[/align][/font]Michael was just walking around beyblade park, looking at other people earn and lose beypoints. He was well known at beyblade park, beating every one he challenged and who challenged him. A kid he knew at school came up and asked him," Will you battle with me?" Michael responded, " Well, I got to get going home in one hour. So I guess I have time." " Lets go find a stadium and battle!" They both go find a stadium thats open and get ready to battle. " Ok, 3...2...1... LET IT RIP!!" " Go go go Pyxis!!" " Graphite Megalon, Attack now!!" Megalon hits pyxis so fiercely, it goes flyig and shatters the glass behind them. " Well that was fun, Id better get going now, sooo. BY!!" And leaves joe looking at pyxis, with pieces of glass embeded in it.


( if you want, you can give me some ideas for charecters and beys!)

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Goooo,Eagle!!:dj2002:

It's spelled Byxis actually. Also, i wont vote until..... you correct these things:
- More content your chapter was too short.
- Less rushing. Kind of detail what's going on.
- Your grammar just needs a little fixing.
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I'll submit a character. He can be bad or good. I couldn't care less (actually, I care).
Name: Joseph
Bey: Manslayer Batousai SA(Sword Attack)145 F(Flat)
Special Moves (I'll just translate them to English and see what you do with them. I'm too lazy to type much right now.): Majinken (Demon Fang) Akisazame (Sword Rain) Hitenshouku (Rising Falcon) Tenshou Kenhouzan (Falcon's Crest)
Dark Move (If he's bad): INDIGNATION JUDGEMENT (Lightning falls from the sky, striking the opponent. Then, a thunder sword lands on top of the bey, slicing through it like a warm knife through butter. Batousai goes in and attacks using his track, then smashes it, sending lightning shooting up into the sky, taking the sword along.)

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how do i play?

are my beyblade customization are good?
Rock Leone D125B

thats a good idea!!! sorry its so short, i only had 15 min.

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Goooo,Eagle!!:dj2002:

Heres my character:
Name : Aero
Bey: MF Burn Leone DF145WD (BTW if you didn't know what MF stands for, it's metal face.)
Side: Good
Type: Defense
Special Moves: Terra Mound attacks the opponent's bey by attacking the other bey by the underside and sends the opponent's bey flying.

Earth Tremor Devastation attacks the opponent's bey repeatedly, rapidly.

Molten Tornado sends the other bey straight up into the air and Earth Leone would attack the other bey from the side to make the other bey stadium out.
Tell me if you need any more info.

Nameamuel
Bey:Cyber Libra C145 MHF (MetalHoleFlat)...Special move#1upersonic Inferno Gunner...Libra glows green then fires 30 supersonic boomerangs or waves...Special Move#2:Meltdown...Libra creats a wall of energy that blocks any attack
Characteristics: Stratigic,calm,ALWAYS wants 2 battle,smiles a lot, not a lot of patience
Looks Like:Black hoodie w/ libra sign on the back,Orange sneakers,cargo shorts,black eyes,spikey hair like Sora
(P.S lve the series)

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