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(Story): Beyblade Zero G (Another Road) - Saramanda - Sep. 19, 2012
This story is told from the Another Road from Beyblade Zero G
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RE: (Story): Beyblade Zero G (Another Road) - Dual - Sep. 19, 2012
Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Always put " " when someone is talking. Also add more description and make the chapters much longer. Im not trying to be mean, im just trying to give suggestions.