This story is told from the Another Road from Beyblade Zero G

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One day the sun is turning into the face of Nemesis,in another place Zero is training with Shinobu and Benkei and they looking to the sun,and sun the is talk,Hey all of people in this Universe,soon i'm gonna back and you all gonna death.Oh my God,Zero say.We must find the legend bladers,Benkei say But how,Shinobu say.We gonna search them in this whole Universe! Benkei say.And the journey is begin.

Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Always put " " when someone is talking. Also add more description and make the chapters much longer. Im not trying to be mean, im just trying to give suggestions.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)