I am really proud of my story. Please I want more people to read it. By the way new Chapter,Woohooo
The Bey that spun forever...
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its a good story i like it
Chapter 8 is out guys. Please comment if you read the story.
I wan´t more people to read this story. c´mon. And if you like it or not it doesnt matter. I just want to see if it is a good story or not. PLease comment.
New chapter guys!
Please! I want more people to read my story!
Character development looks rushed in some parts, so as soon as they meet this guy named Dash they are suddenly versing some orso siblings, Doing a great job, just gotta slow it down a bit.
Its an interesting story. when will chapter 9 come out?
btw do you accept character request?
btw do you accept character request?
Yes I accept character requests!