Okay first thing, Good job. You both done well for beginners! Now heres my CnC:
Entry #1: The render looks to stretched out and too lq and everything looks messy. The text seems.... meh, but I loved that you tried.
Entry #2: Not much effort was put into this but the fact that everything looks hq gets me attached. All I can see is text, 'BattleLion's" name which I think should not be there for the fact that people adore him because of the signature he made them. I can also see a bubble c4d with grey lines going across.
I know Entry #2 might look better in your point of view but I just think that Entry #1 has more effort put into it. So my vote goes to
Entry #1!
Haha mind the username "Nausea"
it's my username for an Elsword Forum, don't really
know how to change usernames now