Beyblade story*The New Phoenix King Awakening

Poll: How is my story?

Amazing
60.00%
6
Legit
10.00%
1
Ok
20.00%
2
I wish It was better ;(
10.00%
1
Total: 100% 10 vote(s)
Thank you for youre input once again you're helping Joyful_3
No problem. Just expand on various situations, add more detail, and I think you'll have yourself a good story.
Okay ultramarine. I'll be sure to take this into account for the next chapter.
I have a character requestSmile
Name: Mizu
Bey: Sea Shark
Personality: nice and annoyingXD by nice, she likes to launch her bey into a bey battle if someone is losingSmile by annoying, she's like Tetsuya, she likes to say Chomp Chomp a lot!XD
Here's another character, one that represents me!Grin
Chapter 4 will be up tomorrow!
Ok awesome character and ok Me And jac Will work her in the best we can.
I think I know a way to work her in. :-)
Sorry I was only able to.make one chapter. I promise me and ce will make 2 chapters this weekend.
Its ok and remember one chapter this weekend because the who weekly
Sorry but Chapter 4 is up
Chapter. 4
Cool chapter!Smile when are my characters going to be used?Smile
(Sep. 24, 2013  12:59 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: This next chapter for sure

Ok sounds awesome!!Grin can't wait!Smile
I Will try to get her nicely And Awesomly in there as possible
(Sep. 24, 2013  2:08 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: I Will try to get her nicely And Awesomly in there as possible

Sounds awesome!XD
I have An Announcement. I will be finishing my story I have been motivated to Finnish This amazing Story.
Do u still take character requests?
Sure Why Not It seems An bit easier to kick off the story with
DK
Bey; king Dracone MS
Age: 11
Bio: he is a bad guy and is really powerful and shows no mercy
I'm working. On chapter 5 now Your character. Will make an appearance. But an shirt one but Will make a big difference in. Chapter. 6
Here's the character request you asked for. Please tell me if you need more information.
Name: Terence Phylius
Age: 14
Beyblade: Desert Armadillo MS
Bey description: Its a defence type with a rounded, rubber RC, a weight disk with a large, thick plastic piece surrounding it, and a fairly compact AR.
Bio: Hyperm yet sarcastic.
You can make him a protagonist or antagonist, whatever you need.