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Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012 this is my first time making a story,i'll have a new chapter every 1-2 days. prologue (Click to View) Ch.1 (Click to View) RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - King of Misfits - Jul. 27, 2012 One word bro, Capitalization RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012 Sorry,I did it a little fast RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - Hitsugiya - Jul. 27, 2012 (Jul. 27, 2012 9:43 PM)shadow blader0 Wrote: Sorry,I did it a little fastDon't rush, quality>everything. Chapter is too short. RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - K!d Death - Jul. 27, 2012 No offense bro,but it was to short.It had no particular story line.And it's unoriginal RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - DefStamina88 - Jul. 27, 2012 Yeeeaaahhh...What everyone else just said, I agree with... RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012 what's the story related to?the story is suppost to come together during it.also,the chapters get longer than the last.the prologue is just general info on the story RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - King of Misfits - Jul. 27, 2012 Chapter 1 is too short, lengthen your chapters bro RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012 i'll update Ch.1.it'll be longer RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - Hitsugiya - Jul. 27, 2012 Put spaces after periods, always. |