okay, so there are two characters I've come up with, Blue Azure (boy, bey is shot starflood f(flood)140wa(water) ), Mysterious blader(boy, bey is shot starblaze b(blaze)140fi(fire) ), the story is about blue's journey starting out at a tournament and then he meets mysterious blader who challenges him

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"3,2,1, let it rip" it's the finals of the green city tournament, Blue Azure is the top contender, "go, shot starflood, don't give him a chance, special move super tsunami!", starflood turns blue, Blue's hair goes up and turns blue, a dragon pops out of starflood and shoots a tsunami at the opponent beyblade, the opponent's bey gets thrown into the building's walls. "amazing, blue just won with one shot, and he won the winning 1000000 point prize". Blue walked away, and a boy with red clothing and gray hair holding a red grip, a red string launcher, a red pointer, and a silver bey blocks his path. "Blue, I challenge you and your starflood with my starblaze", "wow, this boy must like red alot",blue thought, "I accept your challenge, and you won't be happy about the ending. "3,2,1, let it rip" "Go, starblaze, special move, super explode!" "Go, starflood, special move, super tsunami" starblaze turned red and a red dragon popped out, starflood turned blue and a blue dragon popped out, the boy's hair turned red and spiked up, Blue's hair turned blue and spiked up. Both dragons clashed and an explosion blew both bladers back, when the smoke cleared, starflood was behind Blue on the ground, and starblaze was still spinning in the stadium. Blue lost. "im-impossible, I lost". "well, it looks like I won, that was too bad, I wanted more of a challenge".

name: reaper
age:unkonown
aperrance: is cover with a cloke http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs8/i/2005/34...y_jp4k.jpg like this the hood cast a shadow on his face
very little is know about him apart from him using a dark bey
bey:dark reaper t 125 sd
special moves(dark moves)
dark move hellfire inferno assult bey ignites and creats a giant fire tornado witch the oppentents bey is suck into then dark reaper strike it at lighting speed causing parts of the metal wheel to chip off
dark move dark angel blackhole the grim reaper aperaes above the bey and creats a black hole the oppents bey is sucked in to the drakness and fall then a giant skelton hand apears and crushes the bey against weak oppents this destroys ther bey against strong it degreases the spin and damages all part of the bey metal wheel chip spin track cracked face bolt has crackes all through it
that my character it a bit long also he uses a black string launcher and grip

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

ok, that character I'll try to fit in as a bad guy, I might write the next chapter after every 10 character requests have been made.

please, give character requests,(10 character requests= new chapter= more fun for everyone)

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anyone who posts a character requests to me can help me with my stories. All of them(including soon to come ones), so please do character requests. Oh, and if anyone steals my stories I'll report the copies. Good day to everyone !

That's a horrible way of thinking, for a writer.

Why don't you think up some characters?! Is it that hard? Really? Don't be so lazy. And why do you need ten characters per chapters? You're gonna end up with a load of characters you don't know what to do with!

And don't worry, no one will copy your story: It's not good at all.

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ok, that character I'll try to fit in as a bad guy, I might write the next chapter after every 10 character requests have been made.

really ok then

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

heres 4 characters.


Name: Izuma Inzori

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BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition

BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011

Name: Sonai Inzori

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BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boost”: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannon”: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannon”: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Horn”: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strike”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011

Name: Hatachi Inzori

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BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shield”: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Ramp”: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes” it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoon”: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Blade”: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.

Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011

Name: Rez Inzori

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Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Blaze: A wider, thicker, more defensive version of Hell, it is just 10 mm wider (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
MBD145: a metal version of Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shield”: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeout”: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Grave”: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind” (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop

Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.

ps could i help write your stories, there are some errors

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garwsh,do you really need A LOT of character request:

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Ricky (Click to View)

name:Ricky Feir(it is pronounced as ''fear'')
bey:flame Apollo ED145RF
description:has a good heart,but fears of the destruction of Apollo,his trusted bey
looks:has black jeans,wears sneakers.he also wear a similar jacket that Roxas wears in Kingdom hearts II.he has black gloves,and has a hat with Apollo's symbol

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nameenise Del Rosa
bey:hyper Beafowl T145R2F
description:never gives up during a battle.somewhat very helpful to Ricky in times of need
looks:wears a pink jacket,carries a pouch for her beys,wears shorts.she also wears pink fingerless gloves,and wears rubber shoes.

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name:Harold Harbord
beyestiny Pisces CH120/145MS
description:he prefers high-classed beys,which form Destiny Pisces.he is the best friend of Ricky
looks:wears a yellow T-shirt.he also wears blue jeans,and a belt for his equipment.he wears black leathered shoes,yellow gloves,and a red and white hat.

here you go!BTW they are in one team,and there team name is The Destiny Bladers,or TDB for short

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heres another charcter he reapers pawn
wears a cloak like reapers ecept red
name: dragon
age unknown
bey:meteor dragon 90 rpf
simliar to ldrago ecept right spin and is red the dragon heads are spike
meteor looks like meteo http://images.wikia.com/beyblade/images/..._Wheel.jpg eccept with out the silver bits and right spin so flip the image horzontaly and the gold is red
rpf stands for right plastic flat so it like r2f but plastic character uses a luancher red and a rip cord launcher witch is also red
edit his specials moves are dragon cluster strom where a dragon aperars above his bey opens it mouth and fires merteors out of it mouth
and spiral meteor strike where the dragon aperars flies in to the air and then rockets down onto the opents bey sorta like star blast attck

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

okay, I've read all of your posts that I just got to because I recently woke up so I'll try to write the next chapter now

As the boy walked away, he dropped his passport, our hero, Blue picked up the passport, read it, and said "excuse me Red Crimson, you dropped your pass-" "how do you know my name?" "you dropped your passport, it says your name is Red Crimson, but are you related to Maroon Crimson, the best blader in the world, that kind of Crimson?" "yes, I am related to Maroon, actually, he's my older brother." "wow, can I come along with you on your journey?" "no" "why not?" "because you and your bey wouldn't last a minute where I'm going, it's too dangerous" "fine then, I won't give you your passport back" "give it back now" "ooh, this tells all of your girl crushes, hey is this one an actress, I guess she is, it says that in her profile that she is and once dated you for five years, ooh, the next one is even cuter, it says you dated her for six yea-" "I'll let you come on my journey, if you give me that back!" "okay, here you go" "hey, you didn't even read that from my passport, you made that completely up!" "yep, my kind of deal"... And now, our heroes continue on their journey, But wait, why is blue slacking? "lalalalala, not watching where I'm going, umph! Ow, who did I bump in to, hey jerk, watch where your'e going, that really really hurt! Uh oh, um,can we settle this out in a nice way, like men?" ( the person he bumped in to was a big man with exactly 499 men behind him at his beck) "hey kid, watch where your'e going, let's battle you one by one, oka-" "that won't be neccesary, I'll battle you all at once" "Red, where did you come from?" "you don't need to know, so stay back while I pummel these amatures all at once, okay!" "3,2,1, let it rip" "go Starblaze, special move, Super Explode!", Red's hair spiked up and turned red, and starblaze turned red. Starblaze blew up and disintegrated all of the enemy beys. "im-impossible, there is no way all 500 of us could lose to him, he's just one person" "well, you better believe it, I won, so I'll be taking all of every one of you 500 amatures points now!" ... After Red did an amazing one hit win, they continued their journey and now they go to Bey City. "hey Red, I see Bey city, and I also see Dark City, which one should we go to?" "Dark city, I wanna beat some bad guys, but we should take a stop at the abandoned bey park, to talk to the locals, to get a sample of the city." "Okay!" as our heroes enter the abandoned bey park, they meet a man in a hooded cloak, "hi, what's your name?" "the name's, Reaper, let's battle". Who is this Reaper, and what are his plans? Find out, next time, I write a chapter.

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loved it although i was try to through reaper across as the serious evil type but whatever as long as he not real happy but still awsome

"the name's, Reaper, let's battle"
heres how i would write it
"hi whats your name" the hooded man pulls a bey out and attcahes it to his launcher it has a auroa of dark energy around it 'reaper' the hooded man says as he prepares to launch
or
"hi whats your name" the hooded man pulls a bey out and attcahes it to his launcher it has a auroa of dark energy around it"my bey lusts for your spirt" or "my bey hasnt had a decent meal in a while perhaps yours can forfill his apetite"

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

here is my character request:

Name: Nick sataro
Age: 14 (or whatever)
gender: male
Personality: kind ,loyal to his friends and a good blader
Clothing: Grey jeans, white shirt W/Vinyl, jacket (sometimes), White sneakers and white fingerless gloves.
Type: attack/stamina (both beys)
Beyblade #1: Hell Titan BD145CS.
Beyblade #2: Demonic titan BD145WD (after immense training)
BeyFace: Hell titan - kind of looks like perseus but has horns.
BeyFace: Demonic titan - looks like hell titans but has flames behind it and looks more aggressive.
moves:
hell titans move - #1 Hell drill: hell titan rams into the other bey and launches it into the air, then hell titan flies around the dish real fast and goes in the air as well and drills straight down onto the other bey all the way into the ground and smashes the other bey and hell titan is still spinning.
hell titans move - #2 Hell's Barricade: hell titan spins really fast and creates a flaming tornado that surrounds hell titan and forms a tornado like barricade.
Demonic titans move - #1 Demonic Piledriver: pretty much the same as hell titans but goes red hot and catches fire and gains mega fast speed and completely destroys the other bey and still keeps spinning.
Demonic titans move - #2 Demonic Barricade: basically the same as hell's barricade but spin much much faster and creates a larger and thicker flaming tornado/barricade that is almost indestructable.

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Epic!!!


Thanks to Xlr8 for the awesome Sig and Avatar.
Bazinga!

bbamsuv needs to read this its about my charcter but for anyone who dosent want the story spoiled dont read this

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reaper is acutally the dark spirt of his own beyblade so he not a person hes a evil bey spirt thats taken a human like shape that why he wears the cloke but dont reveal it until near the end of your story like the final battle

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

wait till next saturday for the next chapter, i'm only allowed electronics on saturdays

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Leader of team second side

wait till next saturday for the next chapter, i'm only allowed electronics on saturdays

did you read the spoiler

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

yes, i did read it,does that satisfy you?

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Leader of team second side

yes, i did read it,does that satisfy you?

never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

umm any chance of the next part anytime soon

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

That's a horrible way of thinking, for a writer.

Why don't you think up some characters?! Is it that hard? Really? Don't be so lazy. And why do you need ten characters per chapters? You're gonna end up with a load of characters you don't know what to do with!

And don't worry, no one will copy your story: It's not good at all.

I have to agree with you on this. Most of the Fanfiction I read here makes my eyes bleed. This included.

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I am a major, major, fan of Brad. I DON'T NEED NO ICON!

I used to be LDragoDestroy/Finisher L Drago, if you don't know who someone is talking to.

That's a horrible way of thinking, for a writer.

Why don't you think up some characters?! Is it that hard? Really? Don't be so lazy. And why do you need ten characters per chapters? You're gonna end up with a load of characters you don't know what to do with!

And don't worry, no one will copy your story: It's not good at all.

I have to agree with you on this. Most of the Fanfiction I read here makes my eyes bleed. This included.

i dont see you making one of these trust me it harder than it looks ALOT harder

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My dream is to be in someone's lol Quotes in their sig

I have, and it has proper grammar, spelling, and has some paragraphs, ETC ETC. I'm writing a novel, thank you very much.

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I am a major, major, fan of Brad. I DON'T NEED NO ICON!

I used to be LDragoDestroy/Finisher L Drago, if you don't know who someone is talking to.

That's a horrible way of thinking, for a writer.

Why don't you think up some characters?! Is it that hard? Really? Don't be so lazy. And why do you need ten characters per chapters? You're gonna end up with a load of characters you don't know what to do with!

And don't worry, no one will copy your story: It's not good at all.

I have to agree with you on this. Most of the Fanfiction I read here makes my eyes bleed. This included.

i dont see you making one of these trust me it harder than it looks ALOT harder

It might be a little hard to make it interesting and detailed, but if you're gonna write a story, don't just write it for the heck of it, because the only person who wants to read that is you. Write it if you are actually trying to make it something with quality.

ldragodestroy
And yet, these are the "stories" that get comments saying "oh u shuld publish a book!!!!" while the good ones get ignored.
Like really? A 12 year old that can't tell the difference between "your" and "you're" cannot publish a book. Jeez louise.

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I have, and it has proper grammar, spelling, and has some paragraphs, ETC ETC. I'm writing a novel, thank you very much.

i see then

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Actually, this is one of the fourms that suffer from that sort of thing. Some fourms I've been to, most of the people could write a book if they tried.

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