Hmm, I dunno, I kinda prefer my version for a few things, mainly the first sentence, because without mentioning the wings, it doesn't describe it properly, and the introduction of them in the next sentence seems far too abupt.
I've mashed them together below, see what you think. But first, on the OHKO thing:
Honestly, I'd like to remove the OHKO part all together, as to me it doesn't appear to have the features required for smash attack, just recoil, and Recoil is a bad thing for all customizations.
We've fallen into a very bad habit of calling any AR with High Recoil "OHKO": Cybernetic Dragon and Whale Crusher are not OHKO/Smash AR's, they just suck hard and have high recoil. Seriously, I've used both in setups that reduce their recoil and allow them to move fast enough for any AR with decent smash to throw around opponents, and they don't. They don't have good smash under the recoil, they just suck. Hard. So, So Hard.
I find comparing AR's to Spike Dragon and Raiden/Zinrai/Hayate/Shin-Hayate's AR is the best measure for whether something is OHKO. If it doesn't KO opponents as easily as they do, but suffers severe recoil, then it just shouldn't be used. Those two are the top OHKO AR's (though the latter is currently not legal), with the dragon breaker/war bear thing having a bit less recoil and not needing an HMC, unlike them.
That said, as I don't have Manta Diver, I will leave it up to someone who does/Nag Rai to try some stuff, as I cannot judge whether or not it works. But yeah, if someone could just see how it does on a decently fast base (read: probably not storm grip unless yours is really fast for some reason even with an HMC) with wide defense/10 Wide and an HMC. SG Metal Flat 2 would be a good base to try.
Anyway, how about this?
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| full item name = Manta Diver
| item number = B-104 (Hasbro)
| beyblade system = [[5-Layer]]
| beyblade type = [[Survival]]
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'''Manta Diver''' is found in [[Takara|Takara's]] Random Booster 11, in which the White version is one of three prize Beyblades, with a 1/12 chance of obtaining one. This Random Booster also contains Aquamarine and Red-Orange versions of the Beyblade.
Hasbro released this Beyblade in their G-Revolution line, under the same name, with a [[Wide Weight Disks|10 Wide]] Weight Disk, and Normal [[Spin Gear#S_To_F_Series_Spin_Gears|Right Spin Gear]].
== Attack Ring (AR): Square Edge ==
* Weight: 7 grams
Square Edge's large, diamond-like design depicts two triangular Manta Rays, separated by a large gap and the ends of each Ray's wings. The wings themselves are covered in triangular spikes, which allow for some [[Smash Attack]], however, the poor shape of these contact points, as well as the [[Recoil]] and limited [[Smash Attack|Smash]] produced by the tips of the wings diminishes Square Edge's competitive use. It may be used for OHKO customization, but these as a whole are not particularly useful, and there are many better options than Square Edge for this purpose, such as [[Dragoon V2|Dragoon V2's]] Spike Dragon. The large size and weight does allow for some use in more aggressive Weight-Based [[Defense]] customizations, however.
=== Use in Weight Based [[Defense]] Customization ===
The main use of this customization is to attempt [[Gattyaki]] or a similar style of launch aiming to KO the opponent before hitting the arena. The heavy weight of this combination aids in surviving the initial hit as well as providing more momentum to KO the opponent, and the large size of Square Edge makes hitting the opponent significantly easier. While other Attack Rings, such as [[Venus|Mirage Goddess]] are better at this due to their superior [[Defense]] ability once in the stadium, Square Edge is still a viable choice. Here is one such customization:
* '''AR:''' Square Edge
* '''WD:''' [[Wide Defense]]
* '''SG:''' [[Spin_Gear#V_and_V2_Series_Spin_Gears|Neo-Right SG]] (Heavy Metal Core)
* '''BB:''' SG Metal Ball (4 Balls) ([[Draciel S]])
== Weight Disk (WD): Random ==
As it was released by [[Takara]] in a Random Booster, the Weight Disk received is random. The possible Weight Disks are: [[Star Attack]], [[Revolver Attack]], [[Heavy Weight Disks|10 Heavy]], [[Balance Weight Disks|10 Balance]], and [[Wide Weight Disks|10 Wide]].
The [[Hasbro]] release of this Beyblade contains [[Wide Weight Disks|10 Wide]].
== Spin Gear (SG): Neo Right SG (Metal Weight Version)==
See [[Spin Gear#V and V2 Series Spin Gears|Neo Right SG]].
[[Hasbro]] Released this Beyblade with a regular [[Spin Gear#S_To_F_Series_Spin_Gears|Right SG]].
== Blade Base (BB): SG Sharp ==
See [[SG Sharp]]
==Other Versions==
* [[Manta Diver]] - Aquamarine (Random Booster 11)
* [[Manta Diver]] - Orange-Red (Random Booster 11)
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== Overall ==
[[Manta Diver]] is an aesthetically pleasing blade, however, despite being arguably the most viable of the Diver series, it still has no real competitive use. '''Manta Diver is only recommended for collection purposes.'''
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