The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story]

Poll: Is it good?

its more than good
100.00%
2
Um not so good.....
0%
0
Awesomely awesome
0%
0
Ewwwwwww you need help
0%
0
Total: 100% 2 vote(s)
Well this will be my first true story I hope it isnt bad considering I have alot of work and barely any free time

Chapter 1 Intro to the group
Just a note for the future.

Post future chapters in this original thread instead of having to make a new thread every time.

Thanks!
Just a few tips:
Work on spelling and grammar, as there are a lot of mistakes with those.
Put the chapter in spoilers.
You did a pretty good job describing the characters, now work on describing their environment.

Good luck with your story!
Yeah sorry about that dont really know how to do spoilers kinda embarrassing and I understand what you are saying and again I tried but I failed to put it in spoilers do i like just click spoil when the insertion point is in the right spot?
Well here's what you can do with spoilers:
Put this at the very beginning of your post-> [ spoiler ]
And this at the very end-> [ /spoiler ]
Just take away the spaces between the brackets and words.
Sorry for the dry spell got WAY caught up with homework and school but hopefully i can write i new chapter to continue this story