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(Oct. 20, 2018 3:10 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Fin Dakon vs Kaden FrostNice story, but we both did different characters of mine. Also, mine is directly above your post.
Fin was at a bey park waiting for her turn to battle. A person named Kaden Frost was battling he burst his opponent soon as it started then it was fin turn she walk to the stadium and said hi Kaden ignored her and said do you want to battle or not. Fin say yes they got ready and say 3 2 1 LET IT RIP both beyblades spin around the stadium kaden says ice burg wall. Freezing Khione turns ice blue and go's to the middle. Dragoon go's in for a attack and slides off it goes in again and again and again Dragoon slows down and falls over. The referee said winner by survival score 1-0. Kaden says that was fun for me ready for round two. Fin eyes turn fire red her skin begin to glow red. She says you know it I am just getting started it. They get ready and say 3 2 1 LET IT RIP both beyblades spin around the stadium kaden says ice burg wall it goes to the middle and turn ice blue. Fin calls out her move dragon fight Dragoon spins in super tight circular moments and make a vortex and then rides up it and then falls right on top of Khione bursting it. Kaden is amazed to see that he had lost. He Shook hands with Fin and said good job but I will beat you next time. Fin say okay and thanks for the battle.
Kaden and Khione was made by [Dt2000]
(Oct. 20, 2018 3:00 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Vincent Blaze grinned. “Vis may have defeated me, but I bet you can’t.” Fin gave a small smile in response and readied her launcher. Vincent did the same. “Three! Two! One! Let it...That was way better then my.
Rip!” Dragoon quickly locked down the center, Vulcan circling rapidly. “Haaah! White-Hot Sabers!” Vulcan’s trail turned white-hot and it quickly dashed towards Dragoon. Fin grinned. “End this, Dragoon! Dragon Flight!” Dragoon lept into the air and Vulcan missed. Then Dragoon landed on top and flung Vulcan from the stadium.
Vincent sprang into the air and caught the Beyblade in a somersault. Fin grinned as she caught her Beyblade. Vincent put his Beyblade on the launcher and said happily, “Good game, but you can’t win this time.” She put her Beyblade and launcher together and laughed, “After that match, you can’t win!” Vincent’s eyes gleamed as he scanned her and her launcher. She was clearly proud and as such, her launcher was at an off angle.
He grinned and angled his launcher, knowing she wouldn’t notice. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Dragoon began to circle the center, slightly wobbling. “Huh? Dragoon! Regain your balance!” Dragoon took the center, frame and wings scraping the floor. Meanwhile, Vulcan was shooting around the stadium with extreme speed. It struck Dragoon’s frame. “Tail Whip! Dragoon!” Vulcan was flung into the air. Vincent jumped into the air. There was a click as Vulcan switched to defense mode. “Burning Cannonball!” Vulcan crashes into Dragoon and burst it, sending the pieces flying towards Fin, who gasped as she caught the parts. “Dragoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!” She screamed into the sky, Dragoon’s beast crying out alongside her. And for a brief moment, the world was still, save for two souls, perfectly bonded, crying out.
(Oct. 20, 2018 3:16 AM)Jman jman Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2018 3:00 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Vincent Blaze grinned. “Vis may have defeated me, but I bet you can’t.” Fin gave a small smile in response and readied her launcher. Vincent did the same. “Three! Two! One! Let it...That was way better then my.
Rip!” Dragoon quickly locked down the center, Vulcan circling rapidly. “Haaah! White-Hot Sabers!” Vulcan’s trail turned white-hot and it quickly dashed towards Dragoon. Fin grinned. “End this, Dragoon! Dragon Flight!” Dragoon lept into the air and Vulcan missed. Then Dragoon landed on top and flung Vulcan from the stadium.
Vincent sprang into the air and caught the Beyblade in a somersault. Fin grinned as she caught her Beyblade. Vincent put his Beyblade on the launcher and said happily, “Good game, but you can’t win this time.” She put her Beyblade and launcher together and laughed, “After that match, you can’t win!” Vincent’s eyes gleamed as he scanned her and her launcher. She was clearly proud and as such, her launcher was at an off angle.
He grinned and angled his launcher, knowing she wouldn’t notice. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Dragoon began to circle the center, slightly wobbling. “Huh? Dragoon! Regain your balance!” Dragoon took the center, frame and wings scraping the floor. Meanwhile, Vulcan was shooting around the stadium with extreme speed. It struck Dragoon’s frame. “Tail Whip! Dragoon!” Vulcan was flung into the air. Vincent jumped into the air. There was a click as Vulcan switched to defense mode. “Burning Cannonball!” Vulcan crashes into Dragoon and burst it, sending the pieces flying towards Fin, who gasped as she caught the parts. “Dragoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!” She screamed into the sky, Dragoon’s beast crying out alongside her. And for a brief moment, the world was still, save for two souls, perfectly bonded, crying out.
(Oct. 20, 2018 4:09 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Matt Smith vs Vincent BlazeI finished too
Right after Vincent and fin got done battleing fin try to ask for a rematch but Matt push her out the way and say my turn. Vincent says ha another blader who want to feel the power of Forge Vulcan Matt says your battle was impressed I will give you that but you won't beat Reverse Minbros. Vincent can feel Matt's power he decides not to hold back.
They get ready AND say 3 2 1 LET Vincent jump in the air IT RIP minbros hits the stadium floor and stared spinning Vincent yells Ultra Blazing Hammer Crash! Vulcan falls at super fast speeds and hits Minbros. Minbros flys in to the air on the way down Vulcan hits Minbros and knocks it out the stadium. Matt picks up his beyblade and looks at it has two clicks. Matt sets it to defense mode. And says wow that was epic but this time that won't happen.
They get ready and say 3 2 1 LET Vincent jump in the air IT RIP. Minbros gose in to a banking movement Vulcan falls out the air about to hit Minbros. Minbros moves out the way only by a second. There is a shock wave from Vulcan impact with the floor. It sends minbros flying. Minbros lands on the edge of the stadium. Matt yells Minbros stampede minbros fall of the edge speeding down the stadium floor and then hit Vulcan bursting it. Matt wins. Vincent started to walk off when Matt says great battle Vincent turn and and says thanks.
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(Oct. 20, 2018 4:17 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Somewhere across the world, a Blader awoke, hearing the pure spirit and power of a Blader with a strong bond. And... something else, something weaker. It was a heartbreaking noise. He got on a plane with a goal. He would find that Blader’s aura and battle them, a worthy opponent at last.
The next morning, he got off the plane, yawning from the jet lag. He began to walk out of the airport, eventually spotting the blazing flame aura he had sensed.
“Oy! You there!” He called towards the Blader, who turned towards him, eyes blazing with the aura. “What?” He responded angrily, a dark tinge spreading through his aura. The mysterious Blader’s eyes widened, and he grinned at the surge of power. “I wanna battle you.”
“Who are you?” The Blader with the flaming aura asked.
“My name is Matt and I’m a Blader with the rare gift of sensing other’s auras, and yours is the only one I’ve ever sensed like my own.”
His flame aura intensified and a Beast appeared above him. “No.” He simply responded and he turned around and walked away. “Wait! I sensed another aura. A weaker one, and a cry of pain and defeat. Was that yours?”
The flames turned deep purple and evil. He spun around angrily. “No, that was my opponent. And after that, I refuse to battle again.” And with that, he left.
Matt gasped as he realized the story, remembering the horrifying cry. However, he was determined, and the next day, asked again. That time, the other Blader came out and said, “My name is Vincent Blaze and I’m a Blader who uses Forge Vulcan. Do you want to battle me?” His aura had returned to the original flames.
Matt grinned and responded, “Of course. I won’t go easy on you.”
“Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Vincent jumped into the air before launching. Vulcan, surrounded in flames, slammed downwards into Minoboros. “Ultra Blazing Hammer Crash!” Minoboros was flung out of the stadium almost effortlessly.
Matt grinned. “Good job!
But that was just defense mode. You won’t defeat us in Attack Mode!”
Vincent grinned. “Let’s go!” His aura turned dark purple. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Vincent jumped into the air again, higher than he had leapt last round. Vulcan crashed down, barely missing Minoboros, and left a long gash in the stadium. Minoboros took the center as Vulcan glowed darkly. “Let’s go Vulcan!
Black Velvet Inferno!” Vulcan struck Minoboros as hard as it could, black fire locking both in a ring of grinding against each other. They both burst, Vulcan completely dissolving from the effort, but it’s beast remaining.
Vincent collapsed, sobbing, his aura spinning black and red. Vincent let out a loud, eerie cry, two alternate cries combining with it, and everything was silent.
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(Oct. 20, 2018 4:25 AM)Jman jman Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2018 4:17 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Somewhere across the world, a Blader awoke, hearing the pure spirit and power of a Blader with a strong bond. And... something else, something weaker. It was a heartbreaking noise. He got on a plane with a goal. He would find that Blader’s aura and battle them, a worthy opponent at last.Thank you. *bows*
The next morning, he got off the plane, yawning from the jet lag. He began to walk out of the airport, eventually spotting the blazing flame aura he had sensed.
“Oy! You there!” He called towards the Blader, who turned towards him, eyes blazing with the aura. “What?” He responded angrily, a dark tinge spreading through his aura. The mysterious Blader’s eyes widened, and he grinned at the surge of power. “I wanna battle you.”
“Who are you?” The Blader with the flaming aura asked.
“My name is Matt and I’m a Blader with the rare gift of sensing other’s auras, and yours is the only one I’ve ever sensed like my own.”
His flame aura intensified and a Beast appeared above him. “No.” He simply responded and he turned around and walked away. “Wait! I sensed another aura. A weaker one, and a cry of pain and defeat. Was that yours?”
The flames turned deep purple and evil. He spun around angrily. “No, that was my opponent. And after that, I refuse to battle again.” And with that, he left.
Matt gasped as he realized the story, remembering the horrifying cry. However, he was determined, and the next day, asked again. That time, the other Blader came out and said, “My name is Vincent Blaze and I’m a Blader who uses Forge Vulcan. Do you want to battle me?” His aura had returned to the original flames.
Matt grinned and responded, “Of course. I won’t go easy on you.”
“Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Vincent jumped into the air before launching. Vulcan, surrounded in flames, slammed downwards into Minoboros. “Ultra Blazing Hammer Crash!” Minoboros was flung out of the stadium almost effortlessly.
Matt grinned. “Good job!
But that was just defense mode. You won’t defeat us in Attack Mode!”
Vincent grinned. “Let’s go!” His aura turned dark purple. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Vincent jumped into the air again, higher than he had leapt last round. Vulcan crashed down, barely missing Minoboros, and left a long gash in the stadium. Minoboros took the center as Vulcan glowed darkly. “Let’s go Vulcan!
Black Velvet Inferno!” Vulcan struck Minoboros as hard as it could, black fire locking both in a ring of grinding against each other. They both burst, Vulcan completely dissolving from the effort, but it’s beast remaining.
Vincent collapsed, sobbing, his aura spinning black and red. Vincent let out a loud, eerie cry, two alternate cries combining with it, and everything was silent.
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(Oct. 21, 2018 3:23 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 3:06 AM)MWF Wrote: @[Dt20000] I am guessing that Vincent has dark power now. Also @[Jman jman] mind if I do Vis vs Matt?Not canonically in my story, but Dragoon’s sadness and pain corrupted it.
(Oct. 21, 2018 3:51 AM)MWF Wrote: Vis vs Matt
Matt is walking through a beypark as his eyes catch something interesting. A blader with an unexplainable aura. Vibrant yet monochrome, vast yet concentrated, masculine yet feminine . He walks up to the stadium and is met with a pair of milky green eyes.
"Hello," Said Vis, picking up Sonar, "can I help you?"
"Um, yes," Matt stumbles over his words, "would you mind battling?"
Vis gets his launcher ready and says, "Sure, why not." Matt gets his launcher ready and they launch. The two beys clash in the center and Matt notices that despite the professional launch technique and skill this blader is watching with wide eyes like it is the first battle they have seen. Sonar knocks Minoboros away and takes the center. Minoboros dives down and bursts on impact . Vis smiles and cheerfully says, "Best out of three?"
They launch again and Matt yells, "Minoboros guard!" As Sonar dives down and hits Minoboros, the impact causes both beys to bounce out of the center and Sonar rockets towards Minoboros. Minoboros gets sent flying out of the stadium on impact. Vis laughs and says, "Your bey is interesting."
Another blader walks up and says, "Hey bro, mind if I record the next round for research?" Vis responds by saying, "Sure," Then he turns to face a confused Matt and says, "Let’s make this round interesting."
Vis bends down close to the stadium and brings his launcher back. Matt still confused by the situation says, "Wait, wait, wait, I'm sorry but your a guy?"
Vis laughs and says, "Yep, what did you think I was a girl?" Matt sheepishly says yes and Vis responds with, "Not the first person. Now where were we?"
They launch and Sonar rockets into Minoboros pushing it back as Minoboros attempts to spin steal but the ring on the layer stops it until Minoboros gets sent flying. "Silent Retribution." Says Vis as Sonar rockets into Minoboros. Matt notices that the bladers aura turned gold as Minoboros bursts on impact.
"I guess I haven't introduced my self yet," Says Vis reaching out his hand, "The names Vis Tordaline."
Matt stumbles over his words and says, "I'm Matt Smith."
Vis grins and as he walks away he says, "You just battled America's best Blader."
-end of story-
Credit:
Matt and reverse Minoboros @(Jman jman)
Note: A little context. Vis has a high voice, small frame, and is short for a boy his age. Combine that with a bit of attitude and there is where the confusion comes from.
(Oct. 21, 2018 3:23 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Not canonically in my story, but Dragoon’s sadness and pain corrupted it.
Ok, makes sense.
(Oct. 21, 2018 3:58 AM)Jman jman Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 3:51 AM)MWF Wrote: Vis vs Matt
Matt is walking through a beypark as his eyes catch something interesting. A blader with an unexplainable aura. Vibrant yet monochrome, vast yet concentrated, masculine yet feminine . He walks up to the stadium and is met with a pair of milky green eyes.
"Hello," Said Vis, picking up Sonar, "can I help you?"
"Um, yes," Matt stumbles over his words, "would you mind battling?"
Vis gets his launcher ready and says, "Sure, why not." Matt gets his launcher ready and they launch. The two beys clash in the center and Matt notices that despite the professional launch technique and skill this blader is watching with wide eyes like it is the first battle they have seen. Sonar knocks Minoboros away and takes the center. Minoboros dives down and bursts on impact . Vis smiles and cheerfully says, "Best out of three?"
They launch again and Matt yells, "Minoboros guard!" As Sonar dives down and hits Minoboros, the impact causes both beys to bounce out of the center and Sonar rockets towards Minoboros. Minoboros gets sent flying out of the stadium on impact. Vis laughs and says, "Your bey is interesting."
Another blader walks up and says, "Hey bro, mind if I record the next round for research?" Vis responds by saying, "Sure," Then he turns to face a confused Matt and says, "Let’s make this round interesting."
Vis bends down close to the stadium and brings his launcher back. Matt still confused by the situation says, "Wait, wait, wait, I'm sorry but your a guy?"
Vis laughs and says, "Yep, what did you think I was a girl?" Matt sheepishly says yes and Vis responds with, "Not the first person. Now where were we?"
They launch and Sonar rockets into Minoboros pushing it back as Minoboros attempts to spin steal but the ring on the layer stops it until Minoboros gets sent flying. "Silent Retribution." Says Vis as Sonar rockets into Minoboros. Matt notices that the bladers aura turned gold as Minoboros bursts on impact.
"I guess I haven't introduced my self yet," Says Vis reaching out his hand, "The names Vis Tordaline."
Matt stumbles over his words and says, "I'm Matt Smith."
Vis grins and as he walks away he says, "You just battled America's best Blader."
-end of story-
Credit:
Matt and reverse Minoboros @(Jman jman)
Note: A little context. Vis has a high voice, small frame, and is short for a boy his age. Combine that with a bit of attitude and there is where the confusion comes from.
Ok, makes sense.
It was good but you could at least had Matt put up a fight.
(Oct. 21, 2018 4:11 AM)MWF Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 3:58 AM)Jman jman Wrote: It was good but you could at least had Matt put up a fight.
Lucid Sonar (also known as CZ Sonar ) is an attack stamina hybrid and Vis is a top ranked blader. Matt bumped into Vis not knowing who they were.
If you challenged a random Blader would you expect it to be the champion?
Also quick question, is reverse Minoboros a god bey or a Chouzetsu bey? Your description of the bey had no true mention of metal on the layer.
If it is a god bey then mind if I help with the evolution. Vis could act like a mentor. Matt has potential.
Sorry if I got agressive there, thanks for the compliment.
(Oct. 21, 2018 4:16 AM)Jman jman Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 4:11 AM)MWF Wrote: Lucid Sonar (also known as CZ Sonar ) is an attack stamina hybrid and Vis is a top ranked blader. Matt bumped into Vis not knowing who they were.
If you challenged a random Blader would you expect it to be the champion?
Also quick question, is reverse Minoboros a god bey or a Chouzetsu bey? Your description of the bey had no true mention of metal on the layer.
If it is a god bey then mind if I help with the evolution. Vis could act like a mentor. Matt has potential.
Sorry if I got agressive there, thanks for the compliment.
It is a god bey and yes I do want vis to be matt mentor. And you were not agressive at all
(Oct. 21, 2018 4:24 AM)MWF Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 4:16 AM)Jman jman Wrote: It is a god bey and yes I do want vis to be matt mentor. And you were not agressive at all
Ok. Zac (Vis' older brother. The one that filmed the final round of the battle) Makes beyblades and can help. The footage analyzes how Matt battles and a program creates a type and subtype the the beyblade will be based off. Then it is a combination of digital rendering done by Zac and input by Matt.
Also If you don't mind I have an idea that I would like to try. This Minoboros would be different than reverse Minoboros. I would call it Guard Minoboros. I will give information when I type up the story tomorrow.
Also mind if I do the bey info on the character thread. It was a little hard to understand.
(Oct. 21, 2018 4:31 AM)Jman jman Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2018 4:24 AM)MWF Wrote: Ok. Zac (Vis' older brother. The one that filmed the final round of the battle) Makes beyblades and can help. The footage analyzes how Matt battles and a program creates a type and subtype the the beyblade will be based off. Then it is a combination of digital rendering done by Zac and input by Matt.
Also If you don't mind I have an idea that I would like to try. This Minoboros would be different than reverse Minoboros. I would call it Guard Minoboros. I will give information when I type up the story tomorrow.
Also mind if I do the bey info on the character thread. It was a little hard to understand.
Sure. But remember he has been battleing since Mfb so he has lot of blader spirit.