[story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 is up!)

Poll: how was the story?

Good
57.14%
8
Medium
42.86%
6
Bad
0%
0
Total: 100% 14 vote(s)
[/spoiler][spoiler]WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkI don't mean to be rude but were you in a rush when you neared the end because you misspelled some words.
EDIT: after realizing what the shortest chapters are, i've combined chapters 11 and 12.
Good story. Just a couple of grammar mistakes but the main problem is that...... IT'S TOO SHORT!! This is an awesome story please make it longer
Well, the real chapter 12 is up, but I don't wanna call it finished yet. One problem is that I can't think of what else to put in it!