Well.... this is good work. Apart from one or two paragraphing errors, I'd say this is really good!
Also, I had a character request...
Role: Good friend or rival, not bad guy
THE CHARACTER
Character name: Yizui Akato
Bio: Yizui is a girl and is kinda small - 4 8" and her father, who owned the phantom sagittario gave it to her.
Age: 14
Appearance: Usually wears blue jeans and a yellow jumper/ pink jumper. She has black hair and pale skin. Her eyes are the color amber.
Lifestyle: Tries to act normal in school but she still remains fairly unpopular - doesn't like anyone being made fun of. There is however one thing she doesn't tell anyone, that her beyblade can get out of control when she does flaming loop.
BEYBLADE
Bey: MF Phantom Phoenix B : D
Element: Wind and ghost and little fire
Beyblade Special moves: Ghost Claw, Phantom grip, Flaming Loop
Type: Stamina
SPECIAL MOVES
Ghost Claw - The bey does a full power smash attack at the opponent with the tripple roller spin track, resulting in low recoil and effective hits.
Phantom Grip - Not really a special move but the beyblade stands its ground, dodging the attacks like the opponent's beyblade is going through.
Flaming Loop - Beams shoot up from the metal wheels and clear wheels and then shoot downwards, aiming straight for the face bolt. This creates a massive explosion, which makes the opponent's bey knock out of the stadium.
SPECIAL ABILITIES
Beyblade special abilities: The bearing drive provides balance and speed, which means the bey has a special ability - ghost evasion. This is where the bey seems to be vulnerable, but actually, it dodges at the precise moment of impact, providing a tad spin steal and an effective evade.