[Story] Unite the Nation!! {4000+ Views!}

Poll: How is this sequel?

AMAZING!!
67.57%
25
Good!
21.62%
8
Eh, 50/50...
2.70%
1
Bad...
0%
0
STOP MAKING STORIES!!!!
8.11%
3
Total: 100% 37 vote(s)
Ya! I always love a good story cross-over!
Great Chapter!
Can't wait until the next one Smile
I didn't understand why dan the England guy drops his head when he says his name.
Look up "Dan Wheldon" In Wikipedia. You'll understand if you put it all together...

Also, since I've been busy, I will have chapter 35 done tomorrow!
Sorry for the double post, but here's chapter 35!!!

Your spoiler tags ... are broken.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
(Aug. 14, 2012  12:23 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Your spoiler tags ... are broken.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

It was an accident... I'll fix it in a minute...
Thank you, I almost internally exploded because of my frustration :o
(Aug. 14, 2012  12:31 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Thank you, I almost internally exploded because of my frustration :o

Don't internally explode!!! I need someone to judge my awesome backstory I sent like three times! Gasp
Epic battle!
Ah! Alfred! You let me down! Angry
Eh, I knew that was gonna happen. XD
Karan!?!?!?
Y U NO WIN?
Just joking...
Great Chapter!
Here's Chapter 36!!!

Oh snap...
Ivan...
I thought Shawn taught you better than that! Angry
Cloud!!!!!!!
Great Chapter!
Can't wait for the battle against Russia!
Wow I just noticed my story started like a week or two after yours and it has more views and replys... XD
Sorry man. XD
Dude dan wheldon is dead But anyways great so far cant wait for the next part.
(Aug. 16, 2012  5:26 PM)n0.oNe Wrote: Dude dan wheldon is dead But anyways great so far cant wait for the next part.

Yeah, I based the character's name off of him. He hung his head because he was named after a dead IndyCar racer. Get the logic?
(Aug. 16, 2012  3:41 PM)Frieza Wrote: Wow I just noticed my story started like a week or two after yours and it has more views and replys... XD
Sorry man. XD

Unhappy
(Aug. 16, 2012  10:21 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:
(Aug. 16, 2012  3:41 PM)Frieza Wrote: Wow I just noticed my story started like a week or two after yours and it has more views and replys... XD
Sorry man. XD

Unhappy

I'm sorry.... Unhappy
And omg!
I knew I heard Dan's name from somewhere before!
I love IndyCars!
But I like Nascar more. XD
When will the next chapter come out?
(Aug. 17, 2012  4:05 PM)n0.oNe Wrote: When will the next chapter come out?

I plan on having it sometime tomorrow. Gotta busy schedule with college classes, also it's almost near the end, so I gotta space out chapters...
Sorry for the double post, but here's chapter 37!!!

This is told from Cloud's Point of View! Check it out!!!

UH OH!
I hope Cloud stays safe XD
Super Chapter!
Great chapter! I understand ur problem with ur classes. I'm only 12 and i go through all that already.
Here's chapter 38!!! Time for some excitement to start!!!

Awesome!
I can't wait to read Cloud's battle!
YAY!
At least it wasn't a loss!
I HAVE FAITH IN YOU CLOUD!