[Story] Unite the Nation!! {4000+ Views!}

Poll: How is this sequel?

AMAZING!!
67.57%
25
Good!
21.62%
8
Eh, 50/50...
2.70%
1
Bad...
0%
0
STOP MAKING STORIES!!!!
8.11%
3
Total: 100% 37 vote(s)
(Jul. 21, 2012  10:19 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: That was awesome!
Poor Cloud.. Chocked_2
I am so excitied XD

There are too many contradicting emoticons to phrases here... XD
(Jul. 21, 2012  10:47 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:
(Jul. 21, 2012  10:19 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: That was awesome!
Poor Cloud.. Chocked_2
I am so excitied XD

There are too many contradicting emoticons to phrases here... XD

Lol.
So, here's Chapter 12!!!

Epic chapter!
Here's Chapter 13!! ChinaBlade, mind doing me a solid and forcing trying to get others to post on this?

Pretty good chapter! Although, make sure they're not ALWAYS winning. Tongue_out
And I guess I'll force try to get some people.
(Jul. 22, 2012  10:03 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Pretty good chapter! Although, make sure they're not ALWAYS winning. Tongue_out
And I guess I'll force try to get some people.

I will, calm down. Just wait a little, when we get to some really popular teams...
Yeah! I love Aries!
Great Chapter Bro
Smug
(Jul. 22, 2012  10:10 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I will, calm down. Just wait a little, when we get to some really popular teams...

I am calm Pinching_eyes_2
Here's Chapter 14!!

I'm filled with excitement and suspence Pinching_eyes_2 This must be how it is to read my story! Oh and this is for DefStamina

If anyone else read that I will kill do something that won't harm you to you. Yeah. That makes sense.
Here's Chapter 15!!

Nice! I can't wait to see Cloud's battle! Smile
Here's Chapter 16!!!

OMG! OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! Roderich! Eeeeek! XD Ivan... You are so dead. And 1 thing. Roderich's like 20... XD
(Jul. 25, 2012  3:54 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: OMG! OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! Roderich! Eeeeek! XD Ivan... You are so dead. And 1 thing. Roderich's like 20... XD

Don't give a carp, he's 19 and I say so XD

(Jul. 25, 2012  3:55 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2012  3:54 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: OMG! OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! Roderich! Eeeeek! XD Ivan... You are so dead. And 1 thing. Roderich's like 20... XD

Don't give a carp, he's 19 and I say so XD


Oh ok XD My bad XD
Here's Chapter 17!! ChinaBlade please force ask people to post again, please...

I suggest you do paragraph by paragraph rather than lines of dialogue.
Epic chapter. I can't wait to see the battles!
(Jul. 26, 2012  3:14 AM)Aura Wrote: I suggest you do paragraph by paragraph rather than lines of dialogue.

Why do paragraphs at a time? It crunches everything up I've been told in my last story, so when I space it out, it's easier to read... Besides, I personally think spacing makes it neater and easier to keep track of who's talking...

Anyways, Here's Chapter 18!!! (WARNING: Mention of Job Ball in this story. UGH!!! Angry)

Epic chapter! Can't wait to see the final battle with the Czech...
I think I spelled that right.
I got Chapter 19!!!

o_o I wonder who it is...
Great chapter!
Epically Intense!!!
I am sooooo looking froward to the next chapter!