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Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012

this is my first time making a story,i'll have a new chapter every 1-2 days.



RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - King of Misfits - Jul. 27, 2012

One word bro, Capitalization


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012

Sorry,I did it a little fast


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - Hitsugiya - Jul. 27, 2012

(Jul. 27, 2012  9:43 PM)shadow blader0 Wrote: Sorry,I did it a little fast
Don't rush, quality>everything. Chapter is too short.



RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - K!d Death - Jul. 27, 2012

No offense bro,but it was to short.It had no particular story line.And it's unoriginal


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - DefStamina88 - Jul. 27, 2012

Yeeeaaahhh...What everyone else just said, I agree with...


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012

what's the story related to?the story is suppost to come together during it.also,the chapters get longer than the last.the prologue is just general info on the story


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - King of Misfits - Jul. 27, 2012

Chapter 1 is too short, lengthen your chapters bro


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - SilverBlader - Jul. 27, 2012

i'll update Ch.1.it'll be longer


RE: Beyblade story:Chaos Rising - Hitsugiya - Jul. 27, 2012

Put spaces after periods, always.