The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 14, 2014
Well this will be my first true story I hope it isnt bad considering I have alot of work and barely any free time
Chapter 1 Intro to the group
As I confronted my partner on a team member I met in at a park he seemed irritated by it. He had his thumb in his mouth chewing his nails and fixing his short black hair.His florescent red shoes shined In the afternoon sun. He wore his regular black jacket and red shirt with his red nike headband and his tan skin seemed to darken with the sun set. Kaleb could be considered someone that's good looking I don't like guys or anything but he is my cousin so im not afraid of me thinking that way. I had on my dark blue shoes black skinny jeans and light brown hair with my blue no sleeve shirt was my regular outfit and I usually keep my hair short cut.
"She is a noob there is NO way she could become a member of our team." Kaleb said.
"Well she defeat me on her second try she is a beyblade genius."
"Cmon Iza you know it should only be me and you on this journey."
"It is smart to add one more member to our duo cmon she is really good."
"Ugh ok let me battle her and then maybe she can join." I smiled and we walked towards our neighboorhood in the cleanest projects on earth.
"I'll text you and her for a meeting time." I said as we walked our separate ways to our Homes.
"Alright." he shouted back
My mom asked me some questions as we ate dinner she usually likes to make small talk with me and my father.
"So how was your day hun." My moms usual one question that I always answer with......
"Good ma."
"Well thats good and how is Kaleb?"
"Great."
"Well that is good."
I sped up on eating so i could leave the dinner table to practice my launching. As I placed my partner bey wing befall t125rsf on my launcher
I admired the beautiful beyblade. I love befall we have a bond that couldnt be broken......so i thought.Then i fell asleep dreaming of me and my beyblade in a battle with some dark figure and i couldnt make out his bey and as soon as i was about to get a close up on him.
BUZZ! my alarm woke me up just in time i put my clothes on and hurried down stairs with my beyblade and launcher.
"Bye." I said walking out the door it into the warm morning. I looked at my watch amd realized I was going to be late for the battle today so I ran down the big street full of trash to the new park. I said hello to everyone in that was out in the morning as i jogged at a reasonable speed.I finally reached the bey park to see Kaleb and the female beyblade genius Sierra waiting for my arrival to battle. I flashed a huge smiled at them as I walked up to them. I couldn't help to stare at Sierra she was a short light skin girl with long wavy black hair. She wore a bright green jacket with baby blue tight pants and green sandals. Her bright hazel eyes seem to shine around all the people at the beypark and the early morning sun.
"What up Kaleb, Nice to see you again Sierra."
" Well what are we waiting for lets get this show on the road."Kaleb said unenthusiasticlly.
"Im ready when you guys are." Sierra said.
"Ok lets do it i wanna see this." I said while Sierra and Kaleb got ready to launch
"3 2 1 Let it rip!" We all shouted in unison.
Kalebs Torch fireblaze s130mb floated to the middle while Sierra Poison scorpio 130hf ran around the stadium. The first blow was given by scorpio as she did a barrage attack on fireblaze which only made it look like she was losing stamina
"Its gonna take more than that to beat me, Fireblaze show her what you are made of."Kaleb shouted.
Fireblaze began dealing out heavy blows to scorpio and scorpio lost alot of power. Then all of a sudden fireblazed stopped and it began to wobble.
"This is over scorpios posion seems to have taken effect."
"Wahh." Scorpio began to viciously attack fireblaze it seemed like it was over then Kaleb smirked.
"I admit your good but this is over FIREBLAZE NOW SPECIAL MOVE BURNING FLASH."
"Its not gonna end this way cmon scorpio we can use it now special move deadly strike." A flash of fire and a green light filed the arena and when it cleared both beys where not spinning.
"Man im pumped that was EPIC." I said to both of them
"Yeah good game your strong."Kaleb said."And I hope you would join up with us."
"Sounds like a plan."
"Well after watching I really want to battle now."
"Im up for another battle lets go." Kaleb sounded very ready to battle me so I got put befall on my launcher and went over to the stadium.
" 3 2 1 Let it rip!" We all shouted.
"Go now befall!"
RE: The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - blah - Jan. 14, 2014
Just a note for the future.
Post future chapters in this original thread instead of having to make a new thread every time.
Thanks!
RE: The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - Dual - Jan. 14, 2014
Just a few tips:
Work on spelling and grammar, as there are a lot of mistakes with those.
Put the chapter in spoilers.
You did a pretty good job describing the characters, now work on describing their environment.
Good luck with your story!
RE: The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 14, 2014
Yeah sorry about that dont really know how to do spoilers kinda embarrassing and I understand what you are saying and again I tried but I failed to put it in spoilers do i like just click spoil when the insertion point is in the right spot?
RE: The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - Dual - Jan. 14, 2014
Well here's what you can do with spoilers:
Put this at the very beginning of your post-> [ spoiler ]
And this at the very end-> [ /spoiler ]
Just take away the spaces between the brackets and words.
RE: The adventures of Iza mason[Beyblade story] - thelegISlAtive - Mar. 08, 2014
Sorry for the dry spell got WAY caught up with homework and school but hopefully i can write i new chapter to continue this story
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