(Story) Beyblade: Ethan's Quest Chapter 22 (Not official name)

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Hey guys! Well, yet again, I've failed to write a story. I'm going to keep trying, and hoping this will be better. In this, it will have a plot similar to Season 1 of the Original Series. I'll have much longer chapters, more dialogue, and I'll be more descriptive. I'll also try to focus on different characters too. Now, lets focus our attention to the young blader Ethan Lake.
Characters:
Chapter 1, The Story Begins!


Chapter 2, Bye-Bye, Scorpio

Chapter 3, Ethan takes PE, and the Mysterious Libra Appears!

Chapter 4 Clash! Ethan VS Possessed Derek!

Chapter 5, Ethan fights the Quetz Master!

Sorry for the short chapter! I couldn't think of anymore to write.


Chapter 6, Ethan, in Love? (Click to View)

Chapter 7, Ethan and One, the new Maids! (Click to View)

Chapter 8, Jay Returns, Clash in the Dome! (Click to View)

Chapter 9 Qualifiers Begin! (Click to View)


Chapter 10, the Titan Kronos attacks! The Mystery Armored Dragon appears! (Click to View)



Chapter 11 Team Dark Flare's Ambush! (Click to View)
PART 2


Chapter 12 Finally, The True Qualifiers! ... Uncle Frank? (Click to View)


Chapter 13 Aqua Battle, Ethan Versus the Armored Dragon!!! (Click to View)


Chapter 14 Rival Reo appears! Extensive Training! (Click to View)


Chapter 15 Kronos's Counter Attack! Fatal Battle, Death Kronos Versus Ethan! (Click to View)



Chapter 16 Evolution... With Beys? Fight the Eonis Bladers! (Click to View)



Chapter 17 Takairu's Turn! (Click to View)



Chapter 18 Takairu's Quest (Click to View)



Chapter 19 Fierce Fight! Rivals Ethan and Reo battle in the wilderness! (Click to View)



Chapter 20. Lost... (Click to View)


Chapter 21, The Invading Spy! (Click to View)
[spoiler=Chapter 22, The Darkness Within. (Told by Ethan)]

Coming soon...
Sorry for double posting, but chapter 4 is up, and still no-one has replied. That makes me sad Unhappy
(Sep. 30, 2012  4:12 AM)angelusbichi Wrote: interesting
Try and put more content into your posts

ANYWHO,it does seem interresting and I look forward to reading later chapters

Thanks guys! PM me if you want to know more about my stories, writing plans, etc.
Name: reo claw
Age: 14
Bey: (Current) beat Leone 105WD
Bio: grump, acts a lot like leon and kyoya. only battles worthy bladers.
Design: dark brown jacket, green eyes, red cargo pants, dark green shirt, with tall and spiky black hair.
Okay! I'm not sure what chapter I'll put him in, and did you mean Ryo Claw?
(Sep. 30, 2012  4:16 AM)Flash Goreim Wrote:
(Sep. 30, 2012  4:12 AM)angelusbichi Wrote: interesting
Try and put more content into your posts

ANYWHO,it does seem interresting and I look forward to reading later chapters

sorry master, and @drigerkai the name one to me sorta does not make sense to me
I'm pretty sure the name is spelled Ryo.
(Sep. 30, 2012  6:40 PM)DrigerKai Wrote: I'm pretty sure the name is spelled Ryo.

were u talking to me?
(Sep. 30, 2012  4:04 PM)DrigerKai Wrote: Okay! I'm not sure what chapter I'll put him in, and did you mean Ryo Claw?

no, its reo claw, reo is the japanese leo
Ah, OK. He's going to be the leader of the main characters team.
The story line is good but dialogue goes
"blah"said blah
"blah blah blah"replied blah blah
No, that's not how it works. Working on chapter 8.
Why is this name so similar to mine?(Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest) How did you think of that name?
I couldn't think of anything else, I tried a bunch of different things, and they didn't appeal to me. I didn't intentionally take the idea for the title. I'm probably going to change the name anyways.
Sorry for double posting, but Chapter 10 is here! Its not very important, but at the end it introduces an important new character.
I'm all the way to chapter 18, already. No one has said ANYTHING. This chapter is a short one, but important to the final plot.
This story is much better then my old ones, so don't judge by the older ones.
i like one he cool but i know how it is for your brother to be better than him so one is awesome to me even if he loses all of his matches in the story plus his lost and destroyed beyblades and i hope he comes back realllyyyyyyyy strong in this story
He might, bur probably not till the Championships are over, or in between them.
Meh, lack of detail. KIU!
(Nov. 03, 2012  4:57 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: Meh, lack of detail. KIU!

Well, thanks. I've been working on that.
Anywho, I made chapter 19, and there's both a cliff, and a cliffhanger.
Also, I named the chapters. Some are important, and some are for laughs.
Chapter 21 up!
This chapter includes a close counterpart to Faust, who also uses a Tempo bey.
finealy sobidy is makeing a book abot beyblade" YAY"
(Nov. 08, 2012  6:05 PM)werewolfking Wrote: Finally somebody is making a book about Beyblade, yay!

There's tons of Beyblade stories on the WBO.