How did I forget to read this?! But I found it now, and glad to see that my character was used ^o^

You're one of the few authors that can actually take character requests and morph them into the story line so well. So excellent job on that!

I also like how you interpreted my special move. In a way, its similar to Junpei's ability to "go back in time" and change the result of the past (saving June from being incinerated in the Nonary Games nine years ago). So, he sent the solution of the puzzle through morphogenetic resonance. Which, in a way is similar to your interpretation of Eternal Time-Shift.

For your information, 999 is my favorite game, and you even kind of made me remember it while reading the story. Which can only make this even more loved in my view! Where were you during the contest?!

Once again, amazing story.

You're still a "main" character.

Aced it man!

I remember when it was your signature.

Thank you.

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Hah, still haven't used my character. yay.

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PLEASE READ MY STORY PLEASE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Hah, still haven't used my character. yay.

I'm delaying your death sentence. So you're welcome. Also, I already have next chapter thought out. I'll try not to make your death too horrifying. Hah, only kidding.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

Hah, still haven't used my character. yay.

I'm delaying your death sentence. So you're welcome. Also, I already have next chapter thought out. I'll try not to make your death too horrifying. Hah, only kidding.

Hah, I'm getting my death note out now.

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PLEASE READ MY STORY PLEASE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Hah, still haven't used my character. yay.

I'm delaying your death sentence. So you're welcome. Also, I already have next chapter thought out. I'll try not to make your death too horrifying. Hah, only kidding.

Hah, I'm getting my death note out now.

At least wait until your character makes an appearance.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

I'm delaying your death sentence. So you're welcome. Also, I already have next chapter thought out. I'll try not to make your death too horrifying. Hah, only kidding.

Hah, I'm getting my death note out now.

At least wait until your character makes an appearance.

*Puts death note back in drawer*
I have my eye on you.

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Hah, I'm getting my death note out now.

At least wait until your character makes an appearance.

*Puts death note back in drawer*
I have my eye on you.

Chapter #-6 (Click to View)

err1 dies

i walk into the hallway. "ohai mirai les battur" i say.
"kk", mirai say.
"321goshoot" both we say
"go shinigami break her beh" i yerr. teh beh hit flash and ares break
"oh noes" mirai says. "i die now" so she turn into dust
"i win, i is unstop"

Chapter √36 is out early.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

At least wait until your character makes an appearance.

*Puts death note back in drawer*
I have my eye on you.

Chapter #-6 (Click to View)

err1 dies

I lose to Mirai.
The end

Chapter √36 is out early.

fixed.

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YUSH! This Adele get up is temporary. Neku and Joshua will be back soon

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do u need more charcters hitsugiya

do u need more charcters hitsugiya

I'm kind of iffy on that right now. But yes, they are still being accepted.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

your story is great work keep it goin

This is one of the better storys i have read. Could you tell us when to expect to see the next chapter

I really don't like the idea of character requests personally. IMHO authors should be able to develop their own characters without others inputting. It also has people checking a story to see their character in action and check on its progress, not to necessarily enjoy the story as a whole.

Just my 2¢, but besides that the concept is nice and the actual story itself is decent.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Hitsugiya when do you think the next chapter will be out

I really don't like the idea of character requests personally. IMHO authors should be able to develop their own characters without others inputting. It also has people checking a story to see their character in action and check on its progress, not to necessarily enjoy the story as a whole.

Just my 2¢, but besides that the concept is nice and the actual story itself is decent.

After chapter 7 I won't be taking requests. I just don't have room for them anymore.

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Hitsugiya when do you think the next chapter will be out

9-10pm today. If not, really early tomorrow.

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I cannot wait i love this story its one of my favorites

Chapter 6 is out, but it's sort of grimdark. Read at your own risk.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

Um, will my character be in the story?
Just asking

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"I'll solve equations with my right hand and write names with my left. I'll take a potato chip... and eat it!"- Yagami Light

Um, will my character be in the story?
Just asking

Honestly? I didn't even see it, sorry. But yes, he will by next chapter.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

So is neku the main villian?didnt see that twist no wonder his bey was so unbeatable on chapter 3

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So is neku the main villian?didnt see that twist no wonder his bey was so unbeatable on chapter 3

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He had the Eye of Wrath the whole time. He explained how he went back in time and beat him. But didn't explain how exactly he beat him so fast. He used the a different move with Wrath's power in the past.

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"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

Cool story!.This takes beyblade to a whole new level!

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Chapter 6 is out, but it's sort of grimdark. Read at your own risk.

BAHAHAHA, you called that scary?! Man, that was nothing XD I will PM you a better description of a mangled corpse being drenched in its own crimson red blood

So is neku the main villian?didnt see that twist no wonder his bey was so unbeatable on chapter 3

Yeeeeah buddy, Neku is so boss!

Cool story!.This takes beyblade to a whole new level!

lol, read the second post in this thread.

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Chapter 6 is out, but it's sort of grimdark. Read at your own risk.

BAHAHAHA, you called that scary?! Man, that was nothing XD I will PM you a better description of a mangled corpse being drenched in its own crimson red blood

Beyblade is a game for all ages. So there are 4-8 year olds that go on here. Wouldn't want them to have nightmares or anything.

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