bey story

It was a cold damp night, Ray was walking home from the bey pit, his polished bey in hand. he was about to get to the curb when he was attaked. They knocked him out and dragged him to the warehouse. when he woke up he was alone, at least he thought so. When he saw him he felt like sreaming. It was Rikaru, the owner of Obsidian SpidearusT145WB, Known for defeating the strongest of bladers. His voice was as cold as ice, "morning sleeping beauty." Ray yelled back, "Im not a girl you nitwit!!" Rikaru responded, " Im not here to chat, I'm here to ... BATTLE YOU!! Ray yelled back, " I know that, trust me your going to regret kidnapping me. Me and Nebula Spartus230JB are going to leave you crying like a baby!" " Ok, then lets battle!!" "3...2...1... LET IT RIP!!!


(PART TWO " THE BATTLE" COMING SOON!!)
It helps if you make a new line for dialogue. Example


"I need to go to the bathroom" Nano says while playing Beyblade.
"Down the hall to the left" Bey-Heart replies.


She what I mean?
thank you for the tip!!Wink