World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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If you make a character request, don't expect to remain alive for more than three chapters.


Chapter #1 (Click to View)
Chapter #2 (Click to View)
Chapter #3 (Click to View)
Chapter #4 told from Xing's perspective (Click to View)
Chapter #5 continued from chapter 4, same perspective (Click to View)
Chapter #6 (not for the faint of heart) (Click to View)

I'm accepting character requests. They have to be super well made from now on.

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Beyblade: track and tip have to be real
Special Move: (up to two)

I upload every two days.
Beyblading was raised to a whole new level :o

Spelling mistakes are there *appose, *they.

Sounds like a nice start! My character request is in my bio and I think he will fit in quite well Smile
My character is based off of TWEWY
Name:Yoshiya "Joshua" Kiryu
Personality:Joshua is very intelligent person with a refined taste and knowledge about the world around him however he is also arrogant and he prefers to think and act by himself always keeping his intentions mysterious
He is very skilled at lying in which he can make the lies sound like the truth and teases people when he don't give information however he have snobby qualities and remains a mature and wise person at heart who know things that are out of this world.
clothes:Joshua wears a white button short sleeve shirt with gray pants with plain white sneakers with black laces and scraggy ash blond hair
BeybladeGrineath Reaper E230MB(attack mode and defence mode)
Special movesGrinefence mode,Death Break(Reaper surronds itself in stormy inds like storm bringer and then it crashes on the opposing bey in which it can tear up any bey in its way with devastating power)
Attack mode,Reaper Rage(Reaper surrond itself in heat and whatever bey touches it will cause an explosion in the stadium)
At the prologue... I was watching Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood on another tab. Dead serious. Greed. XD
Anyways, it seems interesting. I like it! Here's my request:

Name: Xing Lee
Age: 15
Appearance: He is tall and looks mature for his age and he is very muscular. He has long dark hair pulled back in a pony tale, with spiky bangs over his forehead, and "squinty" eyes. (Like Brock's from Pokemon. Grin) He wears a black Chinese shirt worn closed under a long, black trench coat with black slacks and black dress shoes. He also carries around a machete.
Personality: On the surface, he seems like a lighthearted, silly person. But when you get him mad he goes dark and will kick your butt. He is easily ticked off and enjoys picking on younger kids. In battle, he's very serious, for he knows it may be his last battle. He plays for keeps, and the girls. He enjoys martial arts, blading, and drawing. He is a very skilled artist. He doesn't like when people are "too happy", although, he tends to be too happy a lot. He is also very skilled in hand to hand combat.
Beyblade: Omni Zhulong AD145WD (Left Spin)
Special Moves: Torch Dragon: Ultimate Fire Strike (Bey flies into air, sets on fire, and comes down, crushing the opposing bey.) , Torch Dragon: Flaming Uproar (Bey sets on fire and spins around stadium at high sppeds, causing a firy tornado to form. The bey then can attack and drain the other bey's spin.)

I hope you like this guy Grin
(Aug. 12, 2012  1:40 PM)ZERO X Wrote: [ -> ]My character is based off of TWEWY
Name:Yoshiya "Joshua" Kiryu
Personality:Joshua is very intelligent person with a refined taste and knowledge about the world around him however he is also arrogant and he prefers to think and act by himself always keeping his intentions mysterious
He is very skilled at lying in which he can make the lies sound like the truth and teases people when he don't give information however he have snobby qualities and remains a mature and wise person at heart who know things that are out of this world.
clothes:Joshua wears a white button short sleeve shirt with gray pants with plain white sneakers with black laces and scraggy ash blond hair
BeybladeGrineath Reaper E230MB
I need a special move. Other than that, you're fine.

(Aug. 12, 2012  7:05 AM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblading was raised to a whole new level :o

Spelling mistakes are there *appose, *they.

Sounds like a nice start! My character request is in my bio and I think he will fit in quite well Smile
Give me a bey, and a special move for it. You'll be set after that.

Oh, let me explain something. It's not you lose, you die. You have a set amount of time left before you die. The time is recorded by your launcher, and your launcher is connected to your bey. The teen had 5 hours left, but his bey was broken beyond repair, so even if he did live, he'd only have the rest of his four hours, and couldn't do anything about it.
The soul point system goes like this:
Win= + 1 hour
Lose= -2 hours
Draw= both sides -1 hour

If your bey breaks, you'll "break" along with it. I'm not going to spoil what happens when your time runs out.
Ok and joshua special moves are Death break (which a storm like storm bringer surrond joshhua bey and crashes with devestating power which tear up anything in its way when it is in defence mode )
Reaper rage(Reaper surrond itself with heat and whatever bey touches it it will cause an explosion in the stadium whe it is in attack mode)
I LIEK IT!
Seriously, I do.
Name: Sky Utara (Male)
Age: 14
Appearance: He is skinny, but musclular. He has brown hair, that is all messy, with brown eyes to match. He wears a green, graphic t-shirt, with a button-down dress shirt over it. He has black skinny-jeans with black converse shoes.
Personality: He is an optimist that has a smile on his face every moment of the day. He loves a great BeyBattle. When his opponenets anger him, he has a whole different personality. He attacks with no mercy and destroys his opponenets bey.
Beyblade: Kurai Homura BD145CS
Special Move(s): Normal: Fire of the Heavens: A pillar of fire comes down from the sky and strikes the opponents, while Kurai tosses it in the air. Dark Move: Burning Darkness of Hell: The whole stadium is corrupted by a dark growth that consumes the other bey, crushing it to darkness.
Name:Cody Saturday
Beyblade:Titan StormBreaker AD185WSF(Right spin,Attack)
Age:15
Appearance:Tall.About 5'8.Long black hair.Male.Wears a black blazer and blue jeans.Pretty much my alter ego XDXDXDXDXDXDXD.And purple eyes.Kinda Meditteranian looking
PersonalityConfusedmart.Sometimes can be quite obnoxcious.Like kyoya and Makoka combined.
Special Move(s):Appolo's arrow. Chaos Claw Breaker
(Aug. 12, 2012  4:45 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: [ -> ]Win= + 1 hour
Lose= -2 hours
Draw= both sides -1 hour

Ah, so it's like Deadman Wonderland (Anime I watch)? If you get a candy, it's plus one hour before you die...
(Aug. 12, 2012  4:45 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: [ -> ]Give me a bey, and a special move for it. You'll be set after that.

Okay, Neku's special move is Eternal Time Shift and I really really can't think of a Beyblade name, someone please help me out.
(Aug. 12, 2012  7:03 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 12, 2012  4:45 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: [ -> ]Give me a bey, and a special move for it. You'll be set after that.

Okay, Neku's special move is Eternal Time Shift and I really really can't think of a Beyblade name, someone please help me out.

How about Alpha Oni 230WD?
I suck at names. XD
Yeah, sure! Why not? XD
(Aug. 12, 2012  7:21 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah, sure! Why not? XD
Because 230 WD is too generic in my opinion. But the metal and plastic are fine.

(Aug. 12, 2012  5:49 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 12, 2012  4:45 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: [ -> ]Win= + 1 hour
Lose= -2 hours
Draw= both sides -1 hour

Ah, so it's like Deadman Wonderland (Anime I watch)? If you get a candy, it's plus one hour before you die...
Yeah, but DW's candy is for sale, soul points aren't.
Name: Hajime Shinobu

Age: 14

Appearence: Average height with shaggy blonde hair and blueish green eyes. He mostly wears his signature gym shorts and Under Armor shirt. He usually wears a swimsuit underneath his shorts because he thouroughly enjoys swimming. Personality: Can seem a little insane and have a sick sense of humor at times, but can be serious when he deems appropriate. His parents died in a forest fire witch gives him an inate fear of flames. He uses his love for water to cover up this fear. He enjoys looking out in the ocean and is very friendly to marine animals. His devious and at times scary nature goes away completely when he is near the ocean and he can sometimes panic when near fire. I guess you could say he is a teddy bear on the inside and a devious, crazy guy on the outside.

Beyblade: Beat Cancer TH170CS
Special move: Omni Cresent Wave
(Aug. 12, 2012  11:41 PM)UltimateChimera Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Hajime Shinobu

Age: 14

Appearence: Average height with shaggy blonde hair and blueish green eyes. He mostly wears his signature gym shorts and Under Armor shirt. He usually wears a swimsuit underneath his shorts because he thouroughly enjoys swimming. Personality: Can seem a little insane and have a sick sense of humor at times, but can be serious when he deems appropriate. His parents died in a forest fire witch gives him an inate fear of flames. He uses his love for water to cover up this fear. He enjoys looking out in the ocean and is very friendly to marine animals. His devious and at times scary nature goes away completely when he is near the ocean and he can sometimes panic when near fire. I guess you could say he is a teddy bear on the inside and a devious, crazy guy on the outside.

Beyblade: Beat Cancer TH170CS
Special move: Omni Cresent Wave
I'd like a personality for your character.

Chapter two is up, but it's in the OP.
Yay! Xing made his appearance! Grin
I think you'll like this one Insomniac.
Hah, more character requests.

name: Mirai Kurenai (female)
Appearance: Average female school uniform such as a blue skirt, a white button down shirt, and a blue sweater vest. She also has long black hair with an arch in the front.
Personality: She has more of a shy nature, she tries to do the best she can when needed, and has quick mood changes time by time.
Bey: Flash Aries H145RF
special move: Flash horn smash: The bey sparkles with aura and strikes the opponents bey causing it to imbalance thus leading to several strong but not overpowered smash attacks.

(Aug. 15, 2012  4:30 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: [ -> ]Hah, more character requests.

name: Mirai Kurenai (female)
Appearance: Average female school uniform such as a blue skirt, a white button down shirt, and a blue sweater vest. She also has long black hair with an arch in the front.
Personality: She has more of a shy nature, she tries to do the best she can when needed, and has quick mood changes time by time.
Bey: Flash Aries H145RF
special move: Flash horn smash: The bey sparkles with aura and strikes the opponents bey causing it to imbalance thus leading to several strong but not overpowered smash attacks.
Gotcha, so not as overpowered as Insomniac. But seriously though, I've been looking for a female character. Good for me, undetermined for you.

Also, I'll reveal why Neku is so OP in 2 chapters. But you can pretty much guess it already.
Wow the story is going really good for now I hope I see my character battle in the next few chapters.
(Aug. 15, 2012  1:21 PM)Zero X Wrote: [ -> ]Wow the story is going really good for now I hope I see my character battle in the next few chapters.
New chapter is up, check it out.
Nice chapter! I hope Xing doesn't die...
I'm more hoping my character appears, and doesn't die...
(Aug. 17, 2012  2:01 AM)Frieza Wrote: [ -> ]Nice chapter! I hope Xing doesn't die...
At least you had a good talking par..... errr I mean hope for the best, hah!

I'm not evil enough to kill anyone off on the first chapter, oh wait.
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