Sep. 04, 2013 3:22 AM
Hey guys!
Making a new story. I've got the basic plot, I just need characters at some times. I only need about 4-6 as of now, but post anyway to give me variety!
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Format:
Name
Bey: (Must be 4D with real parts)
Appearance:
Bio:
Role in story:
Special Moves:
Hope you guys have fun creating!
Making a new story. I've got the basic plot, I just need characters at some times. I only need about 4-6 as of now, but post anyway to give me variety!
Chapter 1
Spoiler (Click to View)
BEEP... BEEEP... BEEEEEP!!!
"Ugh, 7:00 already?"
Hanto rose from his ben and looked at his mirror across the room and jumped with a start. There was a sheet of paper taped above his bed saying "Battle with Naoki at 7:15! Don't forget!"
"LATE, LATE, LATE, LATE, LATE!!!" he yelled as he sprinted to the bathroom to brush his teeth and auburn hair. He then ran back to his room to change into his purple T-shirt, Purple and white striped hoodie, blue jeans, and completely white shoes.
By the time his mom was at his door, he was ready to go.
"Aren't you forgetting something?" she asked, holding something in her hand. It was his blade, Omega Fox.
"Oh, of course! Thanks, Mom!" he said as he ran for the door.
"You'd forget your head if it weren't attached to your body," she yelled after him.
He was running down the street at a fast pace. He was almost out of breath.
He finally made it and looked at his watch.
"7:25?!?!" he yelled. "10 MINUTES LATE!!!"
He bursted through the doors, and yelled at the top of his lungs.
"IT'S OKAY GUYS! I'M HERE!" he screamed.
But there seemed to be something else much more interesting. But he didn't get a good enough look, because he was too busy flying backwards through the door while hearing the words "GO, LEONE!"
There may have been more, but he was pretty sure he was deaf now.
"Ugh, 7:00 already?"
Hanto rose from his ben and looked at his mirror across the room and jumped with a start. There was a sheet of paper taped above his bed saying "Battle with Naoki at 7:15! Don't forget!"
"LATE, LATE, LATE, LATE, LATE!!!" he yelled as he sprinted to the bathroom to brush his teeth and auburn hair. He then ran back to his room to change into his purple T-shirt, Purple and white striped hoodie, blue jeans, and completely white shoes.
By the time his mom was at his door, he was ready to go.
"Aren't you forgetting something?" she asked, holding something in her hand. It was his blade, Omega Fox.
"Oh, of course! Thanks, Mom!" he said as he ran for the door.
"You'd forget your head if it weren't attached to your body," she yelled after him.
He was running down the street at a fast pace. He was almost out of breath.
He finally made it and looked at his watch.
"7:25?!?!" he yelled. "10 MINUTES LATE!!!"
He bursted through the doors, and yelled at the top of his lungs.
"IT'S OKAY GUYS! I'M HERE!" he screamed.
But there seemed to be something else much more interesting. But he didn't get a good enough look, because he was too busy flying backwards through the door while hearing the words "GO, LEONE!"
There may have been more, but he was pretty sure he was deaf now.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Hanto was BLOWN straight through the glass doors of the Beypark. The glass poked its way into his skin as he yelled in pain. Then came another gust of wind. He watched as Naoki flew out the door and landed next to him.
"Owowowow!" he yelled. "This really hurts!"
"What's going on?" Hanto asked.
"A really strong blader showed up and challenged everyone here. He's got a Leone."
"REALLY? I COULDN'T TELL!"
"Cut the sarcasm, Hanto. We need to do something."
As Hanto was about to respond, a voice sounded from up the street.
"YOU guys don't have to do anything! I'll take care of this!"
"Oh, not her, please don't be her!" Naoki pleaded.
''It's me, Yizui Akato!"
"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!"
Yizui sprinted over to them happily.
"My Phantom Phoenix can beat anyone!" she gloated while flashing her bey. "Be right back!"
The girl pulled out her launcher and ran into the building. Hanto and Naoki followed, one painful step after another.
When they finally got inside, Yizui was already in battle.
"Go, Phoenix! Take him down" she yelled.
Hanto squinted to see Yizui's bey charging at its green opponent.
"Wait a sec..." he said to Naoki. "Green bey, Leone, the sound of his voice, it's Kyoya!"
"Oh, yeah..." Naoki said. "Kinda forgot to mention that."
Hanto began running for the stadium, while readying up his launcher.
"What are you doing?" Naoki yelled after him.
"I've gotta save Yizui before her bey gets crushed!"
Meanwhile at the stadium, Yizui was in trouble. Phoenix was almost done for. She didn't know how much more she could take.
Suddenly, Hanto ran in the middle of things yelling.
"STOP, YIZUI! HE'S GONNA DESTROY YOUR BEY!
"Hey, she was smart mouthing me!" Kyoya said."She deserves it."
"Nobody deserves to have their bey destroyed," Hanto yelled.
"It doesn't matter, anyways. You're too late." Kyoya said. "Counter Mode, Leone!"
Leone quickly switched modes and charged forward. With one hit, Phoenix was knocked out of the stadium. Hanto saw pieces of metal around it.
"Phoenix, NOOOOOOO!!!" Yizui yelled. She ran over to her bey.
"Alright, my turn!" Hanto said angrily, stepping up to the stadium. He showed his bey.
"This is my Omega Fox 90XF, and I will defeat you with it!" he yelled.
"We'll see," Kyoya responded in a nonchalant tone.
Kids were starting to get up and surround the stadium. Hanto knew he had to win. For the kids, and Yizui, and the Beypark.
"3,2,1,Let it RIP!!!"
"Owowowow!" he yelled. "This really hurts!"
"What's going on?" Hanto asked.
"A really strong blader showed up and challenged everyone here. He's got a Leone."
"REALLY? I COULDN'T TELL!"
"Cut the sarcasm, Hanto. We need to do something."
As Hanto was about to respond, a voice sounded from up the street.
"YOU guys don't have to do anything! I'll take care of this!"
"Oh, not her, please don't be her!" Naoki pleaded.
''It's me, Yizui Akato!"
"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!"
Yizui sprinted over to them happily.
"My Phantom Phoenix can beat anyone!" she gloated while flashing her bey. "Be right back!"
The girl pulled out her launcher and ran into the building. Hanto and Naoki followed, one painful step after another.
When they finally got inside, Yizui was already in battle.
"Go, Phoenix! Take him down" she yelled.
Hanto squinted to see Yizui's bey charging at its green opponent.
"Wait a sec..." he said to Naoki. "Green bey, Leone, the sound of his voice, it's Kyoya!"
"Oh, yeah..." Naoki said. "Kinda forgot to mention that."
Hanto began running for the stadium, while readying up his launcher.
"What are you doing?" Naoki yelled after him.
"I've gotta save Yizui before her bey gets crushed!"
Meanwhile at the stadium, Yizui was in trouble. Phoenix was almost done for. She didn't know how much more she could take.
Suddenly, Hanto ran in the middle of things yelling.
"STOP, YIZUI! HE'S GONNA DESTROY YOUR BEY!
"Hey, she was smart mouthing me!" Kyoya said."She deserves it."
"Nobody deserves to have their bey destroyed," Hanto yelled.
"It doesn't matter, anyways. You're too late." Kyoya said. "Counter Mode, Leone!"
Leone quickly switched modes and charged forward. With one hit, Phoenix was knocked out of the stadium. Hanto saw pieces of metal around it.
"Phoenix, NOOOOOOO!!!" Yizui yelled. She ran over to her bey.
"Alright, my turn!" Hanto said angrily, stepping up to the stadium. He showed his bey.
"This is my Omega Fox 90XF, and I will defeat you with it!" he yelled.
"We'll see," Kyoya responded in a nonchalant tone.
Kids were starting to get up and surround the stadium. Hanto knew he had to win. For the kids, and Yizui, and the Beypark.
"3,2,1,Let it RIP!!!"
Format:
Name
Bey: (Must be 4D with real parts)
Appearance:
Bio:
Role in story:
Special Moves:
Hope you guys have fun creating!
