and dont forget but my later appearing charachter has the ORIGINAL Static fusion wheel
The Dolphin's Adventure (not accepting character requests!) Vote on Poll! (not writing anymore)
Poll: How is the story?
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ok, ok
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LAST TIME ON “The Dolphin’s Adventure†UMI WINS THE BATTLE WITH SHINPI BUT THEN FINDS ANOTHER BLADER THAT COULD OFFER A CHALLENGE. THE BLADER’S BEY IS ANGRY ZEUS LB145HMF. AFTER JUST A FEW SECONDS OF BATTLING THE BLADER UNLEASHES HIS SPECIAL MOVE!
“Grr! Go Zeus! Special move! Lightning Bolt Attack!†the blader yelled. Then, the wings of LB145 started rapidly shooting lightning bolts at Delphinus.
“Run, Delphinus!†I yelled. Delphinus circled around the stadium, trying to avoid the lightning bolts. “Go Delphinus! Special move! Dolphin Wave!†I yelled. The huge wave hovered over Zeus, and then it crashed down on it. Since water and electricity don’t mix, a huge explosion occurred. When the smoke cleared, I could see that both beys were still spinning.
“Zeus! Lightning Shield!†the blader yelled. Then, Zeus started glowing and then a “Lightning Shield†appeared around Zeus. I tried to attack Zeus but the shield was too strong. There was only one opening: on the top. I then tried to think of a way to defeat Zeus. And then I saw the large dents in the stadium caused by Zeus’s lightning bolts.
“Go Delphinus!†I yelled. Delphinus used one of the dents as a ramp to get up high in the air. “Delphinus! Special move! Blowhole Smash!†I yelled. Delphinus came down at an extremely high speed and smashed into Zeus, going through the only opening of the Lightning Shield.
“Hah!†I said as Delphinus came to my hand. The blader then fell to the floor, defeated.
“Grr! Go Zeus! Special move! Lightning Bolt Attack!†the blader yelled. Then, the wings of LB145 started rapidly shooting lightning bolts at Delphinus.
“Run, Delphinus!†I yelled. Delphinus circled around the stadium, trying to avoid the lightning bolts. “Go Delphinus! Special move! Dolphin Wave!†I yelled. The huge wave hovered over Zeus, and then it crashed down on it. Since water and electricity don’t mix, a huge explosion occurred. When the smoke cleared, I could see that both beys were still spinning.
“Zeus! Lightning Shield!†the blader yelled. Then, Zeus started glowing and then a “Lightning Shield†appeared around Zeus. I tried to attack Zeus but the shield was too strong. There was only one opening: on the top. I then tried to think of a way to defeat Zeus. And then I saw the large dents in the stadium caused by Zeus’s lightning bolts.
“Go Delphinus!†I yelled. Delphinus used one of the dents as a ramp to get up high in the air. “Delphinus! Special move! Blowhole Smash!†I yelled. Delphinus came down at an extremely high speed and smashed into Zeus, going through the only opening of the Lightning Shield.
“Hah!†I said as Delphinus came to my hand. The blader then fell to the floor, defeated.
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-thx to bladeruler!
so you did make angry zeus as your version of hatachi, bey
holy cow i cant exprese how awesome these chapters are keep it up but the main character shouldnt fight battle after battle give some one else a turn lol but keep it up
pyramid scarab w145 c/wd
pyramid= like earth but on the edge thing have bumps and outer area is like a pyrimid looking like
scarab= have like 3 waves one the outer ring to look like wings flaping and a nearly curcle opening that goes around the bunps on pyramid
w145= like claw145 but have 4 not 3 and is curved more
c/wp= have 6 things that is going inwards but not conected/all 6 things come together and lok like a 6 sided pyramid but wide
specal moves are scarab swarm and wing wind wack
scarab storm is like aqueraus specal move
wing wind wick is a move whear the user first go to the center of the stadeom and shoots the whole surface of the stadeom with wind and knocks out the oponent character is allaways wearing a black tshirt and shorts as well as sandels and cery a surf board and lap top and is white
pyramid= like earth but on the edge thing have bumps and outer area is like a pyrimid looking like
scarab= have like 3 waves one the outer ring to look like wings flaping and a nearly curcle opening that goes around the bunps on pyramid
w145= like claw145 but have 4 not 3 and is curved more
c/wp= have 6 things that is going inwards but not conected/all 6 things come together and lok like a 6 sided pyramid but wide
specal moves are scarab swarm and wing wind wack
scarab storm is like aqueraus specal move
wing wind wick is a move whear the user first go to the center of the stadeom and shoots the whole surface of the stadeom with wind and knocks out the oponent character is allaways wearing a black tshirt and shorts as well as sandels and cery a surf board and lap top and is white
charactor request
pyramid scarab w145 c/wd
pyramid= like earth but on the edge thing have bumps and outer area is like a pyrimid looking like
scarab= have like 3 waves one the outer ring to look like wings flaping and a nearly curcle opening that goes around the bunps on pyramid
w145= like claw145 but have 4 not 3 and is curved more
c/wp= have 6 things that is going inwards but not conected/all 6 things come together and lok like a 6 sided pyramid but wide
specal moves are scarab swarm and wing wind wack
scarab storm is like aqueraus specal move
wing wind wick is a move whear the user first go to the center of the stadeom and shoots the whole surface of the stadeom with wind and knocks out the oponent
character is always wearing a black tshirt and shorts as well as sandels and carry a lap top and is white and come and goes as he please
name: jack
nickname:ninjack
pyramid scarab w145 c/wd
pyramid= like earth but on the edge thing have bumps and outer area is like a pyrimid looking like
scarab= have like 3 waves one the outer ring to look like wings flaping and a nearly curcle opening that goes around the bunps on pyramid
w145= like claw145 but have 4 not 3 and is curved more
c/wp= have 6 things that is going inwards but not conected/all 6 things come together and lok like a 6 sided pyramid but wide
specal moves are scarab swarm and wing wind wack
scarab storm is like aqueraus specal move
wing wind wick is a move whear the user first go to the center of the stadeom and shoots the whole surface of the stadeom with wind and knocks out the oponent
character is always wearing a black tshirt and shorts as well as sandels and carry a lap top and is white and come and goes as he please
name: jack
nickname:ninjack
@ the blader man
Sorry, not accepted.
Sorry, not accepted.
Post: #20
Hey here is an evil character request.
Name : Makusouto Heminiko
Ethnic : Korean
Age : 13
Bey : Hell Kerbecs STS145MWD
STS = Steel Smasher
MWD = Metal Wide Defense
Moves : Hell Blast - A huge area of flames cover the whole bey dish and sends the bey flying losing its spin and power.
Hell Gate - 2 doors appear causing the bit beast to come out and get wrapped around by chains and bitten by Kerbecs
Hey here is an evil character request.
Name : Makusouto Heminiko
Ethnic : Korean
Age : 13
Bey : Hell Kerbecs STS145MWD
STS = Steel Smasher
MWD = Metal Wide Defense
Moves : Hell Blast - A huge area of flames cover the whole bey dish and sends the bey flying losing its spin and power.
Hell Gate - 2 doors appear causing the bit beast to come out and get wrapped around by chains and bitten by Kerbecs
I like the story so far, keep it up!
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it's a pretty good story.
i like it but needs some more plot it is all bey battles
charactor request
name:daryl
bio:a little sneaky and creepy. do not talk much. wear a gray jacket with the hat thing on with a little blond hair stinking out from it out in front. jacket unziped, a red button up shirt and blue jeans as well. have sunglasses on always
bey:vortex spider s145 c
vortex= 2 slanted things that goes all the way around the top and meet at the top
spider f=a spider on the right and only 4 legs showing
spider e=have 4 bump things on both sides that say spiders on them
s145= 8 springs that shots low attacks from hitting it
c= coiled up spring to a hlat hole looking thing
specal move= jumping spider bite= coil un coilsand jump towords the opponints bey and press it into the ground and then jumps back and the coil coils up again
charactor request
name:daryl
bio:a little sneaky and creepy. do not talk much. wear a gray jacket with the hat thing on with a little blond hair stinking out from it out in front. jacket unziped, a red button up shirt and blue jeans as well. have sunglasses on always
bey:vortex spider s145 c
vortex= 2 slanted things that goes all the way around the top and meet at the top
spider f=a spider on the right and only 4 legs showing
spider e=have 4 bump things on both sides that say spiders on them
s145= 8 springs that shots low attacks from hitting it
c= coiled up spring to a hlat hole looking thing
specal move= jumping spider bite= coil un coilsand jump towords the opponints bey and press it into the ground and then jumps back and the coil coils up again
(Mar. 10, 2011 10:49 PM)L-Drago rules Wrote:can you tell me why he is not right(Mar. 10, 2011 7:31 PM)the blader man Wrote:He's not right for the story.(Mar. 09, 2011 9:41 PM)L-Drago rules Wrote: @ the blader man
Sorry, not accepted.
ok but can you tell me why or at least make him in to a ether a sub main charactor like sora or a cameo charactor
Name: Jayson Gonzales
Bey: Neo Hydrax Rw90 hf
Personalty: Cool and colected, a bit like Sora
bey bio: Neo wheel is a lot like Dranzer except the metal pads are a little longer and curve a little at the right ends
Hidrax ring is like a cross of pegasis and l-drago. Two heads of hydras are on each half of the ring. Their wings are behind and attached to the torso. There is also the tail of each hydra tha the other hydra is trying to bite.
Rw stands for right wing. This allows the bey to hop or move in short bursts of speed.
If you don't know what hf is, you don't know beyblade.
Direction: clockwise
Special move: Terra Voltage Strikeshot
The bey gathers masive amounts of stacic in the wheel. The spin track starts to boost the bey with speed. When the beys make contact, the static is unleashed, KOing all beys in the stadum except for itself and teammates. Odds of dodging this attack are 1 to 100.
Clothes: he has a red cap with the letters "WBBA" in black. The cap is worn backwards. He has a slight tan. He would look like the model for Abercrombie. He sports a red vest over a white T-shirt. He wears black jeans and has holders for his bey, string launcher, launcher grip, and his beypointer. He wears black sunglasses and fingerless gloves, has a long scar on his right arm, and has one red pupil and the other blue, meant to represent the good and evil inside him. Spooky, huh?
Bey: Neo Hydrax Rw90 hf
Personalty: Cool and colected, a bit like Sora
bey bio: Neo wheel is a lot like Dranzer except the metal pads are a little longer and curve a little at the right ends
Hidrax ring is like a cross of pegasis and l-drago. Two heads of hydras are on each half of the ring. Their wings are behind and attached to the torso. There is also the tail of each hydra tha the other hydra is trying to bite.
Rw stands for right wing. This allows the bey to hop or move in short bursts of speed.
If you don't know what hf is, you don't know beyblade.
Direction: clockwise
Special move: Terra Voltage Strikeshot
The bey gathers masive amounts of stacic in the wheel. The spin track starts to boost the bey with speed. When the beys make contact, the static is unleashed, KOing all beys in the stadum except for itself and teammates. Odds of dodging this attack are 1 to 100.
Clothes: he has a red cap with the letters "WBBA" in black. The cap is worn backwards. He has a slight tan. He would look like the model for Abercrombie. He sports a red vest over a white T-shirt. He wears black jeans and has holders for his bey, string launcher, launcher grip, and his beypointer. He wears black sunglasses and fingerless gloves, has a long scar on his right arm, and has one red pupil and the other blue, meant to represent the good and evil inside him. Spooky, huh?
I Was updating.
SRY
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“What’s your name?†I asked the blader. “Mine’s Umi Iruka.â€
“Raiden.†he replied.
“Oh, got to go now. Good match by the way.†I said.
“Thanks.†he replied. Then I walked away. And then I saw a poster for a tournament in California. Since I lived in Japan, at first I thought it was too far away. Then I saw the reward for winning; 200000 beypoints. Later that night, I decided to fly to California and take stops around the world to explore and meet new bladers. The next morning, I boarded the plane. I sat down and the plane took off. After about a ½ hour in, two people got out of their seats and walked over to me. They both had black t-shirts and black jeans. One had twin kantanas and wore a black cloak with silver flames; he had black hair. The other one had a blue cloak with silver flames; she also had black hair.
“Hi.†one said.
“Hi! “What are your names?†I asked them.
“Inzuma Inzori. This is my twin sister, Sonai Inzori.†he replied.
“Do you want to battle us?†Inzuma asked.
“On a plane? Sure!†I replied.
“Wait!†someone said. I turned around and saw Shinpi.
“I’ll do it!†Shinpi said.
“Shinpi! What are you doing here?†I asked him.
“I heard that you were going and I wanted to come with you. I thought I could help you in battle.†he replied. Then he pulled out his bey, put it on its launcher and inserted the ripcord. They did the same. “3! 2! 1! Go shoot!†they yelled.
TO BE CONTINUED
@ the blader man
Sorry, not accepted. Again, he's not right for the story.
@ asianblader101
Accepted.
I AM NOT TAKING ANYMORE CHARACTER REQUESTS FOR NOW. IF YOUR CHARACTER HAS BEEN ACCEPTED HE/SHE WILL STILL APPEAR AS PLANNED.
“Raiden.†he replied.
“Oh, got to go now. Good match by the way.†I said.
“Thanks.†he replied. Then I walked away. And then I saw a poster for a tournament in California. Since I lived in Japan, at first I thought it was too far away. Then I saw the reward for winning; 200000 beypoints. Later that night, I decided to fly to California and take stops around the world to explore and meet new bladers. The next morning, I boarded the plane. I sat down and the plane took off. After about a ½ hour in, two people got out of their seats and walked over to me. They both had black t-shirts and black jeans. One had twin kantanas and wore a black cloak with silver flames; he had black hair. The other one had a blue cloak with silver flames; she also had black hair.
“Hi.†one said.
“Hi! “What are your names?†I asked them.
“Inzuma Inzori. This is my twin sister, Sonai Inzori.†he replied.
“Do you want to battle us?†Inzuma asked.
“On a plane? Sure!†I replied.
“Wait!†someone said. I turned around and saw Shinpi.
“I’ll do it!†Shinpi said.
“Shinpi! What are you doing here?†I asked him.
“I heard that you were going and I wanted to come with you. I thought I could help you in battle.†he replied. Then he pulled out his bey, put it on its launcher and inserted the ripcord. They did the same. “3! 2! 1! Go shoot!†they yelled.
TO BE CONTINUED
@ the blader man
Sorry, not accepted. Again, he's not right for the story.
@ asianblader101
Accepted.
I AM NOT TAKING ANYMORE CHARACTER REQUESTS FOR NOW. IF YOUR CHARACTER HAS BEEN ACCEPTED HE/SHE WILL STILL APPEAR AS PLANNED.
Next chapter up today/tomorrow.
ok at least can you tell me exactly why they are not right for the story