[Story] BEYSPIES

Poll: What did you think?

Derp
31.43%
11
Derp
14.29%
5
Derp
22.86%
8
Derp
14.29%
5
Derp
17.14%
6
Total: 100% 35 vote(s)
I can write a story … but can I write a Beyblade story? I tried to make it as non-cliché as possible. I’ll post a chapter every two days. Or if more people want it to be posted faster … I’ll post it faster Tongue_out Don’t forget to leave a comment or two, lol.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
wow. nice story. cannot wait until chapter 2! I might see a bey there. It defenately makes me want to read more.
EDIT: YEAGH! First Reply! my life has meaning now.
EDIT EDIT: I remember when people posted in my storys(besides me or my brother)
(Sep. 17, 2012  2:01 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: wow. nice story. cannot wait until chapter 2! I might see a bey there.

Thanks. The beys will come in chapter two. They're special beys though, so you might want to stay tuned Eee
Wow awesome his job is really paranoid and its funny that he goes into an out of order stall
(Sep. 17, 2012  2:13 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: its funny that he goes into an out of order stall

Well ... its not really "out of order". Its just like that so no one else would go in it Tongue_out
Wow, this story has the potential to be as good as some I've seen (obviously not better than mine lol). Keep it up!!
(Sep. 17, 2012  2:01 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: EDIT: YEAGH! First Reply! my life has meaning now.

lol, I posted the second chapter. Maybe it has more meaning?

I'm done editing the second chapter. I guess it could be posted now. Please excuse any spelling mistakes/grammar (if there are any).

@Def, thanks Smile
Unlike some other stories I've read that I have to force myself to read I read through thi as smooth as butter. Another great story ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)
(Sep. 17, 2012  2:49 AM)Néar Wrote: Unlike some other stories I've read that I have to force myself to read I read through thi as smooth as butter. Another great story Inso-oops-ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

Thanks Smile

I'll get the next chapter up afterschool.
Very Nice story! This story reminds me a lot about Spy Kids and Men In Black. Keep it up!
Thanks peeps. Next two chapters are posted. I finished the whole story but I'm going to stick to posting a bit at a time.

I assure you, its really messed up.
Chapter 5 added!
Chapter 6 added!
Chapter 7 added!
Chapter 8 added!


Enjoy!~
Sarah, everytime I see "mines" I flinch, and every single one the words that are supposed to be "mine" are "mines" Pinching_eyes

Please fix that, lol. My eyes are bleeeeedingggg.
(Sep. 24, 2012  7:38 AM)Tech Wrote: Sarah, everytime I see "mines" I flinch, and every single one the words that are supposed to be "mine" are "mines" Pinching_eyes

Please fix that, lol. My eyes are bleeeeedingggg.

This story is mines! Haha, I will try to to a complete search+replace soon.

Chapters 9-11 added!