What do you think of my first story?

Great! I like it!
88.89%
$Jack$, Aqua Roxas, BeyCenter, BillyBlast, CocoaPuffs, CyberBlader27, Cygnus, dark nova, Demonic, DynaZord, ElementalDude97, Evolution, Ga', GHOST-monkey, Giga-Impact, Guitar Blader, Iakou, Jinbee, Kopaja, Kujikato, MetalZoroark21, Minho, RustyXD, Shika blade, Sparta, Super%Sayian, TanithElite, TenshouTsubasa, thebladebomber, TimelessOne, Xlr8, zflare3 		32
It's pretty good I guess.
5.56%
RowDog, Triple-X-Turbo 		2
It needs some work.
0%
0
It's bad, needs a lot of work on it.
5.56%
Jaems1, PlayMadeSimple 		2
Total: 100% 36 vote(s)