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[story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 is up!) - Printable Version

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[story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 is up!) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012


Hey guy's, I've decided to take a short break from bob, the bey breaker to start this new story! The bleeding bey's.
Chapter 1: (Click to View)
Chapter 2: (Click to View)
Chapter 3: (Click to View)
Chapter 4: (Click to View)
Chapter 5: (Click to View)
Chapter 6: (Click to View)
Chapter 7: (Click to View)
Chapter 8: (Click to View)
Chapter 9: (Click to View)
Chapter 10: (Click to View)
Chapter 11: (Click to View)
Chapter 12: (Click to View)



RE: [story] The Ledgend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - legendblader01 - Sep. 04, 2012

pretty good....


RE: [story] The Ledgend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - akio314 - Sep. 04, 2012

This a strange but good story. You spelt legend wrong.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

fixed, thanks!


RE: [story] The Ledgend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - ButterflyKnight - Sep. 04, 2012

It was only me or when I read the name Zero I reminded of Metal Fight Beyblade Zero-G?


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

I even thought of it. But I was too deep into the story to change it.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - MasterBlader-X - Sep. 04, 2012

Nice storyStupid


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 04, 2012

It's really, really rushed.
Put more detail into it. :\


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

it'll be a lot less rushed when it gets to the main part of the story.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - dragondrone - Sep. 04, 2012

nice story bro, nice story.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - Achi-baba - Sep. 04, 2012

In ch.2, you should have me battle you and zero with my cyclone pegasus d125fs.His special move is grinding smash:when launched for a stadium out, pegasus grinds along the rim of the wall and shoots off into a powerful attack.Or as a mid-story antagonist, PM me for a bey with the perfected abilities of meteo L-drago.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. [story] (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

(Sep. 04, 2012  2:08 AM)earthwolf1404 Wrote: In ch.2, you should have me battle you and zero with my cyclone pegasus d125fs.His special move is grinding smash:when launched for a stadium out, pegasus grinds along the rim of the wall and shoots off into a powerful attack.Or as a mid-story antagonist, PM me for a bey with the perfected abilities of meteo L-drago.

so... name? age? personality?


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Achi-baba - Sep. 04, 2012

For either top, I am a 13 year old,.6ft.4 boy named Jordan.With pegasus, I have a rivaled friend personality, but can be emotional at times(no crying though).With lightning L-drago(upper attack and dosen't change modes) 100wd(PM me for special moves and abilities), I'm like Doji before he "died", give me a cool childhood background story like Tetsuya's.
P.S. No lie, in the first sentence, these are my real stats and the said tops are real with real special moves, but for some reason I can't use L-drago's special moves any more. Unhappy


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - â’·oxedIngot - Sep. 04, 2012

in ch3 can i have a battle with Zero
Here is My Character=
Name- Jaiden
Age-10
Height- 4ft 11
Bey-Thunder Pegasus AD145WD
Personality- Nice but has a high temper during battle with enemys
Born and raised in canada until he moved at age 8
Special Move-Soaring Slash


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

not the kyoya thing but that is a nice character orange


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - â’·oxedIngot - Sep. 04, 2012

I just changed to zero
Cuzin's are over and are anoying

4 yrs old and won all of his beys

(Sep. 04, 2012  2:57 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: not the kyoya thing but that is a nice character orange

so without the kyoya thing is my charecter in



RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 04, 2012

I finished chapter 2! Here it is:



RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - bladeshredder02 - Sep. 05, 2012

im the real zero
p.s. im writing chapter 3


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 05, 2012

ur not zero urself, u pmed me a character/story request, and this is my story. im writing it.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - bladeshredder02 - Sep. 05, 2012

battle when i have dark power think that through more ownageblader because 1.i have emotional personality dissorder when i get mad i turn into flameboy everything in my body increases and 2.think that with dark power3.oh and you know my fireblazes special move in chapter 2 yeah you seen nothing yet Eternal-E in a chapter when im going against him make me use my dark move bey ultimate bey roast of destruction with extra power
butterfly night im zero better than zeronie thats my real name zeronie


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - akio314 - Sep. 05, 2012

How do you get people to reply to your story? Ch. 2 was strange but it was good.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 05, 2012

(Sep. 05, 2012  1:52 AM)bladeshredder Wrote: battle when i have dark power think that through more ownageblader because 1.i have emotional personality dissorder when i get mad i turn into flameboy everything in my body increases and 2.think that with dark power3.oh and you know my fireblazes special move in chapter 2 yeah you seen nothing yet Eternal-E in a chapter when im going against him make me use my dark move bey ultimate bey roast of destruction with extra power
butterfly night im zero better than zeronie thats my real name zeronie

please, don't give away all the story information.


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - ElementalDude97 - Sep. 05, 2012

(Sep. 05, 2012  1:36 AM)bladeshredder Wrote: im the real zero
p.s. im writing chapter 3

You can't keep making someone else's story!unless he asks you to.If you want you can make your own story


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - Eternal-E - Sep. 05, 2012

that's what im saiyan!


RE: [story] The Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (accepting character requests) - akio314 - Sep. 05, 2012

(Sep. 05, 2012  2:25 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: that's what im saiyan!

Is that a Dragon Ball Z reference? If not, weird typo. I apologize if that was too off-topic or spam.