alexscott12's story 1: Ginga's destiny

Poll: is it good?

great
39.13%
9
good
21.74%
5
needs improvement
17.39%
4
this is carp!
21.74%
5
Total: 100% 23 vote(s)
I do need more votes. there's no need in making a story that only 2 people like enough to post in
Dude this is soo cool keep it up me and my bro are reading it and we want to put in some body ok so Akio is 14 and he has a world ldrago the world ring is like a storm and lighning combo with ten bars of attack Akio looks like a goth version of ginga world ldragos speical move is lightning explosion now every attack ldrago does makes a crack on the opponents beyP
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