Finally, My first beyblade story, I didnt get to do it before because i got warned 3 times, So here is my story! But anyone here is the Prologue!
Prologue:
Once upon a time there lived two beybladers named Recharn and Steve.
Go Bandid Goreim! said Recharn.
Samurai Ifraid, Hit him! said Steve. Special Move, Samurai Sword!
Special Move, Karatechop! said Recharn.
They clashed and then Bandid Goreim stopped. Yeah I won! yelled Steve. Oh yes I beat him! said Steve.
Chapter 1:
Oh no! It is that evil captain from before! said Recharn. Do not worry, I will teach him a lesson he will never forget! said Steve. 321 Go Shoot! The beys clashed. Go get him, Samurai Ifraid! said Steve. Crush him into nothing Thief Pheonic! said the evil captain. Let us just settle this. Special Move! Beyblade Crusher! Special Move, Samurai Sword! said Steve!
To be continued in next chapter...

Not sure if trolling...
Or actual try at story.
This is too short.
It's rushed and there's no deatail.
You don't even know who's who.
To be honest, this sucks...

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

You know, This is a Chapter Story.

Yes but this chapter is barely even a paragraph.

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You know, This is a Chapter Story.

What?...
No no no.
This is a prolouge.
That's WAY too short and not even a prolouge!
There's not DEATAILS what so ever.
You don't even put the " around the speech parts.
Plus, there are MANY grammartical errors.
I'm seriously in full-on grammar nazi mode.
Like seriously, are you trying to make a story?

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

You know, This is a Chapter Story.

What?...
No no no.
This is a prolouge.
That's WAY too short and not even a prolouge!
There's not DEATAILS what so ever.
You don't even put the " around the speech parts.
Plus, there are MANY grammartical errors.
I'm seriously in full-on grammar nazi mode.
Like seriously, are you trying to make a story?

Yes, How dare you diss my story, I am gonna report you.

You know, This is a Chapter Story.

What?...
No no no.
This is a prolouge.
That's WAY too short and not even a prolouge!
There's not DEATAILS what so ever.
You don't even put the " around the speech parts.
Plus, there are MANY grammartical errors.
I'm seriously in full-on grammar nazi mode.
Like seriously, are you trying to make a story?

Yes, How dare you diss my story, I am gonna report you.

Oh my gosh.
I am not dissing your story!
I am telling you what's wrong with it!
I'm giving you tips.

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

OK lets listen.

OK lets listen.

What?....
I'm giving up.
If you wanna "discuss" this, PM me.

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

*facePalm* yes you should listen to china she's one of the best writers here.

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Falconry|MTG Decks

Sig Shop|Bey Photography|Team in For the Kill

Your storys short even for a paragraph it doesnt deserve to be a paragraph and it has no discription of any thing the battle was 5 sentnces wich is way tooshort and quite frankly it sucked

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Okay kiddies, lets not escalate this more than it already is.

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PLEASE READ MY STORY PLEASE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I think you should make your Chapters longer

I think you should make your Chapters longer

I will think about that next time.

I think your chapters should be longer than 5 sentences

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I will do it next time.