Sparta: This by far...is the most positive review I ever had. Thanks!

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Sparta: This by far...is the most positive review I ever had. Thanks!

Haha sure Just make sure you work on the things I told you about, and it should improve your stories tenfold (TBH, it's already pretty good though)!!

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it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Hey, by the way, when do you want me to write the next chapter and what do you want it to be on? Just PM me.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Hey, beybladerpotter, I just read your whole story, and I must say it's AWESOME!!!!! XD
also I have a character request:

name: Drizzt (pronounced drizzit) Do'Urden
bey: scimitar panther ed130 rf
description: bey fusion wheel is like cyber, only it has a sharp scimitar blade coming out a little (these are on a ring and spin freely). energy ring is purple with black panthers on either side and have white eyes.
special move: scimitar claw. a large black panther comes out and slashes with claws made of scimitars.

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IMMA KILL U WITH MA GREATSWORD!!!!!
Beyblading rocks!

Hey BP,mind if I submit a whole 4-man team as china's secret BEYBLADE police force?

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I don't mind. I must say, it has been a while since I continued this.

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[Novel] The Andromeda Files : The End Of Eternity

here they are

Name: Izuma Inzori

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BeyBlade: Silent Samurai MKCH85 WRHF

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
MKCH85: Metal Kantana Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, 4 metal kantanas surrounding a CH85 (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011

Name: Sonai Inzori

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BeyBlade: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boost”: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannon”: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannon”: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Horn”: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing it instantly.
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011

Name: Hatachi Inzori

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BeyBlade: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 LRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shield”: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Ramp”: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes” it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoon”: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Blade”: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011

Name: Rez Inzori

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Beyblade: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red magma, & gold SAURIAN)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shield”: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeout”: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Grave”: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
List of team attacks:
“Lava/Lightning Trap Grind”: Electric Berserker & Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
“Hydro Shock”: Hydro Narwhale & Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
“Rock Strike”: Hydro Narwhale & Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
“Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Silent Samurai & Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Dive”: Silent Samurai & Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Dive”: Silent Samurai & Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition.

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Hey BP,mind if I submit a whole 4-man team as china's secret BEYBLADE police force?

what the hell.


anyways, when's the next chapter? of course, we Filipino have classes, so we can't do much here in the WBO....so might be next week or so?

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Hey BP,mind if I submit a whole 4-man team as china's secret BEYBLADE police force?

what the hell.


anyways, when's the next chapter? of course, we Filipino have classes, so we can't do much here in the WBO....so might be next week or so?

LOL...Probably yes...next week or so......I probably need help with all this. I don't have a lot of time eh....

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i can help Co-Write

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i can help Co-Write

I bet Sparta has been lurking around mysteriously and is already writing the next chapter....

yeah, I'll help too

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i can help Co-Write

Thanks to you then. I'm also writing another story in BF too so that takes time. Should I post that story too? I don't know....

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[Novel] The Andromeda Files : The End Of Eternity

Yeah, post the other story here too

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Hey, beybladerpotter, I just read your whole story, and I must say it's AWESOME!!!!! XD
also I have a character request:

name: Drizzt (pronounced drizzit) Do'Urden
bey: scimitar panther ed130 rf
description: bey fusion wheel is like cyber, only it has a sharp scimitar blade coming out a little (these are on a ring and spin freely). energy ring is purple with black panthers on either side and have white eyes.
special move: scimitar claw. a large black panther comes out and slashes with claws made of scimitars.

hey, beybladerpotter, did u see my character request?

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IMMA KILL U WITH MA GREATSWORD!!!!!
Beyblading rocks!

Hey, beybladerpotter, I just read your whole story, and I must say it's AWESOME!!!!! XD
also I have a character request:

name: Drizzt (pronounced drizzit) Do'Urden
bey: scimitar panther ed130 rf
description: bey fusion wheel is like cyber, only it has a sharp scimitar blade coming out a little (these are on a ring and spin freely). energy ring is purple with black panthers on either side and have white eyes.
special move: scimitar claw. a large black panther comes out and slashes with claws made of scimitars.

hey, beybladerpotter, did u see my character request?

I did. ^Adding these words so it isn't a one word-post.

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[Novel] The Andromeda Files : The End Of Eternity

ok. I wuz just wondering cuz' no one responded to it

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IMMA KILL U WITH MA GREATSWORD!!!!!
Beyblading rocks!

um...

I waited ALL SUMMER to read some more of this story, and when I look at it, it doesn't look like it's changed!

confused......

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IMMA KILL U WITH MA GREATSWORD!!!!!
Beyblading rocks!

i can help Co-Write

I bet Sparta has been lurking around mysteriously and is already writing the next chapter....

yeah, I'll help too

Oh noz, I've been caught!

Drat, foiled again!

Wait, did you want me to co-write? If you want, I'd be more than happy to ^^.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

i can help Co-Write

I bet Sparta has been lurking around mysteriously and is already writing the next chapter....

yeah, I'll help too

Oh noz, I've been caught!

Drat, foiled again!

Wait, did you want me to co-write? If you want, I'd be more than happy to ^^.

Who said I wanted you to co-write? And truly sorry EpicPwnage...you could just read more of my stories..check my profile and my threads..

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Can you put this bey in please: Blizzard Raptor 115WF

I think your story is brilliant. Its like you've been to private school

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Bring Back Bluezee!

How about my character
Name:Jero
Bey:Burst Angel DF145 SD
Side:Good
Age:13
Look: Short black spiky hair with red streaks, wears black hoodie with a red J on the back with a blue t-shirt underneath.Cargo pants with white hi-tops
Personality: Usually quiet but goes crazy when losing a battle.
Beyblade:Face:A pair of orange wings with the word angel in black the base is red.Clear wheel:like pegasis 2 but black with orange in the middle.Fusion wheel:Like Burn execpt with 4 gaps filled with a curved spike facing left although this is a right spin bey.Spin track and tip:Clear red.
Sprcial move:Angel's Sword:Goes straight foreward and hits the bey into the sky the jumps and slashes at the bey and knocks it to the stadium making a huge crater.

i'VE GOT ANOTHER CHARACTER!
Name- Yara
bey- holy paladin
appearance-

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bey appearance-
face- blue with a sword going behind a shield with a gold dragon(on shield)
energy ring- (color:silver) two paladins(knights to those who don't know) with red capes along there backs circling the face
fusion wheel- holy is almost like a ninja star but the points are shorter and have a gold trim. on each of these points is the same design as on the face but with a blue circle around it
spintrack- 45 with a LOT of shArp little spikes coming out.
performance tip- (color-gold) rf

special attacks- healing jump- jumps on top of other bey and steals about 90% of its spin to heal itself.
divine thow- chases other bey and throws it in the air, then slamming 5 feet into the ground.

finisher- holy judgement- forces other bey to stay in the middle, gouges a star into the ground, then a circle around the star(these glow a blinding white when finished). it then jumps onto the bey so it flips in the air, slams it a few more times and when the other bey is exactly upside-down slams it onto ground. the light goes up so you cant see the beys. when it dies down, palidin is spinning on the other beys performance tip.

Friends- drizzt do' urden
(note: the bey is an attack type)

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IMMA KILL U WITH MA GREATSWORD!!!!!
Beyblading rocks!

Dang I havent been on here in ages

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TEAM SHADOWKLAN, CANADA, FOREVER!

Hi! I hope I'm not to late but....
Name:Gaia
Age:16
Bey: Sabre Sentinel RS90(RUSH90) U(ultimate drive)
Parts description: sabre metal wheel is similar to the Quetz wheel but being 3 sided instead. ,with the 'claws' being dual-handed sabre's(one on each side) and with the tiny 'wings' being arm guards. There are several gaps to allow the track to 'attach' to the MW, similair to hell kerbecs. Rush90 is a low track with 3 chunks being supported upwards. They are covered in rubber like meteo l-Drago with rollers on top. It can be flipped upside down to allow the rollers to touch the ground, stabilizing it more. Sentinel is a chrome CW with 3sides. Each side has a piece of knight's armor and a helmet. Ultimate Drive is a tip which can change between WB,CS And MS by voice command. All the tips are upgraded by somewhat. The starting tip is WB, which can then pop open in half in a certain way, sending the beyblade flying upwards to protect it, and then exposing CS. MS then juts out of CS. Ms can retract and pop out again, sending the bey flying once more, allowing WB to encase the other tips.
Special move: Surprising back-stab(L spin) , Sword smash (R spin) and Shield steal(protects with it's arm guards and steals spin with RS90's rubber. L and R spin)
Face:2swords forming a cross with a sentinel helmet in front.
And if you don't mind EpicPwnage, could I make Gaia Yara's brother? They could be lone duo team on neither side

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And..finisher is when it goes into CS mode and RuSH90 faces the ground(rollers facing ground) and goes on a ver fast rampage around the stadium. MS makes it jump around crazily and the swords and guards pop out, forming vortexes around the stadium, throwing the opp. bey around the stadium and getting smashed .
(P.S L-spin mode causes a lot of recoil, thus it us mostly used on RS90's down mode to stabilize it. It is used in upper mode to spin steal in L-spin mode with Shield steal)

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this stories pretty much dead

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