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Beyblade Academy

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Jan. 26, 2011  1:01 AM
 
I was not so creative with the title. I will change it soon, if I think of something better Anyway, Im basing this on Yugioh GX (One of my favorite anime when I was younger, so anyway. The start is going to start alot similar to how GX Started, but it will get more original after that. So don't get on my case about it)

Chapter 1: Enter! The Beyblade Academy
~~Narrator:It is time again, like every year at Bey Academy. The entrance exams are starting. These exams start the journey of a young boy living in the Bey Village,Where will these exams take the young lad, we will find out. Now enter Takuya Kazumake (Kah Zu Mah Key)!

*Sound Effect* Ring ring ring

"Yaaaawn...Another day, another battle as I say" Takuya pushed the button his alarm clock to turn it off.

"Time to get dressed" Takuya reaches to his closet and puts on his clothe. His red jacket with white stripes on the sleeves, pants with white stripes around it, and his black gloves. He then gets a brush and fixes his hair. His hair is black, with a blue streak going down the side.

"All ready" said Takuya while he walked down the stairs. Takuya ran down the stairs, past the kitchen grabbing a paper bag with his lunch in it.

He ran out the door, but not before telling his mom "Bye mom, gonna go over to Haze's house for a beybattle, I'll be back later" Before he walked out the door, his mom grabbed his arm "Takuya..." She toke a pause

"You forget did'nt you", "Forgot what? Confused Takuya said with a puzzled face. "The Bey Academy entrance exams"

Takuya stared with a blank expression on his face, but that expression did not last long. "OH MY GOD I FORGOT!! Gasp "No time left to waste, bye mom!!" Takuya ran out that door like his house was on fire, he got on his bike and rode as fast as he could to the Bey Academy entrance exams

"Gotta make it, gotta make it, gotta make it, I have to make it!" Takuya keep chanting that as he rode, after a while he could see the building. He soon was just a few feet away from the entrance but, he crashed into another kid.

"Ow...that hurt" Said Takuya while he was rubbing his hair. Takuya got up and helped the other kid up "You ok dude?" The other kid got up and said "I'm alright, My name is Sato, short for Satoshi" Sato extended his arm "My name is Takuya, short for nothing." Takuya shoke his hand. Sato looked over Takuya's shoulder "...Dude...your bike is broken" Takuya turned around and saw his bike crashed into a tree "Ehh..it's ok, where I'm going I don't need a bike. I'm going to Bey Academy, once I go to the exams", Sato looked at Takuya and said "Wow, I'm applying to go there also." They both stared at each other. "Were gonna be late..." Said Sato. "Time to run like the wind" said Takuya.


They both ran and ran and soon got to the Bey Academy entrance exams. They barged in the doors and both yelled "WERE HERE!!" Everyone on the stands stared at them" After a while of embarrassment a teacher wearing a white robe came over. "Hello there, my name is Gadd, but most just call me Professor G, I assume you are here for the entrance exams?" Both Nodded. "Well you both came before we were about to close, but we only have one dorm space left." Takuya and Sato looked at each other and said "WHAT!" the professor closed his eyes and said "I got an idea, normally you battle a proctor and see if your good enough to enter the Academy but...you will battle each other for the last room. Sato and Takuya looked at Professor G with a surprised face, but then they looked at each other and their face of Suprise turned into a face of Rivalry. Both then called out saying "Bring it on"


They both walked to center stage to enter the arena. In the middle, they saw the Beystadium. They were both fascinated at the sight, their normal stadium was no more bigger then a TV or so. But this stadium was wide, it toke up nearly the entire center of the arena. The crowd was eagerly waiting this battle, but mostly three people. Professor G, And two mysterious people in the stands.


Takuya toke out his Green Launcher grip, slide his launcher into the slot. He pulled out a beyblade and attached it to the launcher, then he shoved in his Winder. "You ready Sato?

Sato toke out a Blue Launcher grip, he mimicked the same actions that Takuya had previously done. He attached his bey and replied " Of course, Lets go!"

The crowd then chanted. "3....2....1" Sato and Takuya both pulled their winders and shouted "GO SHOOT!!!"

END OF CHAAAAAPTER!


So you don't get to know what beyblade Takuya and Sato use. But you can get a hint by what color their launcher is..maybe.

Will work on the next chapter soon. Hope you like it
Jan. 26, 2011  1:11 AM
 
I'm actually okay with the title.
Jan. 26, 2011  1:15 AM
 
Thanks Ultimate, I may not change it if people like it.

Also, forgot to mention. I will take SOME Character Request, if you guys want to make any. I already have a plot set, but I did on purpose, leave some room for Charectar Request. Some will be recurring charectars, some will be minor, and I left some spaces for Mains. So if you want to post a Charectar Request. go ahead, I might accept it, I might not. If I do accept it, I won't tell you if it is a Main, or whatever. (Read to find out lol) But I will say if I accepted it or not.

Just post.

Beyblade Name: (Metal Wheel, Clear Wheel, Track, Bottom)
Charectar Name: (Obvious what you put in here..)
Charectar's Look (What does he look like?)
Charectar's Personality: (...Yeah...)
Jan. 26, 2011  1:22 AM
 
Beyblade Name: Earth Bull GB145SD
Character Name: Kaizer
Character's Look White, shaggy hair, big, wandering eyes, tall and skinny
Character's Personality: driven mad by a blader bully in his earlier childhood who tore his bey apart and is now seeking revenge (this one deserves epic flash back with tears and the losing of his mind).
Jan. 26, 2011  1:25 AM
 
...Lol!, (Although not exact) This was actually what one of the characters was gonna be like (The, had a bad childhood, driven insane. blah blah blah) Anyway, Accepted
Jan. 26, 2011  2:39 AM
 
bey name- Sky Fireblaze (left spin)
bladers name- Kato Shinji
Appearence-Black afro, african skin tone ,blue jacket, yellow t shirt, red pants ,purples shoes, and a green bey,string launcher,and launcher grip
Personality- good friend, kindhearted, chatty ,amazing blader, and is trying to save his family from poverty and his brother who has leukemia. he is muscular.
Sky Fusion wheel is round and bumpy with tiny spikes. The spikes are for extra friction. spin track- FS145 (flat studs). When the opponents blade attacks from below, the studs slow down your foe's bey.
performance tip- WB(wide ball)
Oh, and the spin track is green (like the other parts) and has plastic studs on it.
Jan. 26, 2011  2:42 AM
 
Ah-huh...

Not Accepted. But try and fix it, if you are using custom-made parts, please add in a
Custom Part Explanation: (explain what the custom part does, look like)
Anyway, you are missing Track and Bottom.
Jan. 26, 2011  5:10 AM
 
This isn't bad, and I don't know why you think it isn't too good. It's really good! And can you read my story? The link is in my signature.
Jan. 26, 2011  10:32 PM
 
It actually is a good character. Just needs a little bit of cleaning up.
Jan. 26, 2011  11:43 PM
 
Very good story. The name is ok. Can you accept my characters.

Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.

Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blue and is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.

Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.

Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.

He is a good guy.

Name: Briel
Beblade: Green Libra 100 WB ( Green Is like rock but bigger and green ) The bey is all green.
Special Move: Green Tornado. Libra makes a green tornado turning all things green and blowing the opponent bey away.
Look: He is obssesed with green. Green hair (hair is like ginka's), Green T shirt, Green jeans, Green shoes, Green skin.
He is a very strong blader and wants to get even stronger. He play all the time but when is time to get serius he get serius. And he is very very smart. He is good

Briel is 13 year old. From little he is beyblading. His bey was flame libra. When he was 6 there was a big explotion in his town and his fathers die. Since then he have been around the world beyblading and getting strong. In a town Green Libra felt from the sky hit him in the head. Flame libra disapered. When trainign with the very powerfull Green Libra 100WB the bey caused an explotion that turn him green.
Since then he uses his clothes all green.

They are best friends friends. They are friends since the fathers of Briel die.
Jan. 27, 2011  12:12 AM
 
The first one is accepted.
The second one is great, but not right for this story. So I'm not gonna accept it.

Working on Chapa-2
Jan. 27, 2011  12:57 AM
 
I have a character request so.. yeah. Hope you accept it.

Name: Ryo Kusanagi
Bey: Tremor Saturn RD145RB (Tremor has no ridges at all, so its very defensive. its also very wide, measuring 50MMs At Most. RD145 Stands For Ring Defense 145, it is as wide as boost defense, but it has rubber linings on it.
RB stands for Rubber Ball.)
Looks: Black Emo Hair With red highlights that cover his left eye. Black WBBA T-Shirt And Faded Blue Jeans.
Personality: Willing To protect his friends whatever it costs. Laid Back.
Age: 15
Sorry, almost forgot...
Special Attack: Ring Blast: Creates A large energy ring that could destroy a portion of the stadium
Saturn Smash: Saturns' Spirit appears and destroys the opponent Bit beast.
Judgement: Creates A very large energy ball That Follows The opponent.
Jan. 27, 2011  3:37 AM
 
Ehh.. Accepted, but he will appear later, I have a special idea for him.

Almost done on chaptar-2
Jan. 27, 2011  3:38 AM
 
beyblade academy ? wow nice idea : )
Jan. 27, 2011  3:40 AM
 
Please post chapter 2
Jan. 27, 2011  4:02 AM
 
~~Narrator: Welcome back, Last time on Beyblade Academy! We met out hero Takuya, as he was on his way to the entrance exams of the prestiged Beyblade Academy, He ran into a boy named Sato. Turns out both Sato and Takuya were heading to the Entrance exams, when they finally rushed over there Professor G(add) informed them that there was only ONE dorm room left. In the end Takuya and Sato agreed to beybattle for the room. Who will pack their bags crying, and who will enter?! Found out now!


Chapter 2- The Shooting Star!?



Takuya and Sato both pulled their winders and yelled "GO SHOOT!".

Takuya yelled out "Go! Flame Libra!" Sato then yelled out in return "Go, Storm Anubis!"
The two Beys rushed to the center of the stadium, both clashing. Not giving up, until one fell back

*Sound Effect Metal clash*

"Go, Storm Anubis! Attack!" Anubis quickly toke a turn and slammed into Libra from the side, knocking it to the edge of the stadium. "Nice try Sato, you're not half bad" Libra managed to slide back into the bottom of the stadium ,landing neatly into the center while Anubis circled around. "What!?" Sato shouted in suprise Gasp

Takuya then explained what had happened "Well Sato, my Libra's Eternal Sharp tip is free spinning, so it was easily able to just slide back into the stadium. To make it even more simple, You can't knock me out Tongue_out_wink" Takuya then laughed as Sato smirked, "Well Takuya, sorry to make it hard for you, ANUBIS. GO!" Anubis ran to the edge of the stadium, going straight forward thus going into the air. "Giving up, eh Sato?"
Sato smirked again and replied "Far from it, Anubis! SPECIAL MOVE!ConfusedHOOTING STAR ATTACK!"

Everyone in the stands stood up confused by this Confused.
~~Narrator: The Shooting Star attack was the ace move of Ginga Hagane, the son of the person, who had founded Beyblade Academy. It was a legendary move only known to be mastered by Ginga. As you can guess, the founder was....Ryo Hagane!~~"

Anubis started crashing down hitting Libra, but everyone in the stands knew it was just a simple aerial attack, far from the power of a special move. Let alone the Shooting Star attack. "Eh Sato, this all you got? Libra! Now!" Libra did a matrix motion sliding away from Anubis, thus making Anubis have nothing to stand on, making it crash into the floor of the stadium. But, it did not make a hole and simply crash, it slide around the stadium vertically!, in it's last breath it hit Flame Libra causing both of them to be knocked out of the Stadium.

Professor G then yelled "The battle is over!, It is a Draw!" Takuya and Sato both picked up their beys with a smile, knowing they had done an epic battle. Two mysterious figures were having a conversation in the stands. "The boy had me going for a while, I thought he had mastered the Shooting Star" The other one replied "I know of course he could not do it, anyway. New fresh meat for the academy, I can't wait to rip their beys to scrap metal." The two figures had left.

Takuya and Sato confronted Professor Gadd, "Well G, Who wins the Dorm if we had a tie?" Sato replied to Takuya's statement "Do we battle again" Professor G sat down, and thought about it. He then smirked and laughed "I got it, hahahaha. I think it would be best for both of you to...SHARE THE DORM ROOM. It would benefit you both, it would help improve both your skills immensely." Takuya and Sato both looked at each other and smiled. "We both did it!" said Takuya, they both handshaked and boarded the Airplane heading to the Beyblade Academy Island. Starting their new lifes, and adventure"


END OF CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPTER!

New Charectar Bios!

Name:Takuya Kazumake
Beyblade:Flame LibraT125ES
Look: His red jacket with white stripes on the sleeves, a white shirt underneath, red pants with white stripes around it, and his black gloves. He . His hair is black, with a blue streak going down the side. His shoes are blue.
Personality: A boy who loves to battle, but can get cocky sometimes. He gets to confident once a battle goes his way, but before that he tries his hardest. He is not a boy you can trust with your secrets or anything, he can tell a mean joke or pull a prank. But all in all, he is a good freind and a good blader.

NameConfusedatoshi "Sato" Koraza
Beyblade: Storm Anubis105F
Look: Snow colored hair with a yellow headband, with a blue jacket, with a black shirt underneath, dark blue pants, his shoes are yellow.
Personality: An honest boy who trys to stay out of trouble, he is amazed by beyblade though and will try whatever he needs to win a battle. Of course though he will not resort to cheating. He is a hard working guy, who will persevere to get what he wants.


Name: Professor Gadd "G"
Beyblade:Unknown
Look/Personality: He has yellow hair, which is great for his age. He is an old man, wearing a traditional lab coat with black points, brown shoes. He is one of the head professors of the Academy, and has taken a liking to Takuya and Sato. He has a Beyblade, and knows a lot about beyblade terminology and parts. No one has seen him battle yet, but a rumor has it that his Beyblade is ferocious.
He has
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Hope you guys liked this one, now we start getting into Academy life next episode, and introduce some new characters. (Including some of the accepted ones)
Jan. 27, 2011  4:18 AM
 
Awesome story! I'ma put a char in later!
Jan. 27, 2011  4:35 AM
 
Thanks for the comment, and I'll look forward to the char.
Jan. 27, 2011  4:56 AM
 
nice story! i really like it! i will post some characters, and you can pick which ones you like most.

here:


Name: Trey Robinson
Bey: Flame Eagle WA130RSF
Type: Balance
Appearance: Black hair, brown eyes, red t-shirt with black jeans, running shoes (he hates converses and the like)
Bio: A nice fellow, has some very good friends, used to use Clay Aquario until his birthday, when his parents bought some beys and put together Flame Eagle for him.
Special Move(s):

Giga Flame Wing Burst- Flame Eagles track begins to spin real fast, then flames start to rise, engulfing everything in the arena. A giant eagle mad of fire rises out of the face and lets loose a loud attack cry. The bey rams the opposing bey into the air, where the rising fire stops any chance of an attack.

Rush Flame- Flame Eagle surrounds itself with a bright flame and starts to move really fast, quickly attacking the opposing bey, used as a counter.



Name: Dennis Spirin
Bey: Storm Wolf T125CS
Type: Attack
Appearance: Brownish hair, blue eyes, blue t-shirt with red track pants, running shoes
Bio: A really nice guy just like Trey. Sometimes can be over-confident. Likes to beybattle with friends. Has had Storm Wolf ever since he was a little boy. Can be quick to anger.

Special Move(s):

Tornado Fangs: Wolf starts to spin faster and faster until the track whips up a tornado shaped like a wolf. Then Wolf charges into the opponent and smashes it out of the ring.

Twister Howl: A twister is created by the track. Then a Wolf aura appears around the bey and Dennis too (only if he's really mad.) A loud howl is heard, and Wolf's attack power is increased by 2x

Name: Tory Sukai

Appearance: Blue denim jeans, sky blue shirt that has his bey's face design imprinted on it, short black hair.

Personality: Tory is an optimist, and usually you can't bring him down. He has many friends, and not many enemies. Anyone who stands near him will feel his positive energy. He is not a pushover either. If somebody were to challenge him, he wouldn't back down.

Beyblade: Sky Jay S125(Sing 125)SF

The face of Tory's beyblade depicts a blue jay whistling, with notes around it. The notes spell the word "Jay". The Jay Clear Wheel closely resembles the Eagle Clear Wheel, except Jay is coloured sky blue, and the wings flow more. It is extremely light, weighing only about 2-3g. The Sky Metal Wheel has 3 wing projections on it. The wings are curved, and are also completely symmetrical. The way the wheel is designed can provide some Upper Attack. Sky is also very light. The Sing 125 Track has holes put in specific places. The purpose of these holes is to make a whistling sound when a bey with this piece is spinning. Anybody that hears it instantly feels serene and peaceful. Their will to fight is usually gone, or at least diminished. Another advantage to the holes is decreased weight, which allows Sky Jay to almost glide around any stadium.

Special Move: Song Bird Dive- The S125 Track activates, soothing the opponent. Then, Sky Jay uses its weightlessness to fly into the air and dive-bomb the opponent while it's fatigued by Sky Jay's song.


take a pick! lol
Jan. 27, 2011  5:08 AM
 
I had a thing planned out for about 2-4 chapters later, and I can use all 3 of those for what I've planned. So all 3 accepted
Jan. 27, 2011  9:54 PM
 
Working on Chapter 3, this is gonna be a long one like the first chapter because I need to introduce some new characters, and other events
Jan. 27, 2011  10:37 PM
 
hey zeox, can you accept my characters? I fixed them.
Jan. 27, 2011  10:58 PM
 
Hmm.. Accepted, but he won't appear until later.

Half-way done with chapa 3
Jan. 28, 2011  3:07 AM
 
I hope you accept my character!
anyway...
Name: Brian Lee
Bey:Ray Pegasis100HF/S(uses hf mode most of the time becuase of its speed)
Brian obtained the pegasis clear wheel from Ginka himself when he won his hometowns Beyblade tourny.
Looks:Brian has black hair(asian styleXD im asian so yea) He usually wears a black shirt with a blue pegasis face with a blue and white jacket. He wears black skinny jeans and blue and white sneakers. His belt has a place for his bey, and a white launcher with a blue Beylauncher.
Backround:
Brian has always adimired the one and only Ginka Hagane. Ever since he saw Gingka battleing on TV, Brian strived to be like him. His first bey was a Pegasis 105F. His parents got it for him at a special convention. When his hometown began sponsoring a tournament, he trained very hard to win. When the tourney started it was announced that the winner would get to meet Ginka Hagane and recieve a special prize from him. He eventually won and recieved a PegasisII clear whell from Ginkga. His next goal was waiting for him at The Beyblade Academy...
Personality: Brian is not very serious in life and in battles. He usually plays pranks and other immature stuff. But at times he gets serious when he needs to and is always determined to win a battle. During battles when it looks like its over for him he usually has a trick up his sleeves.
Special Moves:
Pegasis Speed Rush(usualy a last resort)(his first ever special move when using his original pegasis he can still use it): Pegasis uses all its remaining strength and charges at his opponent, forcing a devestating stadium out.
Ray Multi-Clash- Pegasis uses its speed to move at a very fast rate around his opponent. Pegasis speeds through the center of the arena clashing into the opponent several times before forcing a stadium out with Pegasis Speed Rush.

Hope you accept my character!
Jan. 28, 2011  4:19 AM
 
good advice heres my charicter
name kiba
bey flame wolft120hf/s he uses both depending on the opponent
looks short skinny always nicely dresed like tie etc
personality shy but will stand up to defend his friends and studys alot kinda like a beyblade nerd
backstory he was born and abanded and grew up as a foster child but studying was his friend untill.....this is where you chip in
p.s hes like kenny
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