Beyblade Burst X-Rush

(Jan. 13, 2019  3:14 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Best story ever how do you make these so incredible

And mine but to be on topic you are right
(Jan. 13, 2019  3:17 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jan. 13, 2019  3:14 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Best story ever how do you make these so incredible

Ooh, can you read my story?

I did

(Jan. 13, 2019  3:14 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Best story ever how do you make these so incredible
The power of
I M A G I N A T I O N

Chapter 8: The Awakening! Battle In The Woods!
On the next day, Buzz was walking from the school as heard a voice calling him.
"Buzz! Hey, stop!"
Buzz: Ah? He turned around.
Roan was running towards him.
Buzz: Ah? What happened?
Roan: Some guy just left a note on your desk.
Buzz: Who was it? Do you know him?
Roan: Ummm... No, i didn't even see who was it properly.
Buzz: Give me a note. I wanna see it.
Roan gave Buzz a strange paper with inaccurate writings.
"See you in the woods."
                                     - Moto
Buzz: What? Who is Moto?
Roan: I don't know! But anyways you can't go there without me and Ferro.
Buzz: Why?
Roan: That can be dangerous!
Buzz: Then we should start preparing right now.

- One Hour Later -
Buzz: Here we are! Are you guys ready?
Ferro and Roan: Yes!
Buzz: Then, let's go!
Everyone started going through the woods.
Sometime later, they noticed a small river that was blocking the way.
Ferro: The only way we can get through this river, is climbing on the trees.
He started climbing a big tree. Buzz and Roan followed him.
As they progressed going throught the woods was harder and harder... Suddenly, Buzz discovered an open field with a hemp-like arena.
Buzz: Hello? Is someone's here? Hel- Oh, my God!
Someone dropped on the ground right in front of Buzz.
Buzz: Who are you!?
Moto: My name is Moto. And I challenge you to battle my friends. If we win, we are taking your beyblade from you.
Buzz: Ummm... Why should I agree to do this?
Suddenly, a lot of voices said:
"Because then, we will steal it."
Buzz turned around. Four guys were standing on the ground holding their beyblades.
The fat guy spoke:
Storm: My name is Storm. My beyblade is a defense type - Quake Thunderstorm.
Then, the tall guy spoke.
Flash: My name is Flash. My beyblade is an attack type - Flying Lightning.
The small guy spoke:
Rain: My name is Rain. My beyblade is a stamina type - Tombstone Spider.
And, the last guy spoke:
Aero: My name is Aero. My beyblade is a balance type - Tornado Eagle.
All three: We are challenging you to battle.
Suddenly, Ferro and Roan jumped from the bush.
Ferro and Roan: Only if we will battle too!
Everyone: Challenge Accepted!
All of them walked up to the hemp and got their launchers out.
Moto: I will be watching.
Ready? Set!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1! LET IT RIP!
All of the beyblades fell onto the hemp.
Geardini sat in the centre, Revenge hopped over everyone, Fengriff was swirling around the ridge.
Thunderstorm was attacking Geardini, fighting for the centre. Fengriff and Lightning was circling and hitting each other to the walls.
Spider was circling around the centre, stalling everyone out. Eagle was litterally hovering in the air, countering Revenge from the air.
Buzz: Go, Geardini! Galaxy Defense! X-RUSH MODE!
Geardini formed the bubble around it and was almost untoucheable. Thunderstorm tried to break through, but ended up hitting the Lightning.
Flash: Hey! Watch out what are you doing, dumbass!
Storm: I am very sorry! Go, Thunderstorm, X-RUSH MODE!
Thunderstorm rushed to the centre and broke Geardini's bubble. He flew off the centre and hit the wall.
Buzz: Go, Geardini! Galaxy Counter!
It flew back to the Thunderstorm and crushed into him. Thunderstorm flew out of the stadium and hit the tree. Geardini returned to the centre.
Storm: No-o-o!
At the same time, Lightning hit Fengriff to the wall and it fell to the ground.
Ferro: No! Fengriff!
Revenge hopped onto into the air and hit Eagle from below. It countered the attack, but Revenge crushed into the Spider, causing it to hit the ground and burst.
Rain: Uh!? Impossible!
Now there was only 4 beyblades. Eagle, Geardini, Revenge and Lightning.
Eagle lost some of its spin and fell onto the ground.
Aero: Now, the real battle begins! Go, Eagle! Tornado Zone!
Eagle rushed to the centre and took it from Geardini. It formed small tornado above itself.
Geardini tried to attack it, but Lightning quickly separated them by hitting Geardini. Revenge tried to hop onto the Eagle, but the tornado lifted it away.
Roan: Uh? What was that? Go, Revenge! X-RUSH MODE!
Revenge hopped to the wall and slided into Lightning, causing it to accelerate and hit Eagle.
Using the moment, Geardini drifted to the centre and took it from Eagle.
Aero: You dumbass! What did you do!?
Flash: It wasn't me, you idiot! It was Revenge! Go, Lightning! X-RUSH MODE!
It quickly accelerated and hit Revenge. It hit the wall and flew back into Lightning.
But the Lightning escaped the attack. Instead, Revenge hit Geardini. It swirled out of the centre and started drifting around the edge.
Eagle started attacking Revenge. It hopped out of the stadium and bursted.
Roan: AH!
Aero: And there's only one left. Ah, what a drama! Buzz loses his favourite bey!
Buzz: Not today! Geardini! Galaxy Hammer! It hit Lightning and Eagle simultaneosly.
Flash: Argh, why can't you die already?
Buzz: Because I am too strong for you! Muahahahaha!
Flash: Ah, you troublemaker! You want me to show my true power, are you? Let it be! Lightning, Silver Lightning Strike!
Suddenly, something fantastic happened. Multiple silver lightnings started to come out of the Flying Lightning.
Buzz: No, wait! It was a joke! Stop! Stop!
But it was already too late. Lightning rushed at Geardini with unbelievable speed and crushed into it.
They clashed for a while and Geardini started to wiggle and lose its power.
Buzz: Please, no!
Geardini scraped the floor and rolled somewhere.
...
But it refused to die.
Suddenly, it sat in the centre and got all its power back.
It formed a big tornado around it.
Everyone: Huh!? What's going on? He really had the power we couldn't have!
And then, Geardini rushed at Lightning and Eagle and hit them furiosly.
Geardini stopped spinning. Eagle flew into the woods.
The Lightning fell onto the ground, crushed into pieces.
Flash: Oh, wow... His power is extraordinary! Really!
All of them ran away rushfully.
Roan: Wow! I didn't know you was so powerful!
Ferro: What was that move? Teach me, please!
Buzz: Ummmm... I don't know yet, but that was powerful! Hahaha!
They rushed back through the woods and got home.
When they got to the city, Buzz got a message.
"Team Tournament starts on Next Week."
                                             - Moto

To Be Continued...
(Jan. 14, 2019  2:03 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Cool this is getting intense

New chapters everyday! Thanks!
Cant wait are you gonna add more bladers for the tournament? Do you need ideas?
(Jan. 14, 2019  2:08 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Cant wait are you gonna add more bladers for the tournament? Do you need ideas?

Spoiler: A big event is coming to this story.
Also, you can create and PM your charachter if you want.
Lots of reports coming in on this thread, so I've cleaned everything up back to just before it got horribly derailed.

Thanks for your patience!
(Jan. 15, 2019  2:28 AM)~Mana~ Wrote: Lots of reports coming in on this thread, so I've cleaned everything up back to just before it got horribly derailed.

Thanks for your patience!

Thank you we are very grateful! Smile
(Jan. 16, 2019  1:11 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Whens next chapter

IDK
I am tired
I love how this series beings beys that never had an anime appearance, such as Ifrit and Phantom. I'd love to see some more like this, such as Minoboros and maybe even some Hasbro-exclusives like Diomedes.
(Jan. 16, 2019  5:41 PM)Atlas Requiem Wrote: I love how this series beings beys that never had an anime appearance, such as Ifrit and Phantom. I'd love to see some more like this, such as Minoboros and maybe even some Hasbro-exclusives like Diomedes.
Coming soon lol
Chapter 9: The Team Tournament!
The days passed by, Buzz didn't even noticed how fast. Team Tournament was coming tommorow and he was training with his team.
On the next day everyone rushed to WBBA. Tournament was starting in an hour.
Buzz, Roan and Ferro were sprinting down the street, as they realised that Storm was watching them.
Roan: Hey! Isn't that the guy with Tornado Eagle?
Buzz: Yeah, it looks like it is.
Ferro: Hey, you! Aero!
It looks like he didn't notice.
Buzz: I think he will be on the tournament too.
They started sprinting again.

- 10 Minutes Later -
Hanami: Hey, hey, hey! Boys and Girls! Today we are starting a Big Team Tournament! First there will be a Test Stage 1 and Test Stage 2. Then, there will be team battles!
On first stage you need to assemble your beyblade together. Preapre all the details! Test Stage 1 starts... Now!
Everyone started assembling their beyblades. Buzz noticed Aero with his were assembing their beyblades too. It looked like Aero lost one of his parts.
Hanami: Stop!
The Referee checked everyone's beyblades. Aero and Some-Other-Guy were eliminated due to the lost part.
Then, the Stage 2 started. Everyone rushed to a big arena and launched their beyblades.
Buzz: What a mess! I hope I will stay in.
Ferro and Roan: Me too!
Soon, everyone fell down and only the best players left.
And then, the tournament started.
Hanami: There will be 4 groups: A, B, C and D. Each group will have 8 teams. For today, we will have 2 Battles from each group.
1 Battle.
Group A: The Towering Tigers, Group B: The Red Goats. Group C: The Fire Guards, Group D: The Big Blacks.
Roan: Oh, Great! It's our battle now!
Ferro: Who should go first?
Buzz: You, Ferro, should go first.
Both of the players walked onto the arena.
Ready? Set!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1!
Ferro and Qwet: LET IT RIP!

To Be Continued...

Sorry for the short chapter. I am tired today.
(Jan. 17, 2019  3:09 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Chapter 9: The Team Tournament!
The days passed by, Buzz didn't even noticed how fast. Team Tournament was coming tommorow and he was training with his team.
On the next day everyone rushed to WBBA. Tournament was starting in an hour.
Buzz, Roan and Ferro were sprinting down the street, as they realised that Storm was watching them.
Roan: Hey! Isn't that the guy with Tornado Eagle?
Buzz: Yeah, it looks like it is.
Ferro: Hey, you! Aero!
It looks like he didn't notice.
Buzz: I think he will be on the tournament too.
They started sprinting again.

- 10 Minutes Later -
Hanami: Hey, hey, hey! Boys and Girls! Today we are starting a Big Team Tournament! First there will be a Test Stage 1 and Test Stage 2. Then, there will be team battles!
On first stage you need to assemble your beyblade together. Preapre all the details! Test Stage 1 starts... Now!
Everyone started assembling their beyblades. Buzz noticed Aero with his were assembing their beyblades too. It looked like Aero lost one of his parts.
Hanami: Stop!
The Referee checked everyone's beyblades. Aero and Some-Other-Guy were eliminated due to the lost part.
Then, the Stage 2 started. Everyone rushed to a big arena and launched their beyblades.
Buzz: What a mess! I hope I will stay in.
Ferro and Roan: Me too!
Soon, everyone fell down and only the best players left.
And then, the tournament started.
Hanami: There will be 4 groups: A, B, C and D. Each group will have 8 teams. For today, we will have 2 Battles from each group.
1 Battle.
Group A: The Towering Tigers, Group B: The Red Goats. Group C: The Fire Guards, Group D: The Big Blacks.
Roan: Oh, Great! It's our battle now!
Ferro: Who should go first?
Buzz: You, Ferro, should go first.
Both of the players walked onto the arena.
Ready? Set!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1!
Ferro and Qwet: LET IT RIP!

To Be Continued...

Sorry for the short chapter. I am tired today.

It was good and it was not that short. Smile
(Jan. 17, 2019  9:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jan. 17, 2019  3:09 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Chapter 9: The Team Tournament!
The days passed by, Buzz didn't even noticed how fast. Team Tournament was coming tommorow and he was training with his team.
On the next day everyone rushed to WBBA. Tournament was starting in an hour.
Buzz, Roan and Ferro were sprinting down the street, as they realised that Storm was watching them.
Roan: Hey! Isn't that the guy with Tornado Eagle?
Buzz: Yeah, it looks like it is.
Ferro: Hey, you! Aero!
It looks like he didn't notice.
Buzz: I think he will be on the tournament too.
They started sprinting again.

- 10 Minutes Later -
Hanami: Hey, hey, hey! Boys and Girls! Today we are starting a Big Team Tournament! First there will be a Test Stage 1 and Test Stage 2. Then, there will be team battles!
On first stage you need to assemble your beyblade together. Preapre all the details! Test Stage 1 starts... Now!
Everyone started assembling their beyblades. Buzz noticed Aero with his were assembing their beyblades too. It looked like Aero lost one of his parts.
Hanami: Stop!
The Referee checked everyone's beyblades. Aero and Some-Other-Guy were eliminated due to the lost part.
Then, the Stage 2 started. Everyone rushed to a big arena and launched their beyblades.
Buzz: What a mess! I hope I will stay in.
Ferro and Roan: Me too!
Soon, everyone fell down and only the best players left.
And then, the tournament started.
Hanami: There will be 4 groups: A, B, C and D. Each group will have 8 teams. For today, we will have 2 Battles from each group.
1 Battle.
Group A: The Towering Tigers, Group B: The Red Goats. Group C: The Fire Guards, Group D: The Big Blacks.
Roan: Oh, Great! It's our battle now!
Ferro: Who should go first?
Buzz: You, Ferro, should go first.
Both of the players walked onto the arena.
Ready? Set!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1!
Ferro and Qwet: LET IT RIP!

To Be Continued...

Sorry for the short chapter. I am tired today.

It was good and it was not that short. Smile

tank y!
(Jan. 18, 2019  1:51 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: What team is my character

Rude.
(Jan. 18, 2019  3:17 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Jan. 18, 2019  1:51 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: What team is my character

Rude.

Did not mean it like that

Like i meant what team is my request character in
Guys, this is not dead. I am just taking a break to get new ideas and to have some relaxation.
Don't worry, I will return S00N.







Let's fix it with a controlled shock.
(Feb. 22, 2019  10:21 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Guys, this is not dead. I am just taking a break to get new ideas and to have some relaxation.
Don't worry, I will return S00N.







Let's fix it with a controlled shock.

When is your break ending  the series. Was getting good
(Feb. 26, 2019  2:02 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote:
(Feb. 22, 2019  10:21 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Guys, this is not dead. I am just taking a break to get new ideas and to have some relaxation.
Don't worry, I will return S00N.







Let's fix it with a controlled shock.

When is your break ending  the series. Was getting good

S00N.
Chapter 10: The Sandbox!
The beyblades fell onto arena.
Or more like onto each other.
They clashed for a while and then Another Beyblade bursted.
Ferro: Yaiks! That was fast!
Referee: 2 Points for Burst Finish! Ferro Weston wins!
Qwet: ...okay.
He walked away slowly.
Ferro: Who's next?
Roan: Me! Me!
He sprinted towards the arena.
The opponent was already there.
Koda: Oh, seriously? You are weak!
Roan: Yeah! You will see my power!
Koda and Roan: 3, 2, 1!
Everyone: LET IT RIP!
The beyblades fell onto the arena.
Revenge started hopping, as Kernel sat in the centre.
Roan: Revenge! Go!
Revenge immediatly hopped onto the Kernel multiple times, smashing it to the ground.
Soon, Kernel stopped spinning.
Roan: Yeah! Take it!
Koda: Oh, you... That wasn't an end! Witness my power!
Referee: 1 Point to Smash Revenge! Spin-Out Finish!
Battle 2.
Ready? Set!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1!
Koda and Roan: LET IT RIP!
The beyblades fell onto the arena.
This time, Kernel was circling around. But that ain't gonna stop Revenge.
Revenge hopped onto Kernel, he hit the and bursted.
Roan: Yas!
Referee: Burst Finish! 2 Points to Smash Revenge! Roan wins!
Hanami: Yo, yo! That was unexpected! Maybe?
Buzz: That was unexpected! Great job!
Roan: Yeah, yeah...
Ferro: It's your time to shine! Go, Buzz!
Buzz: Okay!

To Be Continued...
Hey I have a character and bey request my character name is jack and his bey is inferno wolf