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bey of life 2 (character requests wanted)

May. 14, 2011  6:26 PM
 
hey guys wat up got a second bey of life so here we go

chapter 1

It has been over a year since the death blader was defeated and our heroes Jess and Lance are finishing up their last year of middle school. we come to them at the end of the day.

Tik..Tik..Tik..Tik Come on 10 more seconds thought Lance. Tik...Tik..Tik..Tik.. RRRRRRRIIIINNNNGGGGG!!! "Yaaahhhhhoooo! Summer time." screamed Lance. Lance grabbed his books, ran out into the hall and to his locker. He grabbed his stuff and ran for the door. When a teacher stopped him. The teacher gave him a dirty look. Lance still couldn't figure out why the teacher looked so familiar. The teacher kept walking. So did Lance. WWHHAAMM!! Jess smacked Lance in the back. " Another year gone by Lance. What are you doing this summer?" Asked Jess. Lance shrugged and kept walking. He knew what he was going to do though. He was going to train with Heaven Zues in the mountains. Lance ran to the bike rack. Jumped on his bike and waited for Jess. Jess rode up on her bike and they were off.
5 minutes later...
Lance and Jess were at Lance's house. They walked in and Lance grabbed a book off the counter and ran to his room. He shut the door and was in there for a few hours. Jess was fast asleep by the time Lance came out of his room. She was sleeping in Lance's chair. Lance looked at the clock. 12:00 am. Lance's jaw dropped to the floor. He yawned. He walked over to the couch and laid down. He fell asleep in a few seconds.

chapter 1 done. give me feedback
May. 14, 2011  6:46 PM
 
Interesting...Smile If you bring back Jesse could his bey be:
Reborn Eryx DCH90/120/140/170 RWD (Defense Change Height (D125 mixed with CH120) Rubber Wide Defense
and also change his name to Alex because he is being hunted (if thats ok)
May. 15, 2011  2:36 AM
 
nice story when will we gonna have the next chapter
May. 16, 2011  10:04 PM
 
ok so on the changing jesse's name topic that might happen but i still have to add on another character that somebody requested on the first bey of life but here is chapter 2

"Prepare to die fool." The man raised his hand and a draft came through the window. The blader flew through the door. "Wh..Wh...Who are you?" said the blader. The man did not answer. He raised his hand again. This time a tornado started inside the house. It took out everything in its path. The blader jumped up and ran. But a book flew off the shelf and hit him in the back of the head. He fell face first to the ground. Their was a hill next to the house. He jumped up again and dove down the side of the hill. It was literally almost a 90 degree angel with the top. There was a lake down below. the blader landed in it, swam ashore and ran into the woods. He just made it out. The man looked down and the blader was nowhere to be seen. The man jumped up and turned to ash and flew through the wind.
May. 17, 2011  12:06 AM
 
I have a character
Name:Andrew Electro (Male)(Good)
Bey: Thunder Serpent D125MD (Defense) (Thunder is like Pre-HWS Libra wheel)
Personality:Friendly and excitable
Age:13
Special Move:Lightning Snake Barrage(The bey surges with electricity making it impossible for the opposing bey to attack without losing a lot of spin power)
May. 17, 2011  11:27 AM
 
That was creepy and awesome!