; it was a battle of two wills, good, and evil. It created a massive explosion; when it cleared, Soaring Phoenix stood at its weakest ever spin.
Ace was both surprised, and happy about the outcome. He walked up to the mysterious blader and took out his hand. The opponent took of her hood and shook the hand. Ace’s face turned a pale-ish colour.
“Yizui!? So you were the one who did this.†Ace said. “Well, I know you wouldn’t ever do anything bad, so I forgive you. Why don’t you come round my house for dinner tonight?â€
“Okay! And sorry for all this trouble, but I was testing out some combos, so whatever!†she replied.
Ace and Shiro walked home, satisfied with what happened. But something was still bothering Ace.
“How did you win? Strategically, you should’ve lost that match, because Ketos had increased power from going downwards.†He thought.
“Something wrong bro?†asked Shiro.
“Oh, no, nothing’s wrong.†Ace replied.
After around 2 hours, Yizui showed up at their house. They had been preparing stuff ever since they got home. Although, you could hardly call it a home, more like a futuristic tree house. Ace lowered the transport tire, and Yizui held it. He then pulled her up. They took her inside, and sat her in the dining room.
The timetable was dinner and a dance –
Dinner: Yizui Dance: All
They ate Shiro’s special recipe, ãƒãƒ§ã‚³ãƒ¬ãƒ¼ãƒˆã«ã‚ˆã£ã¦æ», but no one understood why it was called death by chocolate until they saw it. Both Yizui, and Ace were amazed by Shiro’s cooking. It was a chocolate cake, with a sword - made out of frosting – standing on the cake.
“Wow. The dinner was great. Sorry for taking you bey Shiro, but I just meant to test out a combo. Here you go†she said.
Shiro watched her dismantle her Ketos, and take out the RC and the weight disk. She then took out an attack ring, and gave the all the pieces back to Shiro.
“Thanks very much Yizui.†Shiro said, as he took his dear beyblade back.
They dropped her off to her house, and then left for their tree house.
“Well, I have to say Shiro, today, was a day well spent.†Ace stated.
“I agree big bro.†he replied. “Can I ask a question?â€
“Yeah…â€
“Where’s big sis?â€
Ace stopped dead in his tracks. The pale-ish look was back on his face.
“Acele! I was meant to meet her at the tree fort! Oh no!†Ace yelled, whilst running off into the distance..
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Ace was practically dying. His lungs were completely deprived of oxygen from the 8 mile run and the traps from the tree fort had put cuts and bruises all over his body. He didn’t need to worry; his sister would fix him up. But he was angry, once again he had let his guard down.
About 10 minutes later, his sister had managed to locate his position by looking at his footstep – which showed his pace, and the direction he was going. She untied him and applied a remedy. Soon, the pain began to sooth away, and the uncomfortable sensation of his clothes was slowly returning.
Ace sat down on a rock, and sighed. He had ashamed his sister again. Suddenly, he felt a lot of heat soaring around him; so he took of his shirt. After half an hour, he was able to walk, so he followed his sister. Unfortunately, Acele was stronger than Ace, and she could jump from tree to tree, even whilst injured. What she didn’t understand was, Ace wasn’t as strong as her, which meant he couldn’t do that.
“Hey sis, wait up. I can’t go that fast!†he said, as he leaned on a tree bark.
She stopped, looked back, and stared at him, her eyes gouging his heart out. Suddenly, Ace’s courage gave ground.
“Never mind… I’m fine now! I’ll just run down here, whilst you’re up there. Let’s go!†Ace said, with a very shaky voice.
Eventually, they reached the fort. Acele sat down on a bench; Ace on the other hand fell straight onto the floor. Acele walked up to him and rested his head onto her knees; she moved his back sideways onto the knees and picked him up.
Her gentle touch kept Ace asleep, even when she jumped from one rock to another to cross the river. Finally, they reached the shrine. Acele took out the medicines, and fed them to Ace; he woke up, wide-eyed.
Ace heard someone groaning, then realised it was himself. He laid his head back on his sister’s leg and relaxed; The regular pattern from Acele patting his head made him fall back asleep.
****
“You were supposed to meet me at the - â€
“I know… I know… I was meant to meet you at the forest for an assignment.†Ace finished.
“Yes that’s right! Everyone from the Hatawari family has to prove themselves worthy of the name, they are sworn to protect and guard the legends of the sky! And you know very well that when a member of the family turns 13, he… or she… has to take 5 assignments to prove they are worthy of keeping one of the sky beasts!†barked Acele. “And what’s more embarrassing is that even Shiro is on his third assignment, whereas you’re still stuck on your second. I mean he’s TWO years younger than you!â€
Ace was angry, and he let his top burst, “LOOK! I just came running across the city, through a thick forest, got myself bruised and battered, which was my fault, but the point is that PLEASE SHOW SOME CONCERN FOR ME!!â€
“Fine… your new assignment is that you have to beat me in three things. Every one completes one assignement…†murmured Acele.
Suddenly, Ace was interested; He looked up, his face full of curiosity.
“Number one: Beat me in a race. Number 2: Beat me in archery. And last but not least, you must beat me… in a beybattle!†she ordered. “Prepare yourself Ace Hatawari! Tomorrow will be the toughest day in your life.â€
About 10 minutes later, his sister had managed to locate his position by looking at his footstep – which showed his pace, and the direction he was going. She untied him and applied a remedy. Soon, the pain began to sooth away, and the uncomfortable sensation of his clothes was slowly returning.
Ace sat down on a rock, and sighed. He had ashamed his sister again. Suddenly, he felt a lot of heat soaring around him; so he took of his shirt. After half an hour, he was able to walk, so he followed his sister. Unfortunately, Acele was stronger than Ace, and she could jump from tree to tree, even whilst injured. What she didn’t understand was, Ace wasn’t as strong as her, which meant he couldn’t do that.
“Hey sis, wait up. I can’t go that fast!†he said, as he leaned on a tree bark.
She stopped, looked back, and stared at him, her eyes gouging his heart out. Suddenly, Ace’s courage gave ground.
“Never mind… I’m fine now! I’ll just run down here, whilst you’re up there. Let’s go!†Ace said, with a very shaky voice.
Eventually, they reached the fort. Acele sat down on a bench; Ace on the other hand fell straight onto the floor. Acele walked up to him and rested his head onto her knees; she moved his back sideways onto the knees and picked him up.
Her gentle touch kept Ace asleep, even when she jumped from one rock to another to cross the river. Finally, they reached the shrine. Acele took out the medicines, and fed them to Ace; he woke up, wide-eyed.
Ace heard someone groaning, then realised it was himself. He laid his head back on his sister’s leg and relaxed; The regular pattern from Acele patting his head made him fall back asleep.
****
“You were supposed to meet me at the - â€
“I know… I know… I was meant to meet you at the forest for an assignment.†Ace finished.
“Yes that’s right! Everyone from the Hatawari family has to prove themselves worthy of the name, they are sworn to protect and guard the legends of the sky! And you know very well that when a member of the family turns 13, he… or she… has to take 5 assignments to prove they are worthy of keeping one of the sky beasts!†barked Acele. “And what’s more embarrassing is that even Shiro is on his third assignment, whereas you’re still stuck on your second. I mean he’s TWO years younger than you!â€
Ace was angry, and he let his top burst, “LOOK! I just came running across the city, through a thick forest, got myself bruised and battered, which was my fault, but the point is that PLEASE SHOW SOME CONCERN FOR ME!!â€
“Fine… your new assignment is that you have to beat me in three things. Every one completes one assignement…†murmured Acele.
Suddenly, Ace was interested; He looked up, his face full of curiosity.
“Number one: Beat me in a race. Number 2: Beat me in archery. And last but not least, you must beat me… in a beybattle!†she ordered. “Prepare yourself Ace Hatawari! Tomorrow will be the toughest day in your life.â€
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You were supposed to meet me at the - â€
“I know… I know… I was meant to meet you at the forest for an assignment.†Ace finished.
“Yes that’s right! Everyone from the Hatawari family has to prove themselves worthy of the name, they are sworn to protect and guard the legends of the sky! And you know very well that when a member of the family turns 13, he… or she… has to take 5 assignments to prove they are worthy of keeping one of the sky beasts!†barked Acele. “And what’s more embarrassing is that even Shiro is on his third assignment, whereas you’re still stuck on your second. I mean he’s TWO years younger than you!â€
Ace was angry, and he let his top burst, “LOOK! I just came running across the city, through a thick forest, got myself bruised and battered, which was my fault, but the point is that PLEASE SHOW SOME CONCERN FOR ME!!â€
“Fine… your new assignment is that you have to beat me in three things. Every one completes one assignement…†murmured Acele.
Suddenly, Ace was interested; He looked up, his face full of curiosity.
“Number one: Beat me in a race. Number 2: Beat me in archery. And last but not least, you must beat me… in a beybattle!†she ordered. “Prepare yourself Ace Hatawari! Tomorrow will be the toughest day in your life.â€
The next day, Ace woke up at 5am. He went outside into the forest and started training. In an hour, when his sister woke up, he had done 50 sit ups, a mile run around the fort, and 30 jumps from one tree branch to another, which had all in all given him one or two cuts from stumbles.
Ace walked back to the tree fort to pick up Soaring Phoenix, and noticed Acele was waiting outside. He ran in, took his bey, and ran out, quick as a flash. The brother and sister walked together to the shrine, to take their blessings from the sacred shield.
Ace had heard of the legend, but he’d never taken it seriously until the incident. The legend was that the shield guarded 4 sacred beasts of the sky, and would hold them until they were one day needed. 2 had escaped, and were never found. One was in Ace’s beyblade. He could still remember where it happened… He was about to die from a car crash with his parents. Then, a giant light appeared and covered Ace, leaving him unscathed and alive, only to find that his parents were dead…
They both walked in silence to the fort again until they reached the track. It was a jagged path filled with poisonous plants and wires and traps. Which left only one option – you had to take the trees. They both climbed a suitable tree for the race and readied themselves – there was no strap to hold them onto, just outright jumping from one branch to the other.
“Okay Acele, let’s go!†yelled Ace.
“What are you talking about? I said it’s a race, but I didn’t say what kind – you have to race with your beyblade!†she said.
“WHAT!? Awesome! Now I’m absolutely psyched up… I’m gonna beat you in all the events sis, ‘cause me and Soaring Phoenix can beat anyone!†Ace yelled.
“Alright then, if you’re so confident, we’ll skip the first two events and get straight to the beybattle. If you win that, you’ll have completed your 3 assignments,†said Acele. “However, as we aren’t doing the first two, the beybattle will be a different one… The first rule is that you must keep your beyblade can not touch the ground. The second rule is that we have to stay on the trees. And the third and most important rule is… the match is to be one by one’s will… which means you must end the match with one hit!â€
Ace nodded and readied his launcher. Acele followed. They both attached their beys and launched; neither of them could afford to lose concentration. Soaring Phoenix landed on the edge of a branch; Ace balanced himself on his own branch. Now, every move he did, would be followed by his beyblade… his instincts and reflexes would be taken to the extreme this time.
On the other hand Acele’s bey, stood ground on its branch for a moment, then quickly dashed up to a higher position. In less than 2 minutes, her beyblade was on top of the tree, and safe from any attack.
Both blades stood where they were… Ace and Acele knew that it was extremely hard to finish a battle in one move, so they had both decided to make each other sleep out. Ace knew that Acele had a slight advantage… her bey was a stamina type, and his was an attack. He devised a plan; it was risky, very risky, but if it worked, he’d win.
Acele was well prepared too. As soon as Ace moved, her bey jumped from the top of the tree and onto his branch, stopping any movement.
“You can’t run away from me Ace… I won’t let you!†she yelled, as she slashed her hand down.
In an instant, her beyblade responded by jumping from Ace’s branch to the one on top. It then dived towards Soaring Phoenix. Ace smiled as he realised that his sister had taken the bait. Ace quickly shot his hand sideways; Like Acele’s bey, Soaring Phoenix dashed to the side. Acele gasped in shock as she saw her beyblade dive into a branch, it’s attack ring smashing into it.
“Great work Soaring Phoenix,†said Ace, “Now let’s finish this! GO! SKY DIVE MIRAGE!†yelled Ace as his Soaring Phoenix leaped into the sky and struck Acele’s bey, pushing it through the branch.
“I know… I know… I was meant to meet you at the forest for an assignment.†Ace finished.
“Yes that’s right! Everyone from the Hatawari family has to prove themselves worthy of the name, they are sworn to protect and guard the legends of the sky! And you know very well that when a member of the family turns 13, he… or she… has to take 5 assignments to prove they are worthy of keeping one of the sky beasts!†barked Acele. “And what’s more embarrassing is that even Shiro is on his third assignment, whereas you’re still stuck on your second. I mean he’s TWO years younger than you!â€
Ace was angry, and he let his top burst, “LOOK! I just came running across the city, through a thick forest, got myself bruised and battered, which was my fault, but the point is that PLEASE SHOW SOME CONCERN FOR ME!!â€
“Fine… your new assignment is that you have to beat me in three things. Every one completes one assignement…†murmured Acele.
Suddenly, Ace was interested; He looked up, his face full of curiosity.
“Number one: Beat me in a race. Number 2: Beat me in archery. And last but not least, you must beat me… in a beybattle!†she ordered. “Prepare yourself Ace Hatawari! Tomorrow will be the toughest day in your life.â€
The next day, Ace woke up at 5am. He went outside into the forest and started training. In an hour, when his sister woke up, he had done 50 sit ups, a mile run around the fort, and 30 jumps from one tree branch to another, which had all in all given him one or two cuts from stumbles.
Ace walked back to the tree fort to pick up Soaring Phoenix, and noticed Acele was waiting outside. He ran in, took his bey, and ran out, quick as a flash. The brother and sister walked together to the shrine, to take their blessings from the sacred shield.
Ace had heard of the legend, but he’d never taken it seriously until the incident. The legend was that the shield guarded 4 sacred beasts of the sky, and would hold them until they were one day needed. 2 had escaped, and were never found. One was in Ace’s beyblade. He could still remember where it happened… He was about to die from a car crash with his parents. Then, a giant light appeared and covered Ace, leaving him unscathed and alive, only to find that his parents were dead…
They both walked in silence to the fort again until they reached the track. It was a jagged path filled with poisonous plants and wires and traps. Which left only one option – you had to take the trees. They both climbed a suitable tree for the race and readied themselves – there was no strap to hold them onto, just outright jumping from one branch to the other.
“Okay Acele, let’s go!†yelled Ace.
“What are you talking about? I said it’s a race, but I didn’t say what kind – you have to race with your beyblade!†she said.
“WHAT!? Awesome! Now I’m absolutely psyched up… I’m gonna beat you in all the events sis, ‘cause me and Soaring Phoenix can beat anyone!†Ace yelled.
“Alright then, if you’re so confident, we’ll skip the first two events and get straight to the beybattle. If you win that, you’ll have completed your 3 assignments,†said Acele. “However, as we aren’t doing the first two, the beybattle will be a different one… The first rule is that you must keep your beyblade can not touch the ground. The second rule is that we have to stay on the trees. And the third and most important rule is… the match is to be one by one’s will… which means you must end the match with one hit!â€
Ace nodded and readied his launcher. Acele followed. They both attached their beys and launched; neither of them could afford to lose concentration. Soaring Phoenix landed on the edge of a branch; Ace balanced himself on his own branch. Now, every move he did, would be followed by his beyblade… his instincts and reflexes would be taken to the extreme this time.
On the other hand Acele’s bey, stood ground on its branch for a moment, then quickly dashed up to a higher position. In less than 2 minutes, her beyblade was on top of the tree, and safe from any attack.
Both blades stood where they were… Ace and Acele knew that it was extremely hard to finish a battle in one move, so they had both decided to make each other sleep out. Ace knew that Acele had a slight advantage… her bey was a stamina type, and his was an attack. He devised a plan; it was risky, very risky, but if it worked, he’d win.
Acele was well prepared too. As soon as Ace moved, her bey jumped from the top of the tree and onto his branch, stopping any movement.
“You can’t run away from me Ace… I won’t let you!†she yelled, as she slashed her hand down.
In an instant, her beyblade responded by jumping from Ace’s branch to the one on top. It then dived towards Soaring Phoenix. Ace smiled as he realised that his sister had taken the bait. Ace quickly shot his hand sideways; Like Acele’s bey, Soaring Phoenix dashed to the side. Acele gasped in shock as she saw her beyblade dive into a branch, it’s attack ring smashing into it.
“Great work Soaring Phoenix,†said Ace, “Now let’s finish this! GO! SKY DIVE MIRAGE!†yelled Ace as his Soaring Phoenix leaped into the sky and struck Acele’s bey, pushing it through the branch.
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After The smoke has Cleared-
Acele Was on her knees. Shocked by what her cockiness. Has Doomed her and her bey.
"Well Ace you have proven your self Good enough to keep your bey"Said Acele as she took her bey out of the tree
"Why thank you But I wasn't going to lose nor back down. My bey means my life to Me but I'll be off now"Said Ace as he walked away
That was an actual close battle if she really paid attention. She would have notice her....mista...
-Interrupted by an bey-
Hmm What bey is this I wonder who it belongs too.
-Bey runs down into the park and near an dish-
"Return! Flare Draco MS" said Mystery figure
"Who are you"Asked Ace
"Hmm I'll tell you only........IF YOU BEAT MY BEY-throws off hood and lifts up her bey-"
"Hmm If you insist lets see if you can beat my...Soaring Phoenix MS -Lifts up bey-
Lets start 3-2-1 LET IT RIP
-The battle took of fast after the the two beys landed in the Stadium-
"Go Draco! Hmm I see your beys an attack type so is my bey This will be good -Slight Grin-"
"Do underestimate my Phoenix just because. Its an attack type doesn't mean it has low Rotation PHOENIX!"
-Phoenix mirages draco-
"Two can play at that Draco Go"
-Draco drives Phoenix to the edge-
"No Phoenix Go Go Go"
-Ace and Phoenix lights in a flaming Rage auora-
"What is This!?" She said as Draco went flying back.
"Its Time to finish this"Said Ace
"I agree,Draco Special Move ...FLARE STRIKE"
"PHOENIX! Blazing Gigs Evolution-Uses two fingers as fire follows them-"
-The Two beys clashed and An enormously Explosions had happen As the Smoked Cleared. Leaving Only...........As Promised. My name is Ryu And I'm an girl
-Removes hood to show long beautiful Lushes black hair-
"You fight hard to be an girl" said ace
-Ryu goes rage-
"WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO. MEAN!"Said Ryu
-Ryu Sends Ace flying. Across the park by an Slap-
-Ace knocked out looking retarted on the ground-
-Ryu giggle then runs over to Ace Concerned bringing him Phoenix-X)
Acele Was on her knees. Shocked by what her cockiness. Has Doomed her and her bey.
"Well Ace you have proven your self Good enough to keep your bey"Said Acele as she took her bey out of the tree
"Why thank you But I wasn't going to lose nor back down. My bey means my life to Me but I'll be off now"Said Ace as he walked away
That was an actual close battle if she really paid attention. She would have notice her....mista...
-Interrupted by an bey-
Hmm What bey is this I wonder who it belongs too.
-Bey runs down into the park and near an dish-
"Return! Flare Draco MS" said Mystery figure
"Who are you"Asked Ace
"Hmm I'll tell you only........IF YOU BEAT MY BEY-throws off hood and lifts up her bey-"
"Hmm If you insist lets see if you can beat my...Soaring Phoenix MS -Lifts up bey-
Lets start 3-2-1 LET IT RIP
-The battle took of fast after the the two beys landed in the Stadium-
"Go Draco! Hmm I see your beys an attack type so is my bey This will be good -Slight Grin-"
"Do underestimate my Phoenix just because. Its an attack type doesn't mean it has low Rotation PHOENIX!"
-Phoenix mirages draco-
"Two can play at that Draco Go"
-Draco drives Phoenix to the edge-
"No Phoenix Go Go Go"
-Ace and Phoenix lights in a flaming Rage auora-
"What is This!?" She said as Draco went flying back.
"Its Time to finish this"Said Ace
"I agree,Draco Special Move ...FLARE STRIKE"
"PHOENIX! Blazing Gigs Evolution-Uses two fingers as fire follows them-"
-The Two beys clashed and An enormously Explosions had happen As the Smoked Cleared. Leaving Only...........
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Phoenix. Spinning
-Removes hood to show long beautiful Lushes black hair-
"You fight hard to be an girl" said ace
-Ryu goes rage-
"WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO. MEAN!"Said Ryu
-Ryu Sends Ace flying. Across the park by an Slap-
-Ace knocked out looking retarted on the ground-
-Ryu giggle then runs over to Ace Concerned bringing him Phoenix-X)
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-Ace woke up and jumps up-
“Hey what the hell was that for!!†Raged Ace
“Well you mistaken me for an boy what do you expect†Said Ryu
“Well I’m sorry-slight laugh- Oh I forgot to introduce my self my names Ace and –holds bey_ and this my partner Soaring Phoenix MS†Stated Ace
“Neat-smiles- Well I’m Ryu and this is my bey –holds bey up- Flare Draco†Said Ryu
-Hears Scream-
“STOP! - Gets on knees- Please stop destroying my beyâ€
“Well I don’t feel like right now-as his bey keeps trashing that kids bey- This Is really fun –grins and laughs-Dk, Austin, Beau Destroy his bey“ Said Terrence
-Ace and Ryu launches in stadium-
“I DON’T THINK SO!†Said Ace
-Ace sends Terrence and Beau out the stadium while Ryu send DK and Austin out the stadium-
“So you think you can destroy beys You have issues Try that again when I’m around and I wont go so easy on you-gives kid his bey- So who exactly are you guys?†Said Ace
‘Yeah! How can you just do that you just hurt his feeli…-Cut off by the Terence and his goons-“
“How about you two goody goody’s shut up and stay out of my way but I am Terrence phyulis and this is my bey Desert Armadillo MS†Said Terrence
“And I’m DK Second in command with my bey King Dracone MS†Said DK
“Finally its us the double trouble where the Brothers of trouble Austin and Beau, I’m Austin with Gaia Golem MS and I’m beau with Mystic Phantom MS†Said Austin and Beau
“And where the Mystic Dark Bladders!! And you’ve just met trouble in the eye-makes strange pose and someone falls- OMG get it right DK.†Said all of them
“Hmm you guys need an life-Laughs along with ryu-“Said Ace
“GRRR why you little… Since your so bad how about we battle an team of 2V2 Me and DK will show you an good time Tonight at the underground bey union at 9:00pm DON’T BE LATE†Said Terrence as him and his goons walk away
“Me and Ryu will be there we never back down!†Said ace as him and ryu walk away in the sunset
“ So ill meet you at the Underground Bey union around 8:30†Said Ryu
-As they walked Ryu home and arrived-
“That sounds good well see you later†Said Ace
-Ace walks home and gets to his room and works on Phoenix-
“Its time to Makes these new attack modification and test themâ€
-Modifies and test-
“Perfectâ€
-Looks at clock 8:15-
“I’m goanna be late got to run there now-grabs phoenix and runs out the house to the Bey underground Union- Prepare to Meet the New Phoenix King Ace!â€
-Ace reaches Union and meets up with Ryu-
“Are you ready Ryu Its you versus Dk Right now good luck-gives thumbs up and smiles-“Said Ace
“Thanks and trust me I’m ready with my Draco I will win†Said Ryu as she walks to the bey stadium
“Are you ready too lose Ryu†Said Dk as he a approached the stadium
“Trust Me I wont be losing to the likes of you lets get started†Said Ryu
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“Hey what the hell was that for!!†Raged Ace
“Well you mistaken me for an boy what do you expect†Said Ryu
“Well I’m sorry-slight laugh- Oh I forgot to introduce my self my names Ace and –holds bey_ and this my partner Soaring Phoenix MS†Stated Ace
“Neat-smiles- Well I’m Ryu and this is my bey –holds bey up- Flare Draco†Said Ryu
-Hears Scream-
“STOP! - Gets on knees- Please stop destroying my beyâ€
“Well I don’t feel like right now-as his bey keeps trashing that kids bey- This Is really fun –grins and laughs-Dk, Austin, Beau Destroy his bey“ Said Terrence
-Ace and Ryu launches in stadium-
“I DON’T THINK SO!†Said Ace
-Ace sends Terrence and Beau out the stadium while Ryu send DK and Austin out the stadium-
“So you think you can destroy beys You have issues Try that again when I’m around and I wont go so easy on you-gives kid his bey- So who exactly are you guys?†Said Ace
‘Yeah! How can you just do that you just hurt his feeli…-Cut off by the Terence and his goons-“
“How about you two goody goody’s shut up and stay out of my way but I am Terrence phyulis and this is my bey Desert Armadillo MS†Said Terrence
“And I’m DK Second in command with my bey King Dracone MS†Said DK
“Finally its us the double trouble where the Brothers of trouble Austin and Beau, I’m Austin with Gaia Golem MS and I’m beau with Mystic Phantom MS†Said Austin and Beau
“And where the Mystic Dark Bladders!! And you’ve just met trouble in the eye-makes strange pose and someone falls- OMG get it right DK.†Said all of them
“Hmm you guys need an life-Laughs along with ryu-“Said Ace
“GRRR why you little… Since your so bad how about we battle an team of 2V2 Me and DK will show you an good time Tonight at the underground bey union at 9:00pm DON’T BE LATE†Said Terrence as him and his goons walk away
“Me and Ryu will be there we never back down!†Said ace as him and ryu walk away in the sunset
“ So ill meet you at the Underground Bey union around 8:30†Said Ryu
-As they walked Ryu home and arrived-
“That sounds good well see you later†Said Ace
-Ace walks home and gets to his room and works on Phoenix-
“Its time to Makes these new attack modification and test themâ€
-Modifies and test-
“Perfectâ€
-Looks at clock 8:15-
“I’m goanna be late got to run there now-grabs phoenix and runs out the house to the Bey underground Union- Prepare to Meet the New Phoenix King Ace!â€
-Ace reaches Union and meets up with Ryu-
“Are you ready Ryu Its you versus Dk Right now good luck-gives thumbs up and smiles-“Said Ace
“Thanks and trust me I’m ready with my Draco I will win†Said Ryu as she walks to the bey stadium
“Are you ready too lose Ryu†Said Dk as he a approached the stadium
“Trust Me I wont be losing to the likes of you lets get started†Said Ryu
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THE FIERY BATTLE OF TWO DRAGONS HAS BEGUN!! WHO WILL WIN?
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-The two beys entered the stadium-
-Ryu knew what must be done a soon as the battle started since she’s an attack type and she must be aggressive since king dracone is a stamina type. -
“RYU GET YOUR HEAD IN THE BATTLE!†Yelled Ace
-Ryu snaps out of it-
“Thank you ace but Shut up Now while I win this-grins- now Go! Draco†Said Ryu
-Draco starts Too slam Dracone back and back towards the edge-
“Hmph-starts to laugh- Your so clueless†Said Dk
“Clueless? What do you mean I’m the one pushing your bey to the edge so How about you rethink that big mouth of yours†Said Ryu
“I guess its time to unleash my full power… DRACONE!†Cried DK
-Dracone rotation spins faster launching Draco to the middle of the stadium-
“What….What? Just happened –looks with and slightly scared/ curious face-“ Said Ryu
“Its my true power I might be an stamina type but I have terrifying attack power Muhaaaa DRACONE SHOW NO MERCY!†Raged DK
-Dracone raged by popping draco up over and aver into the sky-
“-Laughs- you fool Um at an advantage now GO DRACO! Flare Nova†Cried Ryu
-The last time dracone pope Draco up she turned into a nova of flame slamming into Draco throwing of his balance cracking his metal wheel slightly-
“BUT…B…UT how did you come back†Asked Dk
“Because My blader sprit Is too strong to lose to the likes of you scum Me and my Draco Have an bond……….A BOND WHICH NO ONE CAN DESTROY REMMEBER THAT†Said Ryu
-Draco and Dracone start to get slow on speed-
“Well let me try and break you weak sprit its time to finish this right now I’m getting very pissed off I will use all my power in this one move I WILL NOT HOLD BACK SO NEITHER WILL YOU! YOU HEAR ME†Raged Dk
-The finally set was taken the bladers sprits raged but who will win the clash-
“I agree its time to finish this your starting to become an pest Draco! Use all your power in this last move do not hold back†Said Ryu
-Both beys speed increased, as they are about to pull the finally card out there sleeves-
“DRACONE NOW! Special move ULIMATE DRAGON SLASH†Screamed DK
“Intercept Draco! Special Move ULITAME FLARE NOVA STRIKE†Yelled Ryu
-The two beys crashed with amazing power and a fiery bey spirit-
“DRACO!†Screamed Ryu
“DRACONE!†Yelled DK
-The two beys collided destroying the stadium and there was a large amount off smoke-
“Who won I can’t see!†Yelled ace
-The smoke has cleared there was only one bey spinning and one crashed into the wall of the stadium-
“-GASP-†dome by everyone
-The winner was……………………RYU HER BEY WAS BEARLY SPINING while dracone was smashed into the stadium wall-
-Ace jumps from balcony (4 ft.) and runs to go congrats ryu-
“You did it I knew you could do it,†Said ace
“ Thank you and I knew I could do it now good luck in your battle don’t be stupid and lose “ Said ryu as she walked away from the stadium
“Wait! Ryu I wanted to say next time it will not end the same –walks away- I PROMISE!†Said DK
“What ever you say My Draco will never lose –sticks tongue out at she sits in audience-“Said Ryu
“Well its now me and you ready Terrence†Said ace
“Yes I’m ready to destroy you and your phoenix-sets launcher and bey up-“
-The battle is about to begin what will the turn out be-
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-Ryu knew what must be done a soon as the battle started since she’s an attack type and she must be aggressive since king dracone is a stamina type. -
“RYU GET YOUR HEAD IN THE BATTLE!†Yelled Ace
-Ryu snaps out of it-
“Thank you ace but Shut up Now while I win this-grins- now Go! Draco†Said Ryu
-Draco starts Too slam Dracone back and back towards the edge-
“Hmph-starts to laugh- Your so clueless†Said Dk
“Clueless? What do you mean I’m the one pushing your bey to the edge so How about you rethink that big mouth of yours†Said Ryu
“I guess its time to unleash my full power… DRACONE!†Cried DK
-Dracone rotation spins faster launching Draco to the middle of the stadium-
“What….What? Just happened –looks with and slightly scared/ curious face-“ Said Ryu
“Its my true power I might be an stamina type but I have terrifying attack power Muhaaaa DRACONE SHOW NO MERCY!†Raged DK
-Dracone raged by popping draco up over and aver into the sky-
“-Laughs- you fool Um at an advantage now GO DRACO! Flare Nova†Cried Ryu
-The last time dracone pope Draco up she turned into a nova of flame slamming into Draco throwing of his balance cracking his metal wheel slightly-
“BUT…B…UT how did you come back†Asked Dk
“Because My blader sprit Is too strong to lose to the likes of you scum Me and my Draco Have an bond……….A BOND WHICH NO ONE CAN DESTROY REMMEBER THAT†Said Ryu
-Draco and Dracone start to get slow on speed-
“Well let me try and break you weak sprit its time to finish this right now I’m getting very pissed off I will use all my power in this one move I WILL NOT HOLD BACK SO NEITHER WILL YOU! YOU HEAR ME†Raged Dk
-The finally set was taken the bladers sprits raged but who will win the clash-
“I agree its time to finish this your starting to become an pest Draco! Use all your power in this last move do not hold back†Said Ryu
-Both beys speed increased, as they are about to pull the finally card out there sleeves-
“DRACONE NOW! Special move ULIMATE DRAGON SLASH†Screamed DK
“Intercept Draco! Special Move ULITAME FLARE NOVA STRIKE†Yelled Ryu
-The two beys crashed with amazing power and a fiery bey spirit-
“DRACO!†Screamed Ryu
“DRACONE!†Yelled DK
-The two beys collided destroying the stadium and there was a large amount off smoke-
“Who won I can’t see!†Yelled ace
-The smoke has cleared there was only one bey spinning and one crashed into the wall of the stadium-
“-GASP-†dome by everyone
-The winner was……………………RYU HER BEY WAS BEARLY SPINING while dracone was smashed into the stadium wall-
-Ace jumps from balcony (4 ft.) and runs to go congrats ryu-
“You did it I knew you could do it,†Said ace
“ Thank you and I knew I could do it now good luck in your battle don’t be stupid and lose “ Said ryu as she walked away from the stadium
“Wait! Ryu I wanted to say next time it will not end the same –walks away- I PROMISE!†Said DK
“What ever you say My Draco will never lose –sticks tongue out at she sits in audience-“Said Ryu
“Well its now me and you ready Terrence†Said ace
“Yes I’m ready to destroy you and your phoenix-sets launcher and bey up-“
-The battle is about to begin what will the turn out be-
3-2-1 LET IT RIP…………
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can't wait for chapter 3!
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