The world end with you(beyblade version)Chapter 7 coming soon so stay tune

Poll: How good was my story

Awsome
46.15%
6
Really good I love it
7.69%
1
GOod but could use a litle bit of work
30.77%
4
My eyes are bleeding!!!!
15.38%
2
Total: 100% 13 vote(s)
Ah Hell Ya!
Grim kicked a**
(Aug. 29, 2012  5:36 AM)Insomniac Wrote:
Beyblade version of the Reaper's game Tongue_out

Some 'i's are un-capitilized. Also, put spaces after your punctuation.

I knew YOU would freak out Tongue_out
(Aug. 29, 2012  10:14 PM)TorontosBest Wrote:
(Aug. 29, 2012  5:36 AM)Insomniac Wrote:
Beyblade version of the Reaper's game Tongue_out

Some 'i's are un-capitilized. Also, put spaces after your punctuation.

I knew YOU would freak out Tongue_out

rofl, isn't it obvious XD
Name: Hassan Davis
Beyblade:Meteo all-star (football player)
Personality: He ats just like ryouga(metal fusion and masters)
looks: LIkes ryogue in 12 year old form
Psych(special move up to 3):L-dragos
Entry fee precious thing character gave up to be in the reaper game): He gave up his family and freedom of beyblade.
another bad guy 4 ur story
name- tobi
bey- twisted striker bd145mb
looks- tall with a evil smile, has white hair and a black cap , then a grey 2-shirt with a black jacket and a jean
way he acts- mysterious , rude , always crush the opponent forever
special moves(pysch)- evil sword(glows in black and den strike the bey), reaper's call(creates illusion of multiple beys and strike the bey crushin into pieces), dark ride(creates a vortex aroundbey sendin his owner and bey in other dimension)
fee- father's ring
I have an ally for you. Alex Johnson
Age:12
Bey:Flame Wolf 230 B
Personality: Bad attitude, opposite of optimistic, loves punk music(hates all others) secret part of heart for 3 things purple,his wolf and his ally's
ApperanceGrinark purple fauxhawk,signature dark purple earbuds and oakley purple flak jackets, black necklace, a suit with dark purple tie, distressed jeans and some gray converses.
Sorry chapter 5 will be up tommorow schedual change
Chapter 5 finally up
Cool Chris got new powers!!!
Yea but things are about to get more insane
Chapter 6 up but this chapter might give you a frown
EPIC!but why you made him died!maybe you should have game him new powers too!its just sad...
chapter 6 is really good , my character finally into story
chapter 6 is really good , my character finally into story
Dont worry he might come back Wink but I did say a character will die depending on the outcome and who they face but who knows he may comeback and dragonphang101 try to keep yourself from double posting

Drake lost because he was exausted from his match with chris
Chapter 7 will be up today
what can i do ??? whenever i post a reply it is automatically double posted
Sorry guys for not making chapters school is really killing me since I get out at 5 and have to go to school early so I am exhausted but I wtite the next chapter probably tommorow this weekend so stay tune
Chapter 7 and 8 will appear this week
Name: Jason Kitaro
Beyblade:phantom eagle 135 ms
Personality: Shy confident in battles powerful has no memory of his childhood
Looks: jacket baggy dark blue jeans strait hair vans shoes and shirt
Special move: ghost flight it goes in circle so fas than bam it hits you
Entrance fee: wbba pasport
Name: Wade Moore
Beyblade:Hades Wolf 230 ES
Personality: He is hard to sway and pretends he has no heart but secretly cares deeply for his freinds.
Looks: Black skull distressed jeans, Green Day shirt, dark purple converses( high tops),purple Mohawk and most importantly his purple earbuds.
Special move: Wolf Claws and Flaming Bite(when powered by his bey6
Entrance Fee: His dark purple Beats headphones.
Sorry guys about chapter 7 I posted it but my computer isbhaving annoying problems lately so I have to post it tomorrow as I said I have alot of things to do and I have a busy schedual
This story is cool.(reminds me of The Hunger Games)