Chapter 1

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“I'm gonna crush you!” Ragio, the town bully said.
“Not today!” The kid saidKling! The kid knocked out Ragio’s bey.
One of Ragio’s friends was behind the kid. So the kid kicked him.
“Wait! What’s your name?” Ragio asked the kid “Jario!” Jario shouted as he ran away.
Ragio smiled a creepy smile. “Boys, look out for him. Next time you see him challenge him.” “Sure Ragio but can we go get an ice cream now?”
“Let’s go.”

“Where were you Jario?” Thomas said. “Me and Katri’s match is about to start!”
“I have a life!” Jario Shouted.
“ Failte Roimh gach duine!”Blader DJ said. “Let the Irish team qualifiers between Thomas and Katri....Begin!”
“3...2...1....LET IT RIP!”Thomas and Katri shout.
“Why try? I will win.” Katri says.
“What did you just say?” Thomas says with rage.
“I SAID, WHY TRY?I WILL WIN!” Katri says
“I know what you said but I’m gonna win” Thomas smiles then sticks out his tong.
“Hey!” Katri shouts “Hay is for horses I know because I worked on a farm”
“Now rex, Do your special move, crushing jaw!” “Boom I win!” Katri shouts. “Hey don’t worry your still on the team your just not the captain” “I know, Jario is your, the sub.”
“WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTT!!”

Chapter 2

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“No no noo! I won!” Katri shouts at Thomas.
“Well actually that was one point to you I have ten points. Even if I won you would still be the sub. You gained one point which brings you to nine. Jario has 13, Nial has 11 ,I have 10 and you have 9. So hah!”
“I’m not your friend anymore.” Katri said even though she did kind of liked Thomas.
“Yes. Katri-the-only-blader-in-the-world-who-can-launch-while-upside-down-with-force is not my friend? Wow I’m evil!”
“Thomas! You were awesome!” Jario said.
“I know!”Thomas said with pride.
A while later in Nial’s house
Thomas is on the sun chair, Katri is still sulking in the corner, Jario is practising and trying to get Katri to practise with him and Nial is preparing a meal.
“Nial”
“Yes katri?”
"Why am I THE SUB?”
“Because, Katri, you scored the least amount of points.” Nial said as he stirred some pasta.
“NO NO NO! I'm TELLING YOU IT WAS A FIX!” Katri boomed across the room.
“Katri if you don’t stop sulking I’ll go to the top floor of my apartment and drop your bey of.” Jario said.
“There is one epic fail in your plan.”
“What?”
“Do you know where my bey is?”
“Ehhh In your pocket!”
“No.”
“HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” Jario jumped on Katri.
“Dude, Really?” Katri kicked Jario in the face.
“Owww!”
“RIIIIIIINGO” Katri shouted.
“Woof” The dog barked back.
“Attack.”
“Ok ok I'm sorry!”
“Sit.”
“Now Thomas lets settle this once and for all!”
“Hey you’ll practise with him but not me!”
“Yeh because I don’t like you.”Katri said sarcastically
“Ok lets go outside to the megastadium and have a tag team!” Jario said.
“I pick Nial!”Katri shouted.
“Hey!Why’d you get to pick for me?”
“ I just do.So its me and Nial and Jario and Thomas.”
“Okay I’ll take Thomas out and you take Jario.”
“3!”Jario shouted
“2!” Katri shouted
“11111!!”Thomas shouted.
“LET I’ RIP!” They all shouted.

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look like it will turn out to be a great story
i am interested on what will happen

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Chapter 2

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“No no noo! I won!”Katri shouts at Thomas. “Well actually that was one point to you I have ten points. Even if I won you would still be the sub. You gained one point which brings you to nine. Jario has 13, Nial has 11 ,I have 10 and you have 9. So hah!” “I’m not your friend anymore.” Katri said even though she did kind of liked Thomas. “Yes. Katri-the-only-blader-in-the-world-who-can-launch-while-upside-down-with-force is not my friend? Wow I’m evil!” “Thomas! You were awesome!” Jario said. “I know!”Thomas said with pride.
A while later in Nial’s house
Thomas is on the sun chair, Katri is still sulking in the corner, Jario is practising and trying to get Katri to practise with him and Nial is preparing a meal.
“Nial” “Yes katri?” “Why am I THE SUB?” “Because, Katri, you scored the least amount of points.” Nial said as he stirred some pasta. “NO NO NO! I'm TELLING YOU IT WAS A FIX!” Katri boomed across the room. “Katri if you don’t stop sulking I’ll go to the top floor of my apartment and drop your bey of.” Jario said. “There is one epic fail in your plan.” “What?” “Do you know where my bey is?” “Ehhh In your pocket!” “No.” “HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” Jario jumped on Katri. “Dude, Really?” Katri kicked Jario in the face. “Owww!” “RIIIIIIINGO” Katri shouted. “Woof” The dog barked back. “Attack.” “Ok ok I'm sorry!” “Sit.” “Now Thomas lets settle this once and for all!” “Hey you’ll practise with him but not me!” “Yeh because I don’t like you.”Katri said sarcastically “Ok lets go outside to the megastadium and have a tag team!” Jario said. “I pick Nial!”Katri shouted. “Hey!”Why’d you get to pick for me?” “ I just do.So its me and Nial and Jario and Thomas.” “Okay I’ll take Thomas out and you take Jario.” “3!”Jario shouted “2!” Katri shouted “11111!!”Thomas shouted. “LET I’ RIP!” They all shouted.

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Trying to get to grips with the new stuff after taking an eight year break from the franchise  :D