The Sorcerer - Non-BeyBlade Story

I wrote this story last year. It's not that good but I wanted to see what you think of it. I will not be making any more chapters. This is the full story.

The Sorcerer (Click to View)
It was based from "Harry Potter", No?


Well, This story is well made. It was a story of a boy who never knew he was special, correct? It was planned neat and nicely. But for some instances, It felt to rush. You see, when you were describing the boy, You just skipped other parts and added how the orphanage looked like, and both lack details. "Modo" is a boy, correct? what does he exactly looks like? Is he skinny or fat? muscular or wimpy? This are vital for the main character, so many will understand who he really is. And lastly, there isn't much conversation, Try to add that, OK?

Final Verdict
Grammar: 10/10 (I never saw any grammatical error)
Flow: 7/10 (As I said, It felt to rush)
Character Himself/Herself/Themselves: 8/10 (Modo wasn't described properly)
Dialogue: 6/10 (Little dialogue, but I understand you are going for the descriptive approach)

Overall:
9/10
Ok, thanks. As I said before, it was one of the first, but best, stories I have ever wrote.