this is my first time making a story,i'll have a new chapter every 1-2 days.

prologue (Click to View)

there are two beyblades that were more powerful than the rest.they were the legendary bey's.they represented light and dark.one eventful day,a blader tried to steal both of them.he was stopped and the legendary beys were hidden.the same blader plots again to steal the legendary beys again.the blader was known as Chaos.

Ch.1 (Click to View)

I woke up.I couldn't remember a thing.All I remembered was my name.I noticed something in my hand.I immediately knew it was a bey.I struggled to remember.I was really confused.Then it hit me.I had amnesia.Suddenly,my vision went blurry.Images flashed through my head.Two beys,a blader,then an explosion.I stood up.I was in a junkyard.I started to walk out of the junkyard but was intercepted by a mysterious figure.He had white,spiky hair and wore all black."You're not going anywhere," he said.He took out a bey and launched it at me.I dodged it.I had no idea who this guy was or how to use my bey,so I ran.I saw the person run after me,his bey following him.His bey got ready to attack again so by instinct,I took out my launcher and shot my bey.It would've blocked the attack if I hadn't shot it at a building.When all hope seemed lost,my bey rebounded off the building and hit his bey."Are you serious!,"he yelled.His bey's spin speed increased.It charged towards my bey.I knew I couldn't take that attack."Go!".A bey came out of nowhere.The battle immediately ended with an explosion.

One word bro, Capitalization

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"I'll solve equations with my right hand and write names with my left. I'll take a potato chip... and eat it!"- Yagami Light

Sorry,I did it a little fast

Sorry,I did it a little fast

Don't rush, quality>everything. Chapter is too short.

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No offense bro,but it was to short.It had no particular story line.And it's unoriginal

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Yeeeaaahhh...What everyone else just said, I agree with...

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what's the story related to?the story is suppost to come together during it.also,the chapters get longer than the last.the prologue is just general info on the story

Chapter 1 is too short, lengthen your chapters bro

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"I'll solve equations with my right hand and write names with my left. I'll take a potato chip... and eat it!"- Yagami Light

i'll update Ch.1.it'll be longer

Put spaces after periods, always.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"