salamolyon draft

my edited first draft Smile
Attack ring: Fire Cracker

Fire Cracker has a rather oval-shaped AR. Each side represents a salamander head. There are also 2 stickers on each side that represent flames. Because of its ovular shape it produces a lot of recoil, and has no use in a competive situation.

Weight disk: Eight Wide

See Eight Wide

Blade base: Salamalyon Base

This base is almost like the flat BB however it is slightly different. It has two small poles that lets you but the salamolyon beast on. This base is useless due to the fact that there are way better attack bases and the poles scrape the stadium floor when it gets knocked off balance.

other versions

Overall

All of salamalyon's parts have no use. Combined with the fact that it is very common, there is no reason to buy this beyblade aside from collection purposes.


I'm open to sugestions.
its decent. i get that not much can be said but some more detail could be added. also it needs to be reworded slightly. also mention that it is a hidden spirit bey as well as other versions (if any)

otherwise great work for a 1st article
To be honest I don't really think there's much point on writing an article on a blade where all the parts are useless. Also it doesn't seem like you can write much about it.
ugh i hate it when people say that...a wiki is ment to be informative. even if the beyblade (in our specific case) is crappy, it deserves mention on the wiki. if we just exclude information because the product may be crappy, then our information as a whole can be considered uncredible

true, as of right now MFB is the most important, but if we do really want the beywiki to be the best info site for all beyblade toys, everything canon (meaning all bey designs) must be mentioned somewhere on the wiki
(Nov. 01, 2010  4:30 PM)LeonTempestXIII Wrote: its decent. i get that not much can be said but some more detail could be added. also it needs to be reworded slightly. also mention that it is a hidden spirit bey as well as other versions (if any)

otherwise great work for a 1st article

Yeah there is. Griffolyon is one. I had it, wasn't too bad.
Yes lets waste time on a blade that's useless instead of doing an article on a blade that's worth getting.... That makes total sense. People can ask about whether beys are good in other topics so I doubt there's any point. Also I don't have any problem with it if the article is good like the Bumpking article which had a lot of detail but this one doesn't.
This is a decent attempt, but both the writing and grammar need improvement.
(Nov. 01, 2010  10:55 PM)Rashamon Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2010  4:30 PM)LeonTempestXIII Wrote: its decent. i get that not much can be said but some more detail could be added. also it needs to be reworded slightly. also mention that it is a hidden spirit bey as well as other versions (if any)

otherwise great work for a 1st article

Yeah there is. Griffolyon is one. I had it, wasn't too bad.

i ment color variants of Saly. but an article on Hidden Spirit beys could be a good idea...

i miss my Griffoleyon...i think i might have had a Saly too at some point...
edited, so this article shouldn't be made? even though it is a bad bey all beys should have a spot on beywiki, regardless of usefullness, why is there a dark wolf article then it is not usefull but it is there so likewise there should be as many articles on beywiki as posible btw I can't add pictures because mine is destroyed but I did use it so I know what i'm saying
(Nov. 02, 2010  1:57 AM)tman14 Wrote: edited, so this article shouldn't be made? even though it is a bad bey all beys should have a spot on beywiki, regardless of usefullness, why is there a dark wolf article then it is not usefull but it is there so likewise there should be as many articles on beywiki as posible

No, this article should definitely be made at some point. All Beyblades need to have an article, regardless of their usefulness. It's just that there is many other useful Beyblades that would be better to focus on. That's not to say that people can't write these though, because they do eventually have to be done anyways.
thats what i was trying to explain to megablader2. its a beyblade, so it goes on the beywiki. even if it is not such a great bey. you dont pick and choose information. everything must be thrre
exactly so is it ok or should there be more? and can anyone get pics because mine is broken
there should be a little more detail, but not much.
on what? theres not much to explain about fire cracker and the BB
Hidden Spirits isn't the 'other version', it's the normal version. The only other version would be Bakuten Henkei Gaia Dragoon iirc.
edited, is it ok now?
the 1st Gaia Dragoon = Salamolyon?????????????
yah I just copied what Mc Frown said XD
what do you mean? what does that have to do with salamolyon?
I know I haven't worked on it for a while but edited Wink and bump I guess :\
The whole beyblade has no competetive uses because Hidden Spirits beyblades are banned for competitions.
I thought salamalyon was spelled the way i'm typing it now... I'm pretty sure that is correct
(Jan. 01, 2011  3:05 PM)Firinmahlazuh Wrote: I thought salamalyon was spelled the way i'm typing it now... I'm pretty sure that is correct
I do think that is the case as well. Salamander, Salamalyon ... I believe that is how official websites wrote it as well.
I fail, I just looked on the box and... XD