hey guys here is my beyblade story please try to bear with me as i am only 11 and go easy on the comments thank you

for character responses you will have to phrase it like

name:
beyblade:
special move:
description:
personality:
main character or not:
good at beyblade or bad:

for example
"I would like my character to be in the story
name: John
beyblade:burn wolf 145 wd
special move: wolf starblast attack
description: tall boy/girl wears blue jeans and a red top has scruffy hair
pesonality:kind but hot tempered loves beyblade
main character or not: main character , is good and accompanies main on his journey.
good at beyblade or bad: he/she is great at beyblading

I will try and get everyone’s request in the story I am sorry if i cant no nonsense plz. I will be updating this thread with the stories etc. if I get a lot of positive replies I will turn it into a book and give credit to those who helped. later on when editing I may need an illustrator.

20 years has passed since the hardcore battle between gingka and ryuga.
In a small town named twinleaf lived a young boy named Yahiko, little did he know a story/adventure lays ahead of him a quite treacherous one.

Chapter 1:
BEEP! BEEP! went the alarm clock
"huh what's that noise" Yahiko said as he stretched his arm out to turn the alarm clock off, at that very moment a girl of average size came running into the room came running into the room she had golden silk hair and her eyes were as bright the sun.
"Yahiko! Yahiko! wake up, wake up c'mon there is a big beyblade bash down the street and you are going to be late. the girl proclaimed.
"wh.. what I thought it wasn't for another week; well if that is true sis we better hurry, Yahiko dashed into the bathroom grabbed his tooth-brush, threw toothpaste onto it and brushed his teeth. After he finished he met his sister at the door and they ran to the tournament. When they arrived they were greeted by a tall man wearing a bandanna,
"hello young bladers I am the blader dj and I shall be your host for today, anyways wish you both luck."
"thanks mister"Yahiko and his sister replied. Yahiko took his bey out of his pocket and clenched his fist whilst holding his beyblade cyber death 100 rsf he looked at the participants and whispered to his beyblade goodluck.
the first matchup was yahiko's sister Yosuke vs a little boy.
"can Yosuke and Daniel please go to the arena" blader dj announced. Daniel glared at Yosuke and started blushing
"bladers at the ready! 3,2,1! leeeetttt iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttt riiiiiiiippppppppp"
the bladers launched their beys to the arena Yosuke's beyblade (earth eagle 145 wd) span straight into the middle the opposing beyblade went around Yosuke's beyblade
"go Eagle special move eagle strike her bey spun to the edge of the stadium and flew up high in the sky and in a flash a yellow light beamed towards Daniels bey and collided straight into the facebolt, daniels beyblade was smashed straight out of the stadium. Daniel's face gleamed with shock by the fact a little girl creamed the floor against him.

Usually you would start making the story before you post it. There isn't too much point in people posting character requests for something that hasn't even started.

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Team Omega Nova!Poke-Fusion Lab!My story

A friend of mine called the Assassin made a Thread very similar to this and it got deleted the second day it way on the wbo so i don't find this advisable

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CREDIT GOES TO dAD FOR THIS AWESOME SIG

Very average. Not much really happened for a chapter. You haven't gone into detail and it is relatively dull and boring. There are also quite a few errors. Make sure you read over it so that it makes sense because if it doesn't make sense to you it won't make sense to anyone.
I'm trying as hard as I can not to be harsh. Give it another go and try to see if you can make it better.

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Team Omega Nova!Poke-Fusion Lab!My story

name:Tutt Karmun
beyblade:Ancient Mummy R(a)85 R(ock)
special move:1000 layers rap
description:Boy who weres gold sandels and gold shirt, blue and gold striped shorts, gold eyes and lots of gold hair.5,5'', age 14, good figure.
personality:Cool, wise, smart, will do anything to protect his little bro
main character or not:Main character plz!Friend of Yahiko.
good at beyblade or bad:Realy great!
He has a girlfriend!I can do a description of her if you want.

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

:facepalm: you stopped character requests in YOUR story, and you do one for another user's story? WTH?!

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It was my choice not to take character requests in my story. But I will be glad to help another person who hasn't made that choice.

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I'll help out:
Name: Hyori
Gender: Female
Bey: Angel LeoneTH170LRF
Bey description:

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The Angel wheel is shaped in a Defensive and angelic wheel with what seems to be two metal wings sticking out on each sides. This is designed for left spinning. Leone looks like your average leone wheel, but spins to the left.
Triple Height170 Left Rubber Flat.

Special Move: 1,000 Angel Strike: Leone attacks with vicious slashes 1,000 times.
Call from Heaven: leone flies upwards and attacks with one final blow.
Description: She has dark brown hair and wears a purple shirt, white shorts, and sandals. She is about 13 and is 5 foot 3.
Personality: Very kind and nurturing, but becomes terrifying when someone is getting badly hurt by someone else. Her beyblade is her first friend.
Main Character or not: Just travels with Main Characters, but not exactly one.
Good at beyblade or Bad: Amazing. Just plain amazing.
Also, try to make the chapters more exciting and fun.

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I hate playing on Peaceful. Makes me feel like a wimp.

guys, it's just underwear relax

It is not any new information that Australian price setting is absolutely ridiculous and completely asinine, and that it has literally nothing to do with the exchange rate.

Back on topic, folks.

LOL

YES

I typed about four sentences but backspaced them all because I don't know what to say to your nonsense anymore. So:

Ugh.

Why do you keep picking on everyone?

Seems like I'm the one being picked on by Michael.

IT'S CUTE

It looks way cooler in person. Well, they both do.

Okay.

Just don't misspell my favourite word again

I did not misspell kengareoo.

Personally, when I hear "let it rip", I automatically think of flatulating.

Yes, the World Beyblade Organization allows real Beyblading

B2D160?

Is no gonna answer my question?

Just wondering, is the LED sight any good? Like, does it help at all? Because I have a hard time aiming...

Not really. Use it to blind your opponent, like Kei does.

im too lazy to post.

Everytime I read "Shabalabadoo", my brain processes it as "Scoobydoobeedoo".

This is a true fact btw.

lol I think everyone does. Th!nk has shortened his name to Scooby Snacks.

Shortened?

Hey guys, my beyblade recently broke and I'm having a hard time getting
over it. We won many battles and never gave up. But Midnight Striker would want
me to move on. My new Bey is Midnight Virgo. I am still using the fusion wheel, spin track and performance tip. Just the facebolt broke. If you wanna battle let me know. I love blading and hope you guys too!


R.I.P Midnight Striker

Does mybb allow a user's thread to be edited by someone else by their permission? It will be trouble, for example, we hosted a tournament, a lot of people joined, and their not online, they will miss a few registrations.

No.

You're a... cat?

Call it Steve.

That's ridiculous. Kai-V cannot be a robot, shes Canadian. Canadians ride polar bears, drink maple syrup and walk their pet beavers. Daegor42, Kei and Kai-V are all neighbors; they live in modest sized igloos.

Take out the word speculation and you get the value of that post.

Solution: Use any track but ED145, because ED145 is bad.

oh noes guyz i can type

Ryuga can eat my hearts out no me gusta Ryuga nada...

My friend's found a Flame Sagittario C145 S, with crayon all over it and a claw missing from C145.

must be Kenta's he like's crayons, and Poisen Serpent broke his claws...

You would put all of that on a placard ?

i quit beyblade screw this carp

Well it isn't going to be a small propulsion jet now is it

I have received my death

...

It's a plastic model. You really don't want me to answer that question. rofl

Hi Roan,

It seems that you've accidentally found yourself in a topic you're not at all interested in. Please click http://forums.beywiki.com to return to the forums index.

Thanks,

Tamer Brad
Beywiki.com Staff

Food tastes good.

Rapidity = stupidity

By the way, this is my first tournament so go easy on me.

no problem brahh

"You all want to see stealth battlers"?
Hm...

Basalt = Rock
Rock = Throw it, and it hits hard
Hammer = Throw it, and it hits hard
simple!

Everytime I read "Shabalabadoo", my brain processes it as "Scoobydoobeedoo".

This is a true fact btw.

lol I think everyone does. Th!nk has shortened his name to Scooby Snacks.

Shortened?

If I am not mistaken, it means that when one passes, each individual they pass goes "ahh".

Bey-Capult ClayAries85S vs MF-H DiabloBullGB145RDF on this see-saw stadium.

Dream come true...

I take terrible pictures of myself.
When I smile I look goofy.
When I just look at the camera, it looks like I'm about to rip your soul out.
It's a lose/lose situation.

@Shabalabadidityderpaloooooooooo
HOW
WHAT
WHERE DID YOU GET THAT PHOTO OF ME?!
NO ONE WAS EVER SUPPOSED TO SEE THAT...
>>
*runs away forever*

Clark Kent is a nerd.

I'm Batman.

Has Kai-V ever shown her face?

No, never. She tends to sleep in self-made holes. She relocates every week or so, hanging around wi-fi cafes with large hats and a mask. She lives off of tops of used ice-cream lids and rather obese street cats. Check National Geographic daily for her whereabouts.
What exactly do you mean though?

YEAHHHH BIG BANG

If you need a banner for your website, call me in.

We'll shine the batman symbol for you.

Dude, here in Australia normal starters are like 15$ and boosters for about 8$.

Australia is a fraud.

The same way we encorporate giant glowing animals coming out of our tops into real life.

Is Kei ever actually to be afraid of?

Oh yes. You should.
Be fortunate you don't live here, under that meek and gentle persona lies a horrible monster. Very horrible. I cannot even describe it, no human could. Imagine the fiery pits of Hell Kerbecs' special move, LDrago's menacing power and then that thing Haku (Inuyasha) turns into. Nothing can douse the anger and raw power which at one point, Kei's dwindling willpower will be forced to unleashed. I expect all of Canada to be engulfed in EMP when Kei's true form is finally released. That is the day the world cannot save itself. That day. The monster shall be awakened and mankind is most definitely doomed. No octopus or even a Kai-V would stop him.

Don't you ever talk about it again.










Ever.

So, the Japanese saw it too. It is 230WD. I have very good visual memory, I still remember Valentin's father's credit card number.

Yeah, guns really care if you can break a board with your pinky or whatever.

You do kung-fu at a real armed robber and you're the dead guy being pulled out of your house on the six o'clock news with the subtitle "Unfortunate Youth Does a Dumb Thing".

Torch Gil M145Q. I've never lost with it.

Personally, I prefer, "3-2-1 HEY DO YOU WANNA SEE MY NEW CHAINSAW AND HOCKEY MASK!!!!!"

RYUGA WITH A SHOTGUN

I NEVER EAT WITH UTENSILS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡

You see, in the equation E=mc2, the main component is the E=some variant of C2, which is Lightspeed multiplied upon itself. This means that energy is equal to lightspeed. Also, you must take into account the M part, which is mass. Due to these two existing in the same equation to determine energy spent, you must assume the original Lightspeed to be infinity, due to the impossibility to reach it by c2. As a result, it forces E to equal infinity also if one were to reach lightspeed. Of course, it also means that Mass would be infinity also. This is impossible, as infinity is not a number, it is a concept. If infinite mass is reached outside of light and black holes, the matter's opposite, called anti-matter, would have no choice but to have negative mass, which would mean NEGATIVE INFINITY! This results in both ceasing to exist, as that would require a fixed position in time-space, which is impossible, due to the expansion of the Universe. This is part of the idea that all things are positioned in relative space to the observer, which is why my version of "A long way" is different than yours. Seeing as the observer would then be in a fixed position with light in this case, they would both cease to exist, leaving the anti-matter behind. This is impossible. Of course, this is a theory, so it's not proven 100% truth. Yet. Right now, it's accepted as truth by most scientific figures.

that aint called helping out, more like destroying........................................ PM me if you want to argue. let's not troll the thread.

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ok meteo leone i will add you to the story and you to nhhyan cat

Erm...I'm not so sure. When you get one character request, you get another. Then you feel an obligation to make the character good. Then you focus on them a bit too much. Then you make them a side character, then you lose control of your own story. It happens often.

soory guys im not continuing story due to scholl work i may pick it up over christmas bu for now closed plz can a mod. close this thread