What do you guys think of my story so far?

The story is great!
58.82%
Anchor, Aqua Roxas, DarkGasher927, EarthHelios, galaxypegasis22, Iakou, KCPJ, Sparx000, Thor Odinson, TwiztidBlader 		10
The story is okay, but requires more editting.
17.65%
Dragoon_105RF, Duck, Minho 		3
The story is ... bad.
0%
0
The story is horrible and sucks!
0%
0
This story is most likely the worst in the world!
23.53%
FROZEN, Jaems1, NickolasJohnson, TwistedNemesis 		4
Total: 100% 17 vote(s)