I need some help on the fourth and fifth stanza in this ballad for my creative writing class. This is a very rough draft, and I'd greatly appreciate any help. The ballad has an AABB rhyme scheme, with the last line in each stanza being the same.
This Here Gun, In This Here Town
This is gonna be the place I die
This here the place I lie
This is gonna be where it goes down
This here gun in this here town
This is gonna be the place you wry
This here the place you die
This is gonna be where we both drown
This here gun in this here town
This is gonna be the place I try
This here is my goodbye
This is gonna be where I'm renown
This here gun in this here town
This Here Gun, In This Here Town
This is gonna be the place I die
This here the place I lie
This is gonna be where it goes down
This here gun in this here town
This is gonna be the place you wry
This here the place you die
This is gonna be where we both drown
This here gun in this here town
This is gonna be the place I try
This here is my goodbye
This is gonna be where I'm renown
This here gun in this here town