Hey i wrote that chapter! Its sooo awesome you used what i weote im soo happy thx

Hey thats awesome the chapter is amazing. Do you know when youre putting the new characters in? I have a good idea for a bad guy. PM me when you are excepting character requests again.

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Mason had something of a plan to get to his brother. The place they were going was only about five hours away by car, but asking their parents to drive them there was kind of like saying “Hey mom and dad, could you drive Micah and I somewhere for five hours so I can find my long-lost brother and possibly die trying?” Yeah, so they couldn’t go by car. They would have been able to go by plane, which would probably only take one or two hours, but they only had about fifty bucks if they put their money together. But then Micah said “We could probably afford to send one person by train, and since this is your brother we’re saving, you should go.” It didn’t feel right to Mason, but it was the only way. He said “Well, I guess it is the only way, but you should go to the train station too, just in case we figure out a way you could go.” Micah agreed, and they started planning.
It had been two days since Mason received the location, and they were ready to go. They decided to walk to the train station, because Mason would still have to survive while he was gone finding his brother. When they arrived, Mason clenched Ghost in his pocket, and a strangely familiar voice spoke to him. Apparently, he was the only one that could hear it, and he wasn’t going to tell anyone either. When it was done saying it had to tell him, it said “Good luck, Mason.”
The voice's plan was irrational, not to mention risky , but if Micah could go too, he would give it a shot. He clenched Ghost again, but he didn’t hear a voice, but instead, he felt a tingling sensation all around him. He knew it had worked. When he let go, it stopped. He walked over to Micah and said “I have a plan. Take the money and buy a ticket for yourself, I’ll meet you on the train!” Micah was extremely confused, but eventually he said “If you say so,” and took the money. Mason Walked toward the side of the train, with his hands in his pockets, and jumped right into the train. Micah was more confused than ever, but he bought the ticket and walked into the train.
He saw Mason sitting in the back row, and joined him. Micah asked “How’d you get in here?! You jumped right into the side of the train!” Mason replied by saying “Just the way you said it. How’d you get in?” Micah said “Through the door, like a normal person!!!” From there, they rode in silence.
Apparently, making himself intangible took a lot out of Mason, and he slowly drifted into sleep.
He awoke to breaking glass and screaming people.

I wrote the rough draft for this part, then Sparta edited it. So, this was our first story we both worked on!

cool chapter.. i did that once too

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Yaaaayy! It came out great we did awesome!!

We did! And people, it's what you've all been waiting for! These next few parts will be filled with you, the readers' characters! We will probably not have them all in this story ark, though.

Off topic: Being grounded sucks.

OK, one or two weeks until next part is up

Hypnos is coming. Sort of.

The train was on a narrow bridge, but it wouldn’t be there for long. It was starting to tilt over, as if something had run into the side. And to make things worse, beys were bouncing everywhere, hitting people, breaking glass. A few passengers were yelling commands to their beys, but Mason couldn’t tell which side they were on. Micah had launched his, but it was being chipped away by the enemies. Mason decided to launch his bey for the first time.
He felt a strong recoil, like firing a high power shotgun. Every bey Ghost hit dissolved, which was the only way to tell what it hit. The train leaned even more, and Micah’s bey fell out of a broken window. Mason felt something tug at his gut. Ghost began spinning around rapidly, creating a tornado filled with illusory copies of itself. It began sucking enemies up, rapidly attacking them. They were reduced to dust, which fell out of the tilted train. Then Mason saw someone he never would have expected.

Character request pls

Name: Izuma Inzori

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BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition

BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011

Name: Sonai Inzori

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BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boost”: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannon”: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannon”: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Horn”: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strike”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011

Name: Hatachi Inzori

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BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shield”: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Ramp”: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes” it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoon”: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Blade”: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.

Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011

Name: Rez Inzori

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Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Blaze: A wider, thicker, more defensive version of Hell, it is just 10 mm wider (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
MBD145: a metal version of Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shield”: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeout”: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Grave”: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind” (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop

Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.

also, could i help you write? i have some of the best narative stories in my class

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If it isn't to much to ask could i please be in your story, it is really interesting.
If so here is my character.
Name: Nick Iwaki
Age: 12
gender: male
Personality: Kind, freindly, playful and loyal to his friends
Bio: Satashi was from a small village called Isaro village, he was so skilled at blading,people were afraid they would lose and could not bare the humiliation of losing to a 12 year old so he moved out of the village at the age of 12 to find stronger opponents with his bey Hell Titan BD145CS.
Beyblade: Hell Titan BD145CS and later on after immense training Demonic Titan BD145CS.
BeyFace: Hell titan - kind of looks like perseus but has horns and looks more evil
BeyFace: Demonic titan - looks like hell titans but has flames behind it and looks much more evil.
moves:
hell titans move #1 - Hell drill: hell titan rams into the other bey and launches it into the air, then hell titan flies aound the the dish real fast and goes in the air as well and drills straight down onto the other bey all the way into the ground and smashes the other bey and hell titan is still spinning.
hell titans move #2 - Hell Barricade: hell titan spins even faster then usually and creates a flaming tornado like barricade
Demonic titans move #1 - Demonic Piledriver: pretty much the same as hell titans but goes red hot and catches fire and gains mega fast speed and completely destroys the other bey and still keeps spinning.
Demonic titans move #2 - Demonic Barricade: kind of like hell barricade but much more powerful and the tornado/barricade is higher and thicker and the tornado is spinning faster.

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Epic!!!


Thanks to Xlr8 for the awesome Sig and Avatar.
Bazinga!

OK, any requests after I said no more will be done in a really long time.

when will i be in it dude

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im begin you plz can i be an co worcker like sparta you don"t even need to pay me <- random

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THIS IS THE WORST STORY I EVER READ.
This is what I'll never write on this thread.
It goes smooth..like butter on bread.
Prove me wrong and I'll hit you in the head.

^^ My views about the story in a poetic way.

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Thanks to N0body for the avatar and Synth for the signature!

its not peotic to me,its like rhyming to me xd

it a so-so story.just need some emotions then its ok

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Yeah, I know. Still, I think the story is great.

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Standing on the other end of the bridge, with a blank expression on his face, was Jin Naito. Jin was one of the best bladers in North Carolina, and Mason had always looked up to him. One year before this, he disappeared. Six months later they said he was dead. But there he was, acting like nothing was going on. Mason projected his voice to Jin, saying "Aren't you Jin Naito? And while you answer that, could you SAVE US?!". "I am no longer Jin, I am Agent Claw! And if you want to save your friends, why don't you take it up with me and my co-workers?" said Agent Claw. He pulled out his bey, Ray Cancer CH120RF, and ten bladers walked up behind him, all of them hired thugs.

Tell me what you thought of this part!

He pulled out his bey, Ray Cancer CH120RF, and ten bladders walked up behind him, all of them hired thugs.

lol, just pointing it out otherwise great story. needs more sylistic features and perhaps a few more beybattles. love the suspense though. see what u think of my story (URL in sig below). maybe i can co-write

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“I thought the devil was a goat-man with a curly beard and horns. I was wrong. Now I know the devil has no face… Literally.”
Read my new story Faceless. It's promised to be bigger and better than my last one.
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That's hilarious, stupid iPod! I will fix that. There will be a lot of battles now.

EDIT:Fixed

Everyone got off the train before it fell 3 stories. Mason began to walk toward the opposing bladers when one launched his bey at him. Mason was hit in the arm, and he felt it break. The enemy said "You'll have to take all of us on before you can get to Jin-I mean Agent Claw.". "Okay, who do I face first?" asked Mason. "Ha, you don't take us one at a time, you take us all at once!". "Then why don't you take on all of us?!" exclaimed one of Mason's fellow bladers. With some silent understanding, everyone readied their launchers and said "3, 2, 1, let it rip!!". Mason immediately said "Special move, Invisible Strike!!". Ghost completely disappeared, and five beys were knocked out, and the other bladers were doing well too. One had Cyber Libra BL145 MHF, and he was dominating. He said "Special move, Supersonic Inferno Gunner!" and his bey began vibrating and shooting sonic booms. He hit two beys with them, and then he rushed each one, knocking them away. Eventually, all the enemies were gone, and Claw launched his bey right at Libra. When the dust cleared, Libra was a foot in the ground, and Agent Claw said "Do you really want to face me now?"

Any feedback. I could use one more character, but they would have to be a bey mechanic, and C-Dub's brother/sister.

In the resulting crater, Libra was buried in the ground, and Cancer was still spinning, and it was continuously attacking Libra. Libra's owner was stunned, paralyzed from shock. Mason had seen enough, and he launched Ghost at Cancer. Cancer flew right to Agent Claw's hand, and Claw looked like he just had an epiphany. "You, with the black and silver bey, you're Mason, right?" asked Claw. Mason replied with "Yeah. Who needs to know?". "The Organization does. You're coming with me." answered Agent Claw. "You'll have to take me by force. If I win, I go. If you win, I go with you..". Both readied their launchers and said "3, 2, 1, let it rip!!". When Mason launched, his injured arm slipped, and his bey began wobbling. Cancer was in 120 height, and it was going right for the kill. Cancer gave Ghost a light hit, then two heavy hits, and did this three more times. By the fourth incarnation of the deadly dance, Ghost had regained its balance, and countered. Ghost moved faster than the eye could see, swung around Cancer, and gave it a nice hit.. They continued in a similar way, until eventually Claw got tired of it and said "Special move, Blitz Seaburst!!". Cancer charged, and when it was under Ghost, it switched to 145, knocking Ghost into the air. Then Cancer hopped up and hit Ghost until it hit the ground. Ghost only had enough juice for one more attack, and it would be a big one. Mason said "Special move, Phantom Fury Blast!!". Ghost became faster than the eye could keep up with, and hit Cancer. It was knocked two hundred feet away, and then a silver blast hit Claw. He was knocked out. When he regained conscienceness, he said "Where am I? Who are you? Who am I?"

Any comments? I guess if nobody will do the character, i'll do it myself.

"Wait, what did you say?" asked Mason. "I asked who you are, and who I am." replied Jin, or at least that's who Mason thought he was at the moment. Then, the boy with Cyber Libra walked toward them, and he said "I have no clue what's going on here, but I think we should head to that town down there. By the way, my name's Christian, but you can just call me
C-Dub.". Mason looked below the bridge, and sure enough, a two block town with something called a "Bey Hotel" in it. After talking to a few other bladers, the group went down to the town. They decided to spend the night at the Bey Hotel, and luckily C-Dub had a good amount of cash on him. But right when they entered the "Guest Stadium", which they thought was the hotel lounge, there was a huge stadium where the lounge would be. And at the other end of the stadium, a huge, six foot tall teen holding a launcher said "Hey little punks! Which one of you miniature bladers wants to face me in a battle?"

Questions? Criticism? All is welcome!